Passionate

"So, when writing these reviews, I never mean to be rude. With that said, you have the most important quality of a writer and that is passion which is 99% of writing. Everyone struggles with grammar unless they are a nerd so im not going to harp on that. But I want to touch base on your story writing, your plot seemed to jump around and move too quickly so I suggest slowing it down, introduce us to this world. Overall thought, this story goes beyond my expectations for fanfiction."