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"I loved this book sooo much but you've disappeared please come back would love to hear from you "

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Loved it!

"It broke my heart when Chase didi this to May. Glad it ended good.!!!"

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Keep the beat

"Very funny book, really interesting, still needs some edits"

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Keep up the beat

"Just as amazing as the first Perfectly designed May’s personality is the best . She is hilarious I hope the author is this amazing. If yes I wanna be your best friend"

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Awesome ❤️

"I liked except that the author sometimes writes in circles. I love the book and the plot twist, the humor made my day. I've read the book over five times and I still don't get bored 😅❤️❤️"

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Keep the beat

"I read this book when it was on Wattpad years ago and I can still say it’s the best book I’ve ever read! "

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Best damn book ever

"You managed to create a hilarious yet romantic book and honestly you managed to create a character who i admire greatly. I love this book and the one before this one,"

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Keepin' the unique and controlling the critique

"Your book was too damn good, forget good it was amazing. The fact that your story wasn't cliche but still had the romance factor going on made it invigorating. Honestly, this might be the only book I've read so far that fits the title humor. I immensely enjoyed it and as some said before it made me laugh so many times through each chapter that my friends started wondering if I was -as you so eloquently put it- 'a crazy-ass bitch'😂 Anyway, I loved your books and have recommended them to anyone I deemed worthy for such a marvelous gift and literal ray of sunshine. May Riley has been so beautifully portrayed that I can imagine her as someone living instead of a fictional character. Good job, and I wondered if you'd actually get this published cause I really want a hard copy of this story."

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Keep the beat

"It was fabulous loved it 👍🏻❤"

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Keep the beat

"This book was awesome love the drama alot buy didn't like the fact that you put alot of dong in it as in word for word. Other than that it was a great book all in all."

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Side-Splitting

"The story was great and had me laughing atleast twice every chapter. In lots of them, I got no respite from laughter. You are a wickedly humourous person, CailinSpraoi. I would suggest you to reread your book and correct some grammatical errors. And definitely publish this book, It is amazing. Cant wait to see it in Hardcover. The seriousness of some parts emphasised the humour perfectly. I personally am glad that you did not put overwhelming, cheesy romance. Speaking of which, I choose both chicken and cheese, I love both. Keep on writing such amazing stories, Please add a chapter to say you have published your book. You should earn for your good work."

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Keep the beat

"Perfect story, just as I expected it to be. The second book did not leave me disappointed and honestly I would love to read another sequel. I love the music references ... they made the story so much more colourful."

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Awesome

"I loved May's sassiness. All in all it was a bomb"

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Keep the beat

"AMAZING 😍😍😍"

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Keep the Beat

"I commented about like, the only factor that was missing in the while book last time as well. There's a load of grammar errors dude. The book's a serious winner tho. THE BEST I have and will ever read. Please please please give us more. Surely you could do atlst 5 more. The same characters would do good. I love it. Work on publishing it officially coz, dang!"

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Keep the beat

"Excellent! 👏👏 Splendid in deed. I had fun reading the story. They started and ended with a Bang! 😍😍😎😎 "

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Expectations

"I can say, it did stand on my expectations. Cause after the 1st book I really have some with the next book. I'm not disappointed. It's really just as good as the 1st one. "

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Amazing

"I loved this book . It was totally AMAZINGGG..........!!!!!"

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This is pretty awesome

"I read all two stories and now i want third one.. please please please.. dont stop this series.. these are best stories i have ever read. And i love them soo much.. please dont stop this series.. "

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Wow! Absolutely enjoyed

"Like the way may ruined keara and don't like the way hurt her before. And i dedicated this my girlfriend because she bitch like May all the times."

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