What is your opinion?
Jaw dropping
"The story line is very intriguing It gets a little confusing with dialogue between people. Read through by several people "
Nice
"I think the boy has too much anger issues and gets worked up for nothing but anyways i love the story! "
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Five days
"I like the story so much but in aime ways I think that the girl Addison is not right she is behaving so weird coz she is with her boyfriend,she is safe so she should have to listen to him,and otherwise the story is nice in the beginning,I didn't thought that it would be so detailed,I love the genuineness of the prince and the affection towards her,but the word "leaving"is used sooooooooo many times,which irritated me,coz love is just the.....can't explan in words,but i loved it.......please do update this......"
Prince
"Interesting"
Review👏👏
"It started out pretty good but as time went Addison started to be to annoying and the Prince was being too abusive "
Meh?
"As the target audience for this book, I didn't like it all that much, just because of the unhealthy message it would send to young women should they read it- oh, your Prince will like you if you let him dress you up like a doll, let him do everything, etc. Your grammar is fine, but you left a few 'i's uncapilatized here and there. That will automatically put me off a book, but that's just me. Also, it seemse like the relationship dynamic is incredibly repetitive- Yulin orders Addy around, Addy gets upset, Yulin gets mad, Addy starts crying, Yulin starts to yell, and they make up afterward. "
Good idea, needs work
"A technical glitch spoilt the beginning for me: when you start in an imaginary country, you need to locate it firmly in space and time. For the first few paragraphs I knew we were in the present day because of the bus, but I had no idea if we were in a fictitious European country in our own world, or a different universe where the USA is a kingdom. Since the AC is an international event, a few lines to set the geography could be part of Addy's infodump about it, and then we know where we stand. Though in European kingdoms today royalty doesn't have anything like that sort of power (there are Arab kingdoms where the Crown Prince can simply order people sent to jail without a hint of due process, but they're not the benign nation you describe), so you'd also need some explanation of that oddity. OK, two glitches: it's never clear quite what the AC is, or even what AC stands for. At first it sounds like it's just within Fannelia, then it's international; it has an athletic element, but our characters never take part in that (because they pull out before?) It's a good excuse for a meet-cute, and for forcing your couple to stay together when they fall out, but it needs work. That said, I kept on reading because it's so refreshing to see a prince-and-pauper romance where the Prince is not a brooding noble hero who takes charge and saves the broken heroine by his manly strength, but (much more plausibly!) a spoilt brat with control issues, who has to be hit over the head a good many times before he even starts to get a clue, and is only just forgiveable because he keeps trying to do right. We need more romances like that!"
