The trials of gods?
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The trials of gods?

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Summary

It about a kid who went into a strange place with weird things in it and btw I am taking inspiration of the backrooms I just wanted to point that out

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Do you want to know how I got into this terrible situation? Well, let’s start at the location where it happened. A week ago, I was walking to school with my friends Tony and Jackie. We were such an odd bunch of kids, you could say, but let’s get started now. Jackie asked, “Have you guys ever heard of the rooms? I claimed to have, but isn’t it fake? Tony said, “Well buddy it’s false, no shit Sherlock haha,” to which I replied, “But there might be a go?” They began laughing maniacally, which made me feel incredibly embarrassed I really hate them haha “Jackie said what is that strange thing over there I dare one of yall to touch it haha” there was a glitch thing like I can’t even say of how weird it was…. “Tony said Not me go toro you did not say it fast enough haha” I forgot to mention my name is toro so nice to meet ya anyways I went to that thing it felt weird per say I went somewhere else. It’s like a room with red walls and a soaked carpet which feels super weird and hurts my eyes that’s all until now I had not seen them in so long I am going insane ain’t I, haha talking to no one on this journal I supposed *I closed the journal and sighs I then saw something tall near me* what is that thing…. It saw me I ran as fast I can but it caught up to me AHH!!!

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