dwolfe24

A writer with a dream to be published. I have four books on Amazon. Go to the Support Me link to see them!

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Excellent Love Story

The flow and the rhythm of the love story was well written. The way each chapter was like a cliffhanger was clever. Well written.

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Very Promising

A very good beginning. Quite promising and captivating.

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Complicated yet Simple

Excellent story so far. Soulmates of two different worlds. Great concept. Just need to be made clear about what the boy is because it is quite clear wat the girl is.

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Excellent Horror

Quite a good horror story. The signs of demonic haunting were very clear. However, it was a bit confusing at times because each chapter looked like a giant paragraph. at times with run-on sentences. Besides that, it was very good.

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Epic Conclusion

This story is such a great conclusion to the series.

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Dramatic

The drama, the twists, the backstabbing. Such a great story. The villains, both known and assumed, are not making this girl's life easy. An excellent example of a strong female hero.

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Broken Love

Another excellent love story that this writer has conjured from the depths of an imagination about love. The drama, the twists, the stalkers, All of it is good.

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Werewitch

The story is great. A mix of two supernatural creatures is very intriguing.

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Excellent supernatural story.

Great werewolf story. The supernatural is amazing and the way that they are portrayed are great.

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Excellent way to begin

This story is very good despite only being the beginning. To the author, please do update soon.

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Well written ending

It was well written and kept the reader wanting to go to the next chapter

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Great twisty story

I enjoyed reading this. It had a great plot even though the title took a little while to get mentioned in the story and the vampires came out of nowhere. Still, the author did an excellent story.

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Interesting

The story has a very interesting plot line and a very good one at that. The way that the characters go through their lives is exciting and yet dangerous. I enjoyed this quite a bit.

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Spookily Good

This story was very good. The way that the story goes makes it very suspenseful.

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Excellent Adventure

This was a great spy novel. The way the plot moved along was easy to follow.

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Well written

I enjoyed reading this. It was well written and the mix of magic and religion was well done.

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Simple and pure

I enjoy poetry and your few poems here spoke to me. I could see what you were going after with each of them. The poems were simple yet deep with reason. You're an excellent poet.

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Magically enchanting

I enjoyed reading this. The magic, the special unique language, the creatures. All of it. It's even better than Harry Potter. It was hard to stop reading this. I look forward to a sequel.

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A brand new twist on Fairytales

First off, loved this story. The way you blended fairytales and legends together to make new stories. I really hope there will be sequels to this. I really want to see Maleficent coming back and helping Echo and Amber save their world. Especially from the Alpha. That alone would be a great sequel. I love how you ended it on a cliffhanger.

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Needs better closure

First off, I really hate to start with changes that I feel should be noted but the first change I suggest is to make Rosie 17 or at least 18. Sorry but having a 16 year old girl with a 30 something year old man is a bit disturbing. Maybe change Sid's age to something younger if he is a starting drug dealer. Especially since he's abusive and no one is questioning it. I understand that he is a drug dealing criminal but to leave him out there on the loose doesn't give the prospect of a happy ending for Rosie. And you've left it on such a good cliffhanger. Where is Mario? He needs to come back cause he's the first healthy relationship Rosie has had that was a guy.

Anyways, I did enjoy the story being in the criminal underworld with all the lies and deception that Rosie and Sid did everywhere. I also liked how Rosie would irk Sid on purpose just because she could. One thing I would change for sure is the ending where Mario comes back and there's something on the news about Sid being arrested or killed doing a drug deal. Rosie deserves a happy ending given everything that has happened to her.

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Great mix of supernatural and modern world

First off, great mix of a supernatural and modern day story. Loved the ideas of the different gods of different supernatural shapeshifters working together and some of their creations against it. One thing that might help is at the beginning explain it's in a modern day world and the whole voice in their heads.

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Great Mystery

Loved the book and each chapter. Definitely has the great work to be the first book of a series. I'm curious about the four being season related and what that all is about.

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Love It!

