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Derrick Olin #3, originally published in 2007. For the first time in more than twenty years, Derrick Olin needed a vacation.  So he took one.  In the beginning it was great.  Sun, fun, the beach… and a beautiful woman he hadn’t seen in more than a decade.  Just what the doctor ordered, and just what Derrick needed.  But when an act of utter brutality leaves his lover near death, the hardcore operator is once again thrust into action, pursuing a violent and bloody course toward those who hurt her, determined to make them suffer for the pain they have caused.  And the universe will weep for anyone who gets in his way!

Status
Complete
Chapters
52
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

A Walk In The Park

I WAS ROTATING MY NECK from side to side when I heard footfalls close behind me, turned slightly to my left, and saw a small man approaching wearing a dark windbreaker, his hands in his pockets. He had close-cut dark hair and his skin had an olive tint that was fairly visible even in the low light put off by the park lamps all around us. As he approached, I could see that he was very short, not more than five-five, if that, but he walked with a confidence that made it clear he was not somebody to be taken lightly.

“Hi you doing?” I said in a friendly tone.

“All right,” he replied in a thick Boston accent. “Out kind of late tonight, pal.”

“Yeah,” I said. “You too. That accent tells me you’re not from around here.”

He smiled, but not with his eyes, and stopped next to the bench, maybe four feet from where I sat.

“Yeah, everybody can tell where I’m from once I open my mouth. Can’t place your accent though.”

“Wouldn’t believe me if I told you,” I said.

He nodded, glancing around casually, his sharp dark eyes taking everything in like a professional, which I assumed he was.

“I know what you mean,” he said nonchalantly, removing his left hand from his pocket encased in a dark leather glove, something it was far too warm to be wearing on a night like this. “They told me you was from Alabama but you sure don’t sound like it.”

Then his other hand came out of his other pocket holding a subcompact pistol that looked like some kind of Taurus .380 auto…

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