You got me

"Okay, so I thought this was going to be another one of those teen angst-nobody understands me kind of stories, and by the time I figured out what was really going on, I was forced to admit that I'm not as clever as I had first thought. I like the way the story is told in a conversational way, from the viewpoint of the possessor, which has always interested me, and your handling of the pacing, and the voice of the narrator is really well done. I hope this is just the first of many submissions for you."