The way the story is written captures the real life situation of young people today. There's always that one person who is afraid to tell the other how they really feel because they don't want to ruin their friendship and encourage the one they love to be with whoever they're crushing on. The ending was so happy. I definitely can see this becoming a larger novel.

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New Point Of View

Really good story. Changes the whole perspective of fishing. Makes one sympathize with the fish when it comes to fishing. Really great story. Can't wait to read more of your work!

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Good wolf story

Very promising for a werewolf story. However, the grammar and punctuation needs to be worked on. It was hard to tell when certain characters were speaking. Besides that, enjoyed the story.

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Quite gripping

It was a good post-apocalyptic story. The details about the new world and how much humanity had changed was intriguing.

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Unnaturally Good

A good story so far. Only issue is that the author didn't put any quotation marks in to show when someone was speaking. Promising but does need a few tweaks.

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Good Start

The story is a bit confusing at first but does make sense after a few chapters. Good potential.

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Dramatic Beginning

Quite a serious and heavy beginning. Sounds like drama is a guarantee. All in all, a promising story.

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Good beginning

Quite a detailed beginning. Could use a little fixing with past and present tense being mixed in there. Besides that, a good start.

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Adventure in the Making

Only 5 chapters but its clear that this story is very promising.

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Quite a Beginning

Just three chapters leaves the reader wanting more. Beginning gives just the right amount of info.

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Potential

Both songs the author wrote just shows how much potential they have for song writing and how good of a song writer they are.

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Excellent Finish

Author is definitely good at making an adventure last a few books. Each chapter kept the reader wanting to read what happened next.

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Excellent Sequel

Quite a follow up to the first book. Proof that love can be twisted, complicated and full of unexpected turns.

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Complicated Love

The story is very interesting. A complicated life of a main character because of two brothers and her friends. The ending sounds like it will be promising.

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Unnaturally Promising

Although it isn't finished, the author's story is quite captivating. The flow from scene to scene is smooth. Well written when it comes to magic and religion being mixed together.

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Well Written

The poems were excellent. Thought of thoroughly and written quite nicely.

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Quite the Poem

Well written. The dedication to the cat is clear and easy to follow.

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Excellent Beginning

So far this story is good. Promising and interesting

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Quite the Tale

This story is quite intriguing and gripping.. The imagery and different characters is well written.

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Promising

Quite a gripping and exciting beginning. Hard to stop reading. Very promising.

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Interesting yet promising

Very good beginning so far. Very clear about the interesting love story that is developing. Well written so far.

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Promising Wolf Story

Already gripping and promising. Well written and already interesting.

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Twisted Fairytale

Quite an excellent twist on Hansel and Gretel. The backstory and the idea of two hungry witches was quite interesting.

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Quite gripping

This story is quite good. The drama of high schoolers as they reach that age. The complicated love triangle. Definitely promising.

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Interesting Vampire Tale

So far this book is showing great potential to be a good vampire story.. Interesting name for the city and the drama the main character is facing so far is so emotional.

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Excellent Dating Representation

So far this book is great. The drama, the heartbreak and the kindling of love that is clearly sparking between people. Great potential.

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Good Beginning

The beginning so far of this is pretty good. Dives right in while giving the right amount of detail and being told at a good pace so far. Only thing I might recommend is go back and look at each time you say shift because it looks like the word shirt would work better there. Besides that, very good.

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Quite excellent

The author does not disappoint. This book was really good and has great potential.

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Erotic yet romantic

Well written with just the right amount of spiciness and romance blended together. Definitely keeps readers wanting to read more to see what all happens. Very detailed.

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Interesting Twist

Quite a riveting twist on Harry Potter told from the point of view once again from someone besides Harry and his friends. Well written and gives new perspective on the wizarding world. Well done.

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Dragons

Written quite well for a dragon story.

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Howl!!!!!!

This is a promising story. Keep up the good work.

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Windrose Wolves

Excellent werewolf story

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Disney

Excellent mix of fan fiction and originality. Disney, here is a promising story!

