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Poetry : FOR JULIA, FOR DAVID.

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Summary

DARK CLOUDS Summer, spring, winter and fall It’s been four seasons and you are still my all Hailstorms, Dark clouds, thunder and lightning Replace the spark in my eyes – Will you ever like me? I don’t know how long I can keep up with this charade Loving you is painful like being stomped on in a parade Days and days pass and my hope wears thin Like a dying candle that’s lost its paraffin Maybe all I need is to let go and get closure Because you continuously make me lose my composure Will we ever happen?

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

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My head is bowed, with my feet clenched to my body.

Sitting at a corner where no one could see me.

Static and Suppressed under the terror of the night;

I heard his soft voice linger in the atmosphere.

I turned my head slowly for that soothing sound;

But it was no use, i was in a pitch black room.

Suddenly, i felt his warm palm on my face.

As he came closer, his scent, in my head;

i couldn't trace. it was beautiful.

He knelt right in front of me,

And asked if i would stand with him.

I had lost my voice to fear,

But i squeaked a yes.

Slowly, we stood together and for the life of me,

I couldn't fathom why i trusted him so.

Then he led me to a meadow,

where the rays of the sun danced in colors.

Wait, that's it - he smelt of lilacs.

He twirled me around and we danced,

To the melody of a sax.

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