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What is your opinion?
Needed A Walk
"The paragraphs need to be broken more to make it not seem like just one large paragraph. The point of view from Lily was a twist from most Harry Potter fanfics."
Aww
"This was absolutely beautiful. I re-read this a couple times before I reviewed, and the end is sweet. All of it is sweet. All of Lilly's interaction with James was just flawless, and I loved this a lot."
Wow!
"I thoroughly enjoyed this! Your writing was better in this one and I felt so bad for Lily. :( So glad James came to the rescue in more ways than one. ;) You need to write more James/Lily pieces. You are very good at them. :)"