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Pharaoh

Very promising and adventurous.

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Biblically Written

Such a refreshing twist on the Bible. It adds so much realness in just the beginning alone.

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Disaster in a good way

The story gives such a great disaster. The ending, when it comes, will be just as perfect as the beginning.

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Complicated Indeed

The complications are great. The flow of the story so far is great and interesting. The cliffhanger is very good and such a twist.

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Cursed to be a great love story

The romance, the ups and downs and the idea of the story are all promising and so good.

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Lycon

Interesting love story so far. Has potential for more.

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Magical

Right from the beginning, the story enchants the readers. However, the chapters are long enough to maybe be two chapters, so maybe cut them into two chapters. Keep up the great work.

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Supernaturally great

Very intriguing, twisted and promising. Great potential

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Brave

Once again, another great story. Partially because it has a werewolf type of creature but mainly because of the flow and rhythm of the story. Promising.

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Remarkable

Excellent beginning. Promising, intriguing and very interesting. Just missing the rest of the story. Please do continue the good work.

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Real Friendship

This author does a great job of reminding people why friends are so important. Even without an ending, this story can teach so much. Keep up the good work.

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Fairies

So far, so good. The idea and plotline is interesting. A little strange but once the story is completed, will make more sense. Keep up the good work.

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Life Story

Great story idea. However, maybe add more dialogue into it. So far it sounds a bit more like a diary or journal entry covering several days. Besides that, very promising.

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Diary Indeed

Each chapter is so interesting. Seeing life through the eyes of a witch. Well done

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Great Werewolf

Another great werewolf story. Very interesting. Hopefully the ending is just as good as what is written so far.

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True Love

First off, the author here does a great job of writing a dramatic love story. That being said, this story sounds just as promising with an excellent ending like the others in the series.

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Promising

Great beginning to the story. A good way to explain what will happen without giving away too much. Please do continue.

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Running, running, great work

The runaway wolf is excellent. The drama of a werewolf and the challenges are quite interesting.

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Complicated Love Story.

Two love interests is a great way to make a romance story so intriguing. Well written and the family drama adds a great twist.

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Romantic with a dash for potential danger

Great story. The title in itself makes it sound so romantic and dropping so many possible outcomes for the character to mean when they say that. That being said, excellent work.

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Apocalyptic Indeed

First off, excellent idea for an apocalypse story. However, the chapters at times were a bit too long to the point that the way some of them ended didn't seem to match what was happening back at the beginning of the chapter. Maybe cut down a little bit on the lengths. Besides that, great story and keep up the good work.

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Alphas and Mates

First off, excellent story. Great plotline. Very promising. Secondly, more is needed. Excellent beginning, great problem. Just needs the solution and the rest of the story to follow.

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Abracadabra...Excellent story

The magical story is great. The idea of two worlds is great.

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Dark Musing

The poetry and short stories here are gripping and deep minded.

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Lost Wolf indeed

Great werewolf story. The fantasy is excellent.

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Excellent beginning to the book

Well written. The flow of the story is very easy to follow and very gripping.

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Well Written

The plot and idea of the story is very good. The way that the story goes is very promising.

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Excellent beginning

Despite only being the beginning of the story, it is well written.

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Dramatic and Gripping

The flow of the story is very interesting and the plot is very easy to follow along. Well done.

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Excellent Fairytale

The story is very well written and well paced. The drama, the characters and the whole idea so far is well explained and detailed.

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Excellent sequel

This book was just as good as the first. Great twists and turns. Here is to looking forward to the third book.

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Good Beginning

This book was really good. Looking forward to the sequel

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Excellent Love Story

I really did enjoy this story. The only thing I might suggest is maybe a bigger climatic part with Bailey's dad not going away so easily. Maybe do a chase scene in the house or where he kidnaps Bailey's little brother. The love story part is good, just needs a little bit more to it.

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So serious and yet so romantic

Excellent story. The letters alone described the plot, the situation and the entire point of the story perfectly. I really loved the ending. The bully and the victim ending up together because they changed each other's lives was so unexpected but still a great twist.

