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Engrossing read based on first 6 chapters.
"For me, Nollo and Callin stole the show. The MC Azul is interesting and sets the ball rolling by looking for a lost/ stolen caravan. He meets his merry band of fellow bounty hunters and gets going. The setting and descriptions are engrossing, but at times (very few times) detail heavy, especially when they focus on characters like Mia who get left behind or exposition. The plot, characterization, and motives are rather clear and every chapter advances the story, which reflects the author's skills, vivid imagination, and ability to draw in readers. Ps. I'll update the review once i finish the story."
A great fantasy read
"The story and authors style is very descriptive and with it being in a fantasy world It is a given. I can imagine it being animated! It is true that that author loves D&D style with the fantasy creatures. The story is paced just right with great sense of adventure. The plot line is compelling and fast enough to keep the reader engaged. I highly recommend this to those looking for high fantasy, D&D/ RPG games. There are a couple of Grammar/punctuation errors in the dialogue, but spelling is spot on. P.S. So sorry for my late review!"
Immerse yourself into a thrilling fantasy adventure!
"I will attest by saying, the first few chapters have me sucked in! What starts off with simply describing a peaceful village, soon turns into a suspenseful thrilling ride! I’m about 4 chapters in and I will say, this is certainly a story to add to your online library! The story has all the elements you need with unique characters, very descriptive details that teleport you to the world and of course refreshing reminders! The story elements have such a wonderful appeal and it reminds me of a beautifully written DND campaign that went from the game board to hitting the shelves (in this case the internet!). Please follow Azul and the journey that awaits him! "
I enjoyed this
"I love the plot of this novel. It reads like all those adventurous animations I always watch. The author's writing style is very descriptive, and as it is well written it pulls you into the story, making the image vivid. If you enjoy high fantasy and adventure, I would definitely recommend this. It is a unique story; different from most, yet the plot line is compelling enough for me to continue reading it. I look forward to your next update!"
I love fantasy like this
"This story is like Goblin Slayer which is a favorite anime of mine. A bunch of different warriors band together on a quest, destroying orcs and goblins along the way. It also felt like a quest from Vermintide. This book was a combination of a bunch of my favorite things. Azul’s conflict is really compelling. He’s half-orc (if I’m understanding correctly?) and also a Druid. He’s so very powerful and I loved learning about all the things he can do, but he’s still an outcast because of his heritage. He’s a unique character and I enjoyed getting to know him. The rest of the crew is interesting as well and very entertaining. Like I said, their journey and their dynamic is a lot like playing a campaign in Vermintide. The fun banter, the different abilities of the characters, the suspenseful missions and fight scenes…these are definitely all the elements that made that game popular and hopefully it’ll make this book popular too. This story has everything I like about the fantasy genre and I really enjoyed reading these chapters. "
A Great Read!
"Starting off, the concept of this story has great potential but the execution is not all the way there yet. It may be because there are not enough chapters (5 at the time of writing this review). Even so, the chapters are great. The author has a talent for pulling you into the story with extremely gorgeous descriptions easy to follow and understand. The book's readability is inspiring and even just picking it up out of nowhere taught me more about how a story can be shown and told at the same time. The author makes it work somehow. It's seriously well done on their part. However, I have a little bit of a hard time connecting to the characters. I'm just picky and fussy so don't take this too personally... I like it when characters talk a little differently from each other to help differentiate them and bring out their personality. I said this in another review of mine before, but playing into a character's race could also help a great deal even if it might be a bit cliche. For example, Orcs I imagine have tusks that could hinder speech in more ways than one so writing it in a few words here and there could make it a fun read. Or dwarves. I love these bearded-axe-loving-beer-drinkers. As can see, that too was a cliche but it is one that just goes without saying. IT'S A DWARF. (Sorry, I'm getting off-topic...) This is just what I like to do personally and is simply a suggestion on my part to help improve a reader's experience. I'm by no means demanding change, but I digress. The world is masterfully described. It feels real. It feels alive. The author has done well and as a fellow writer, they have inspired me! A nobody like me feels proud reading this work of art. "
