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What Is It About Him?

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Summary

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Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

His Hazel eyes

His hazel eyes

His hazel eyes are like gold. Those eyes he has are surrounded by a dark ring that shields the gold of his eyes. When I look into his eyes I fall in love with them each time. They say the eyes are the windows to the soul and when I look into those golden eyes you have I see someone who hasn't always had the best given to him. I want to give the boy I see the best of everything. When His eyes are lazily open they draw me closer because even when they are lazily gazing at me they always drown me in their warmth. I will always be in love with his hazel eyes. His face can change with age, his personality can change with wisdom, his hair can fade into a gray and no matter what time can never take away the gold in those eyes. The gold that is shielded from the darkness of this world. I love his hazel eyes.

His hazel eyes that will always be mine.

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