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Good Sneak Peek

This was an excellent sneak peek to the book. It's very good.

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Demomically perfect

Excellent story. A great piece of fiction that is supernatural and yet so fun to read

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Excellent Sequel!

The sequel does not disappoint. The third book will be a great read.

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Excellent mixture

Quite a well told tale. Everything was mixed in well.

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Brilliantly Written

It was hard to stop reading this. Each chapter was written perfectly making readers want to continue it. There was no problems or any issues with this book. I can't wait to read the next one.

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Short but good

This is a good story despite it being so short. There's definitely a larger story that this could become. Besides that, an excellent read.

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Romantically Dark

Despite being so dark and murderous, this is a very good twisted love story

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Excellent Story

It was a very good story for fanfiction. Having it take place in the Harry Potter universe while at the same time having so very few characters from the actual books in it. Can't wait to read the next book.

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Amazing Story

This was a great story. The flow of the plot, the suspense, the ups and downs. The author here does not fail to disappoint with making a great story. Please let there be a sequel to this!

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Excellent Love Story

First off, excellent love story. The way the two of them met was an excellent beginning. The author made this love journey quite a fun one to follow. It was perfect except for a few minor grammatical errors. Besides those few errors, it was a great love story.

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Quite the story

This is a really good read. The author makes it exciting and hard to stop reading. Please let there be a sequel!

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Excellent fanfiction

This Harry Potter mix is quite a good one. I enjoyed reading it and seeing the story from a new point of view. The tie-in with the actually book events is very good.

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Kitty Adorable!

The kitties are so adorable! This is a great piece.

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Fated Indeed

An amazing story of love and fate

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An excellent story

This is an excellent story. The way the story flows. There is a lot of emotion here

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Amazing Fireific

The sequel is just as good as the first book. I enjoyed reading it a lot. The adventures she is going through, not just with magic but with her relationships with others is really amazing. I really hope she ends up with Dimitrie.

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Perfect Love Story

I enjoyed reading this. The flow of the story, the romance and the plot were all perfect.

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Great Story!

This is a really good love story! I can't wait to read the next one!

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Quite A Love Story

I did enjoy this story. However, I felt like it was a very long story. Some of it seemed a little repetitive and could have been taken out. It is a good love story.

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So Good It's Deadly

It's a good story. Despite some chapters not being there leaving holes in the story. The author does a good job of creating a new image for the afterlife

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A Journey Of Love

I really enjoyed reading this. It was quite full of adventures and twists and turns. The only things I would suggest would be to first have some of the chapters possibly shortened a bit so they're not so long. The other would have been to write a note that there is a time jump in certain chapters because that did make it a little confusing. Besides that, I enjoyed this story.

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Great Suspense

I really enjoyed reading this. Having it all from the one perspective made it very interesting and suspenseful. The ending was a very big twist. Well written.

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Romantic

I enjoyed reading this. It was quite an interesting romance story. Not too much and yet not too little with the words. It was still good.

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Good Werewolf Story

I enjoyed reading this. Werewolf schools with young werewolves is quite a read. That being said, I sort of feel like the battle scene could have had more instead of just a couple of paragraphs. Besides that, it was good.

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Love Story

I really enjoyed reading this. I just wish that there had been a bit more about the subplot with Juliet like an explanation scene about what happened between her and Matt after Belle had left. Besides that, it was really good.

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A brand new fairy tale

I really enjoyed reading this. It was hard to stop reading it and it kept one wanting to read more and more. This story is like the classic fairy tales. Especially the ending where good wins and evil loses. My favorite character was the wizard.

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Dragon Perfection

I enjoyed this story. The flow, the surprises and the turns it took. It was hard to stop reading it.

