The Thing about Dinah

lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Read4Free16: Heartwarming

Susan: Nice short story. I liked it

Sami13579: Good plot interesting

Veekay186: I really like the storyline and will recommend it for a relaxing read. It shows love is a sweet light.

Kimberly: It's nice to have a great book that you can simply melt into. There's a touch of drama but not so much that it's jarring. There's a touch of spice but not so much that you'd be ashamed at recommending it to your mother. The characters have you both chuckling and rolling your eyes at the same time. ...

Tracey K.: Loved the give and take between the characters with ups and downs and a happy ending. You did well, keep writing. Tracey K.

Agatha: I am enjoying the book. The plot is not cliche and the writing is good. Looking to the next part in anticipation