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Promising

The story is good so far. Very gripping and has a good flow.

Such a good sequel

Just four chapters and I'm already hooked. I really hope that there will be more to this book. The author really keeps the reader on edge by being mysterious with some scenes.

Excellent Story

Another great story written by this author. Well detailed and quite post apocalyptic.

Dragons

Greatly enjoyed the story. Quite riveting and enjoyable. Well written

Excellent Beginning

Just the prologue alone was good and made the story sound like a intriuging story.

Gripping story

Very promising. Just has a few issues with separating into separate paragraphs where people speak. Keep up to good story!

50 Shades of Cat

Definitely feels like a 50 Shades of Grey meets Mafia. Well written and gripping.

50 Shades of Criminal Minds

Quite the combination of Criminal Minds meets 50 Shades of Grey. Bit disturbing to be reminded that Ro was underage and that her master was clearly an adult. Would recommend changing that a bit if possible.

Epic Conclusion

An excellent way to end the trilogy. Very magical in both nature and magic alike. Author did not disappoint.

Quite the Sequel.

An excellent sequel to the first book about nature, magic and what sounds like a nice twist on mythology too. Ready to read the third book.

Excellent Fantasy

Quite an excellent story about nature in what sounded like a good fantasy magical story. Greatly written and very promising.

Gripping

Quite a good story. Very detailed and written well. Greatly enjoyed.

A mystery never fully explained

An excellent yet twisted version of perhaps one of the greatest musicals ever. The story followed perfectly, the references to the songs were good and is proof that "Love Never Dies" as this author did an excellent job of pointing out with a phantom and an angel of music.

Excellent Story

A very good read. Adventurous and quite gripping.

Excellent Beginning

First two chapters a re really good. Very promising.

Excellent Love Story

The flow and the rhythm of the love story was well written. The way each chapter was like a cliffhanger was clever. Well written.

Very Promising

A very good beginning. Quite promising and captivating.

Complicated yet Simple

Excellent story so far. Soulmates of two different worlds. Great concept. Just need to be made clear about what the boy is because it is quite clear wat the girl is.

Excellent Horror

Quite a good horror story. The signs of demonic haunting were very clear. However, it was a bit confusing at times because each chapter looked like a giant paragraph. at times with run-on sentences. Besides that, it was very good.

Epic Conclusion

This story is such a great conclusion to the series.

Dramatic

The drama, the twists, the backstabbing. Such a great story. The villains, both known and assumed, are not making this girl's life easy. An excellent example of a strong female hero.

Werewitch

The story is great. A mix of two supernatural creatures is very intriguing.

Excellent supernatural story.

Great werewolf story. The supernatural is amazing and the way that they are portrayed are great.

Excellent way to begin

This story is very good despite only being the beginning. To the author, please do update soon.

Well written ending

It was well written and kept the reader wanting to go to the next chapter

Great twisty story

I enjoyed reading this. It had a great plot even though the title took a little while to get mentioned in the story and the vampires came out of nowhere. Still, the author did an excellent story.

Interesting

The story has a very interesting plot line and a very good one at that. The way that the characters go through their lives is exciting and yet dangerous. I enjoyed this quite a bit.

Spookily Good

This story was very good. The way that the story goes makes it very suspenseful.

Excellent Adventure

This was a great spy novel. The way the plot moved along was easy to follow.

Well written

I enjoyed reading this. It was well written and the mix of magic and religion was well done.

Simple and pure

I enjoy poetry and your few poems here spoke to me. I could see what you were going after with each of them. The poems were simple yet deep with reason. You're an excellent poet.

Magically enchanting

I enjoyed reading this. The magic, the special unique language, the creatures. All of it. It's even better than Harry Potter. It was hard to stop reading this. I look forward to a sequel.

A brand new twist on Fairytales

First off, loved this story. The way you blended fairytales and legends together to make new stories. I really hope there will be sequels to this. I really want to see Maleficent coming back and helping Echo and Amber save their world. Especially from the Alpha. That alone would be a great sequel. I love how you ended it on a cliffhanger.

Needs better closure

First off, I really hate to start with changes that I feel should be noted but the first change I suggest is to make Rosie 17 or at least 18. Sorry but having a 16 year old girl with a 30 something year old man is a bit disturbing. Maybe change Sid's age to something younger if he is a starting drug dealer. Especially since he's abusive and no one is questioning it. I understand that he is a drug dealing criminal but to leave him out there on the loose doesn't give the prospect of a happy ending for Rosie. And you've left it on such a good cliffhanger. Where is Mario? He needs to come back cause he's the first healthy relationship Rosie has had that was a guy.

