The Crimson Altar
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The Crimson Altar

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Summary

The Crimson Altar is a thriller mystery where a tourists group go on a tour of their lives but get caught up in in a dangerous sacrifice on this bloody at its highest peak a sacrifice has to be made to keep the peace

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1. Blood as Red as Crimson

It was in the middle of a big tour season for everyone who likes to discover the mystery of adventure especially for this young couple ,Anna and Drake Robertson who are a big time truth finders of the unthinkable,bit little did they know.Rhat this trip would bring them to a halting stop in life and test their ability to think fast .This lovely couple the Robertson are looking fourva tour that most people would think twice of going to. Especially this one that found online called The Crimson Tour.

"So babe what do you think of this one?"asked Mr. Drake Robertson.Anna looked at the tour and said.

"Babe are you sure about this one I mean look at the reviews and the comments it says don't go unless you want to get killed"

"Look it says a few other people are going too,and you always say a little adventure never hurts anyone,and plus they are just saying that to get you excited so what do you say ," said Mr Robertson.

"Alright I guess it would be fine as long as nothing to dangerous happens,"she said.

"I promise everything will be alright it will be like every other trip we took but this one would be more interesting,"said Mr.Drake

They finished packing their stuff when they gotten a call from one of the agents saying their ride will arrive shortly.They waited for a few good hoursand they were about to give up and head inside until they heard some noise inth distance finally the car had arrived.

"Hi I am sorry I am late there was accident just a few blocks away and it took a few good minutes for for it to move",said the driver.

"Traffic can always be a pian in the ass! Don't worry about it ,"sai Mr Robertson.

They packed their bags into the truck and headed for the airport for their flight of there lives .The trip would be taken place in a secret location that no one has ever been to until now.This spot has been closed off for 20 centuries .They decided to open this spot up for the world,for anyone who was lucky enough to get in.

They had been on tours but nothing as dangerous as this one even the history is also so dark ...and evil!But regardless they were explorer's ,and love taking risks .They have been dating for a solid year now !Together until the end .

They has arrived at the tour spot and they both noticed something wasn't right ...or they could be just over thinking it. There were a few other tourists that were theream older man to seem to be about in his early 40's with short black hair ,and a tall slender woman who seemed to be in her early 20's but still young .

"Well welcome all to this exciting tour my name is Be Rodgers and I will be your tour guide for the day!Now if you would please take a minute to fill out these insurance forms that will only take a few seconds,it will insure us that we are not held for anything outside of this tour,and we will begin the tour.

When they were all done signing the insurance forms they handed the forms to the tour guide,and with an evil grin he took them everyone thought that was very strange indeed.

They just decided to go along with it and didn't think twice about it .They started heading inside the building and their first stop was just a normal ancient Greece ax that they used to build their home's with .They were getting to the end of the tour,when Robertson asked"Excuse me when are we thought there was going to be something more instead of this stuff we already seen before?"When we will see the dangerous stuff?"

The tour guide walked over to him and gave him the most creepiest smile that sent shivers up everyone's back and then handed him a note that said You wanted the tour now you are stuck in here until the tours ends .We are all in danger he handed his girlfriend the note and they were both frightened.

They were both waiting patiently for this evening to over to ask the tour what the did he mean by this note.It was getting closer to midnight and only a few people were selected for the rest of the tour ,the Robertson couple the older guy that seemed to be in his early forties,and woman that looked to be in her late twenties.

Let Olivia know what you thought about this chapter!

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