Dhira Vidhea

Wonderland

A regular girl with a creative imagination <3

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Interesting

I frankly love how the poetry summary resonates with the title. '.' as for 'Blank Pages', that was what had drawn me into reading it in the first place. I especially fancy the plot of this poetry, I like how the scenarios are structured and how they ultimately add up. Incredibly well-thought of! Good job!

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SWOONWORTHY!

My ultimate thought was--Wouldn't it be perfect if a guy were to write me that?

Because it would! It would because it's all shades of romantic! It's simple and short in length but definitely worthy of praise! Keep up the good work!

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Intriguing Plot

The story was off to a great start! The first chapter got me yearning for more. It was mystical and dark, yet it managed to completely seize me by curiosity. Yet, I felt the itch slowly falter through the next chapter and the one after that. I can't ascertain what prompted that, but I do think that it might have been the style of writing. Bear that I'm looking at this through a very subjective lens and thus perhaps it's just me. I'm not particularly in favor of overly meticulous writings; I often find them particularly dreary, in fact. They barely leveled with what I had hoped from my impression of the first chapter, but I still liked them anyhow.

There are several punctuation and grammar issues scattered here and there, yet everybody is bound to make mistakes of that sort including myself. Regardless, the story still sounded pleasant when read aloud.
So far, the beginning four chapters has been a delightful read and thus I do hope you will continue your work. I definitely look forth to further developments of the plot and revelations in the story!

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Deeply Insightful

Out of the list of books in the Inkitt library, this one caught my eye straight off the bat, The blurb is among some of the most intriguing in the genre, and I was magnetized instantly. I've been watching a lot of crime documentaries as of recently and have become increasingly drawn to the study of the human psychology; therefore a fiction of this sort was already up in my field of preferences.
This story hooked me from the first chapter. It was vague yet interesting, I applaud the author for being able to imply just enough without giving away too much from the start.

I also fancy how light and digestible the writing was, making it incredibly practical for me to leaf through. The writing simply flows, and I loved the way the sentences drifted out my mouth as I recited--this is likely my favorite aspect of the story. I've already anticipated the story to revolve around faith from the beginning, given its blurb, but it didn't occur to me how it'd be to this extent. It has given me a lot of insight and a tinge of enlightenment, frankly. Matthew's thoughts and standpoint connected to me on a personal level.
There are moments when the light within the eyes are stripped away by fear and isolation. It's bound to happen to everyone at some point, The story puts an emphasis on that, with its comprehensive and thorough implication of each character. Moreover, It's my understanding that Teddy served as the embodiment of desolation and vengeance. It easily haunts those who are in grief, as implicated by the author.

Despite how much I connected to it, or rather it connected to me, I didn't like the plot as much. I must make clear that this is a matter of preference, but the story plot was too simple as for my liking. There were so many repetitions of statements that I didn't feel was necessary. Yet in overall, I really enjoyed this book.

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