What is your opinion?
THE MAGE
"I LOVE THIS STORY HOPE YOU WRITE ANOTHER ONE "
Great
"Nice writing, can't wait to see what the ending reveals! "
The bandit and the mage
"The plot and the characters Eli The plot is good , but their arnent any plot twist yet "
The mage
"The first time you were able and you had to do something about the situation you had with your family you had a good relationship and I was very proud to have met your mother I am very happy that she is a very good friend of yours I hope that she will continue her life with her husband I hope she is able and that you are happy "
creative out the butt
"I thought it was funny more than anything else. And every chapter ended with the main character thinking "fuck" and I don't know why but I think it's hilarious. She's getting railed and then off to go fight or sneak out. The plot is funny and worth a read. "
Awaome
"I love this story very much. The characters are sexy and amazing 😍 The plot is looking adorable and interesting 🙂 And I like the battle scenes, It looks like a movie 🍿"
Hot
"I love it hot steamy spicy loads of action. Malkan taking control of eli and showing he s the boas"
The Bandit and the Mage
"Great reading so far. Where is the rest?"
Great Start
"I’m definitely very intrigued by what’s going on here! You clearly have an interesting idea. Parts of this make it a little hard to read - I think you have a flashback in the middle but it’s not differentiated either by punctuation or through the narrative. You also have some punctuation I don’t understand in the dialogue (the dashes). Overall, though, you have a good start and I look forward to reading more!"