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Truly Powerful

I'm not gonna lie, the last couple of chapters were the most emotional tear bringers. Especially when the reader learns who the letters at the end of each chapter are from. Your story was powerful and has a serious message in it. That racism still exists and that racist people will always defend themselves and their actions by twisting others into their defense. One thing I might suggest is that we get a confrontational scene between Markus and Skye. Seriously, Markus got off way too easily. Besides that, it was a great and powerful story.

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Twisted and Dark Surprises

Wow. The last chapter just totally changed the reader's thoughts about the first few chapters. That was a twist I did not see coming while reading this. Dark Angel is a very good nickname for Elizabeth. Five Stars out of Five Stars!

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Magical Perfection

Once again, a great magical story. The flow and the surprises were well done.

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Best Werewolf Story Ever!!!!!

The twists, the turns, the surprises! This story of werewolf packs was perfect. It was impossible to stop reading it. Each chapter left the reader wanting more. The villains, the heroes. This story had it all.

A few tiny itsy bitsy change I might suggest. Definitely saw a few spelling errors and I think a few missing words or the wrong word for certain area. The only other thing I suggest could be worked on is tone down the little kid's talk about sex. She's a five years old.

Besides that, this was a perfect story.

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Great Fairy Tale

I didn't realize I was supposed to read this book before your other one but it was still good. Especially since, knowing how their story ended, it was fun seeing how it all really began.

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A Fairy Tale

It was like LOTR mixed with Spiderwick Chronicles mixed with King Arthur. I enjoyed reading it and following all of their adventures. It was so romantic and adventurous. Your story was hard to stop reading.

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Perfectly Crafted Ending

It was a great story and perfectly written to end Rick Riordan's book series even if he doesn't use this type of ending.

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True Love perfection

I enjoyed reading this. Sure it was short but it was focused on the two main characters and the love they had for each other. I'm really happy they had their happy ending. I can easily see this becoming a very big story with more details and more adventures for the two of them before they reach their new home.

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Looking towards the next book

First off, despite being very short, I found it to be quite entrancing and enjoyable to read. I think three chapters can be made into even more chapters since there's quite a bit that seems to be missing but that's just my opinion. I can't wait to read more of this.

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Cursed Fire

First off, loved the idea of a cursed fire not killing you right away. Secondly, thank you for the mention. Looking forward to reading more.

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Poor Cheddar!

Poor kitty. At least he isn't suffering anymore. I feel bad for his owner though.

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Excellent wolf story

Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. I still can't believe the goddesses screwed up match making. I'm interested in whether or not there will be a sequel. It doesn't sound like Damien will give up so easily.

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A Poet Unto Herself

Amazing poems. I can see the passion behind each one.

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Yay for Mom Saver

I really enjoyed this story. Thank goodness for the mother paying for the kitty to get better.

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Adorable Cheddar

I really enjoyed this story and it sounds about right for a new pet kitty.

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Interesting

Interesting story. I think that this story is a good story that can be expanded

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Quite a journey

Really loved how the story went for Tedi and Jack. The complexity of their love story and how they kept having to deal with other people. One thing I would change though is maybe add more to the ending instead of doing a quick wrap up ending. Besides that, it was good.

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Interesting but short and quick to the point

Very tricky and sneaky. Not gonna spoil this but the author is very quick to get to the main point of this book. If you want a book with a twist, this is it

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Purely True Love

I really enjoyed this story. Two friends finally getting together after everyone knows they're in love with a jealous ex around really makes it more exciting. That being said, one thing I would add to this is maybe more of a confrontation with Derrick. Besides that, maybe not do many time skips. This was very good though.

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Great Fanfiction

I do love Legos and the Lego movies so of course this was really good. Your writing with ways to make it clear who was talking was very good. I would just recommend that you would replace the initials for each character when they speak with their names. Besides that, it was an excellent piece. Does bring up the question of when there will be Lego figures of gods.

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SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

First off, the ending to this demands a sequel! Seriously. It needs a sequel. The ending didn't give the justice that Cameron, Roxy and Olivia needs. Vincent needs to be thrown into jail for his crimes for what he did. Cameron was just defending his sister and Olivia.