Anyways, I did enjoy the story being in the criminal underworld with all the lies and deception that Rosie and Sid did everywhere. I also liked how Rosie would irk Sid on purpose just because she could. One thing I would change for sure is the ending where Mario comes back and there's something on the news about Sid being arrested or killed doing a drug deal. Rosie deserves a happy ending given everything that has happened to her.

Great mix of supernatural and modern world

First off, great mix of a supernatural and modern day story. Loved the ideas of the different gods of different supernatural shapeshifters working together and some of their creations against it. One thing that might help is at the beginning explain it's in a modern day world and the whole voice in their heads.

Great Mystery

Loved the book and each chapter. Definitely has the great work to be the first book of a series. I'm curious about the four being season related and what that all is about.

Love It!

The way the story is written captures the real life situation of young people today. There's always that one person who is afraid to tell the other how they really feel because they don't want to ruin their friendship and encourage the one they love to be with whoever they're crushing on. The ending was so happy. I definitely can see this becoming a larger novel.

New Point Of View

Really good story. Changes the whole perspective of fishing. Makes one sympathize with the fish when it comes to fishing. Really great story. Can't wait to read more of your work!

Amazing Job

Well written for fanfiction. Sounds exactly like the characters from the show so that was a plus.

Needs More

So far, seems good. Just needs more posted here to explain how it's connected.

Interesting Beginning

Easy to follow and yet suspenseful and keeps the reading want more

Good Fanfiction

So far so good for fanfiction. The entire change from one of the main points of the show needs to be explore more in this.

Excellent Fan Rewrite

Quite the rewrite of the beginning of the Netflix Reboot. Well written and includes all characters easily. Very promising.

Excellent Sequel

Quite gripping and keeps the reader wanting more

Excellent First Book

Great way to begin an apocalyptic book series. Kept the reader wanting more.

Really Good

The story is well written and promising. Definitely needs to be continued.

Quite gripping

Enjoyed reading this a lot. Excellent blend of paranormal and modern mafia stories.

Poetry

Amazingly written poems. The details, the feelings and the messages are clear.

Elves

Good story so far. Pretty easy to follow with the romances. Very promising.

Gripping and exciting

Well written so far for the most part. Just a little confusing how there seems to be two stories happening at the same time but it's gripping and keeps the reader wanting to read more.

Dramatically Good

Quite gripping and dramatic. Definitely needs to be finished so the reader can find out what happens

Fairytale

Short but sweet. Definitely could be a bigger story.

Disney meets Power Rangers

Well written mix of Power Rangers and Disney. Looking forward to more of these mixes.

Go Go Samurai!

Interesting twist on Power Rangers to say the least. Definitely is promising.

Morphin Time wolf style

Quite a good story so far. Definitely a good Power Ranger type of story.

Interesting

Very good so far. Enjoyed the few chapters posted. Keep up the good work!

Casper with a twist

Excellent short story. Quite a messed up well written version of Casper.

Phantom Genius

Well written and so relatable when it comes to finding inspiration in unexpected places.

Gruesomely Good

So far it's good. Just a few minor grammatical errors that could be worked on. Possibly cut back on the details of the bloody murders, especially with the slaughtered family.

Excellent sequel

The author does not disappoint with a promising sequel. The dreams seem so real and then the reader finds out it was all a dream. Well written.

Vampire Delight

Quite the story about vampires. Well written for the most part. Just hard to tell when the POV switches in some scenes.

Promising Beginning

The author has a good start to a romance story. Well written.

Beautifully written

The imagery and descriptions are so detail, it's almost as if the reader can see what the author is writing. Well done.

Poetry at best

Well written poetry. Very detailed and emotional

Excellent continuation

Once again the author has an excellent dragon story added to the series. Well written and gripping.

Excellent Story

Quite a gripping story. Hard to stop reading. Author did a great job making another story.

A fresh apocalypse

Definitely different from most apocalyptic stories and worlds which is refreshing. Very good story. Just needs a few changes and adjustments.

Pixie

Once again the author did a great strange romantic story. Quite the plot and very promising.

Excellent Prequel

Well written in most areas. The author did not disappoint. Mo is quite the villain.

Excellent Sequel

Quite the follow up to the first book. Definitely gave a lot of spy vibes and a darker twisted version of 50 Shades of Grey. The ending was unexpected but quite clever.

