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The Haunting

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Summary

"Lalalala" I heard the little girls voice say " JUST LEAVE ME ALONE I shouted, the blood dripping from my face. Author Note: The slanted words like this are her thoughts, I figured you would want to know ^_^ Btw I will be updating when I can , so sorry if I don't update for a while

Genre
Horror,Mystery
Author
Empty
Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 (3 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

The Move

Skyler pov

As we pulled up to the new house I groaned.

“What is wrong dear?” My mom asked

“What’s wrong, What is wrong wow you must have forgotten, ok well let me remind you!“I stated sarcasticly staring her in the eye

“You didn’t tell me we were moving, you made me leave everything behind, and you think a bigger house is going to fix that !?!?”

My mom looked at me with what I thought was guilt but it was soon replaced with sternes as she said “Dont talk to me like that young lady you know why we had to move , it was best for us and this house is completly free with new furniture!!!”

I rolled my eyes. Yeah mom it may be free but I want my friends! I said in my head

I looked over to the window of my room and There I saw a girl with long black hair in a pink dress smiling at me.

I blinked and she was gone.

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author

It's a short story I see

4 years
author

Oh no its ongoing lol

4 years

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