What is your opinion?
Cool Idea
"I actually enjoyed reading it and the concept of having letters was pretty cool. The only thing I would suggest is spacing out your paragraphs. It's a bit confusing when it's all cluttered, but it was a great read. Keep writing!!"
Wow!
"Just for starters, this was amazing. The letter format mixed with everyday dialogue really did move the plot along at a steady pace. The characters were crafted so beautifully. Each with depth and true, human attributes. I´ve always had a thing for accurate, proportional characters. As we´re starved of them in the world of literature. It´s only the good books, the ones that have you staying up all night binging, that have those kinds of characters. Thank you so much for allowing me to enjoy your work."
I can see this becoming an anime
"The relationship with Ren and Noa is really sweet. Noa’s backstory is haunting. The chapter that revealed what happened to her parents was my favorite because it was so tense and shocking. I really felt for her and she became my favorite character. I like that this is written in a series of letters between them. I thought that was a really creative idea and it works really well! "
Word placement and spelling
"I like the idea of the story and it feels like it could be a best seller, however some words could be placed in different spots and the plot of the story could be annunciation a little better. There are also a few spelling errors but other than that I am intrigued"
