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Lovely book

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Suspenseful

"I loved the writing style used in this story. To me, it brought a lot of suspense into the novel and provided the author with an urge to turn the page. I can't wait to see what else the author is going to include in this story. There was a little sense of mystery presented in the opening chapter with "the lady in the dreams" and I hope to see the revelations continue with the suspense of the story. It's a great read for those who enjoy the horror genre, and I spotted few errors (still some, like where commas should go, etc.). If you want something to keep you from turning off your light at night, this story's perfect for you. **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR BELOW."

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Intriguing Plot

"The story was off to a great start! The first chapter got me yearning for more. It was mystical and dark, yet it managed to completely seize me by curiosity. Yet, I felt the itch slowly falter through the next chapter and the one after that. I can't ascertain what prompted that, but I do think that it might have been the style of writing. Bear that I'm looking at this through a very subjective lens and thus perhaps it's just me. I'm not particularly in favor of overly meticulous writings; I often find them particularly dreary, in fact. They barely leveled with what I had hoped from my impression of the first chapter, but I still liked them anyhow. There are several punctuation and grammar issues scattered here and there, yet everybody is bound to make mistakes of that sort including myself. Regardless, the story still sounded pleasant when read aloud. So far, the beginning four chapters has been a delightful read and thus I do hope you will continue your work. I definitely look forth to further developments of the plot and revelations in the story!"

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Suffer Little Children

"Ok I've read a good chunk of these 3 to four chapters and as much as i think it's an okay book, with it's dark elements and feeling of sympathy...To be it's kind of disturbing, in a good way like you would watch in a horror movie (didn't make much since now i said it out loud but anyways) keep it up"

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