Secondly, Olivia needs the chance to face her parents and get out from under their controlling grip.

I loved this book! I can't wait for the sequel!

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True Love indeed

I loved this story! The way that the two of them were sending each other love letters. They seem like they have True Love. The way they fell in love and then got married five years later. They're so cute together!

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Excellent story!

Impossible to stop reading this. Each chapter left you hanging off the edge of your seat wanting to know more and what happened next. Please let there be a second book soon!

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Excellent plot hole filling

Writing the story from a different main character's main point of view was a terrific idea. It gave the reader more of a inside scoop on the story and just what all is happening in the world the author has created. The hero in this book and the same villain having more history then what was revealed in the other two books made it feel more real.

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Terrific Sequel

The second book is always better than the first one and here it's very true. Amazing how the Dark Being got revenge on the entire village with his fearsome monsters. These books have great potential to be bigger and more detailed. Keep up the great work.

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Epic and gripping.

Loved the plotline and the moral of the story. Overcoming one's pride and being brave enough to know that you don't always need to do things on your own to prove a point. I can't wait to read the next story. Those monsters sound creative and dangerous.

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True Love Found

I loved the story. It might have been short but it was to the point and that was so sweet. I'm sure he loved seeing how you wrote this. It can't be easy writing about personal experiences, especially when it comes to personal love, for others to read about but you did a terrific job about it. I'm happy for you two. This story was perfect.

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Great story!

I enjoyed every chapter! The dating went from online to real life was a great idea. I loved the twist about them meeting at the coffee shop and not realizing who they were. The ups and downs were great. Nolan and Michelle were great at trying to break up the two and acting so discreetly about it. I enjoyed this. One thing that might be a good idea is having Jacob and Nikki confronting Michelle and Nolan in a chapter. Besieds that, it's perfect.

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Perfectly eerie and mysterious

Reading this story reminded me so much of the Twilight Zone. I can't wait to read the second book to see what happens next. The characters were perfect and there were times I felt how Nessa felt.

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Perfectly Suspenseful

It is a really suspenseful. Edgar Allen Poe himself would be proud of the suspense. It reminded me of his works, especially Tell Tale Heart where it's from just the one perspective the whole time. That being said, one thing I would suggest is maybe put a divider between the two scenes so we know exactly when she's in the past and when she's in the present. The way it ended as well was sort of somewhere between too suspenseful and "is that it?" What happened to the old man? Was it her that killed them? Maybe go a bit deeper into that part. Above all, really great work.

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Excellent Poem

I really enjoyed reading your poem. The flow and the rhythm were excellent. It gives one the idea of what it's like to become a parent. The imagery was excellent.

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Great Book!

I enjoyed reading every word of this story and the flow of it! Clara is such a heroic character and that her twin sister would be sort of the villain of the piece. It was also a good idea having so many of the characters working with her to have magic in a kingdom were magic is outlawed. It's like a very big twist on The Prince and the Pauper but with more and a possible sequel. That being said, one thing I would suggest is having Clara use her magical abilities more. I feel like everyone else was using theirs and she wasn't after she ended up in the castle. Maybe in the second book, if there is one, have Clara dive more into her own magic. Overall, a very good story.

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Interesting To Say The Least

So there were good parts of the story such as Jess having two different boys in her life and a possible rival. Sounded like a good teenage story. However, it was hard to follow along at times. The quotation marks weren't in the right place so it was hard to tell who was saying what at certain times. It was also a little confusing. A few details that might have been important to know where either missing or not present. It is a good story. Just needs a little work on it. It has great potential and it was good.

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Perfect Love Story!

First off, loved the plot. Two teenagers who are in love with each other having the hardest time being together because of outside forces getting in the way. Secondly, I loved how clear it was. Willow and Cole having the hardest time starting their relationship. I'm looking forward to the next book. One thing though I would recommend changing would be maybe giving a chapter or two to Erin's perspective. I know it's about Willow and Cole but Erin is just a big of a character as Willow and Cole. Besides that, it's amazing and good.

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