Thorn and a Rose

Excellent sequel. It was a mix of 50 Shades of Grey, Criminal Minds and family stories. Master Buttercup was made more human in the sequel which is good. The truth behind Rose's dad was expected with the way the Master was talking about him. Only thing I would recommend is maybe more of an aftermath of the bloodbath towards the end. The writer has a huge climatic rescue mission with the bad guys paying for it but then just moves on like nothing happened. Maybe a few chapters where the reader sees a court battle or a news press being released about the politician and police leader being caught trying to commit crimes knowing what they were doing was wrong. Besides that, excellent sequel.

Very promising.

Not sure if the author is continuing this story here or not but it is very good so far.

Excellent Story

Gripping and exciting. Author does not disappoint. The twists and turns are not expected and just makes it even greater.

Excellent Beginning

Quite the mixture of Greek and Roman mythology just in the first couple of chapters. Promising and gripping.

Excellent story.

Quite the story. Well written and gripping.

Promising Start

For only having a few chapters written, this story is already off to a good start.

Good Fan Fiction

Another great fan fiction story from a great series. Stayed within the plot of the actual story while being it's own story at the same.

Poetic

Each poem was written with detail and so many are relatable.

Good beginning

Pretty good so far. Definitely sticking with the original while being it's own story.

Excellent Beginning

So far, so good for a fan fiction.

Olympus Fan Fiction

Good Percy Jackson fanfiction. Nice to see more of what happens between events of books.

Good Fanfiction

Good fanfiction for Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug and Cat Noir. Well detailed with keeping to the original show.

Excellent

Very good beginning to a series. Detailed perfectly and quite adventurous.

Adventurous

Very gripping and promising. Keeps the reader wanting to read more. Well written.

Needs a fixer-upper

This has the potential to be a great story but several things need to be done before it can be one. Firstly, quotation marks are needed so the reader knows who is saying what at which time. Secondly, maybe put what the wolves are saying in italics so the reader knows who the humans are and who the wolves are. Thirdly, edit the paragraphs so only one person is speaking per paragraph because there were some paragraphs where it looked like there was more than one person speaking.

Potential

Once again, the author has a good story but does need to put in quotation marks to make it clear when someone is speaking.

Needs Work

Story is promising but it needs some touches on the punctuation for sure.

Good Fanfiction

Another good fanfiction story. Very promising.

Promising

First off, not what I was expecting when I saw Little Red so well done there. Secondly, there are punctuations that should be added. The lack of quotation marks made reading this a little difficult .

Confusing

Might just be because it's the first two chapters but there's already a few things that need to be fixed. Hard to tell when someone is talking or not. Maybe spread out the two chapters over a few chapters with more details.

Unnaturally Suspenseful

Good beginning. Needs some tweaking with grammar and punctuation.

Needs some dusting up on

Good potential but needs quite a bit of tweaking with grammar and punctuation.

Good so far

Excellent story. Just needs a little tweaking with the grammar.

Interesting Love

Quite a way to begin a love story. Not a usual or normal one. Promising.

Good Fanfiction

Once again, another good Harry Potter fanfiction with twists that even the original author might be impressed with.

Good fanfiction

Interesting take on the Weasley Family. Pity the author hasn't updated it in the last year though.

Very Gifted

An excellent story. The flow and the plot was easy to follow.

Emotionally moving

The details and imagery make it so easy to see what the poet is talking about. Easy to follow and understand.

Good wolf story

Very promising for a werewolf story. However, the grammar and punctuation needs to be worked on. It was hard to tell when certain characters were speaking. Besides that, enjoyed the story.

Quite gripping

It was a good post-apocalyptic story. The details about the new world and how much humanity had changed was intriguing.

Unnaturally Good

A good story so far. Only issue is that the author didn't put any quotation marks in to show when someone was speaking. Promising but does need a few tweaks.

Good Start

The story is a bit confusing at first but does make sense after a few chapters. Good potential.

Dramatic Beginning

Quite a serious and heavy beginning. Sounds like drama is a guarantee. All in all, a promising story.

Good beginning

Quite a detailed beginning. Could use a little fixing with past and present tense being mixed in there. Besides that, a good start.

Adventure in the Making

Only 5 chapters but its clear that this story is very promising.

Quite a Beginning

Just three chapters leaves the reader wanting more. Beginning gives just the right amount of info.

Potential

Both songs the author wrote just shows how much potential they have for song writing and how good of a song writer they are.

Excellent Finish

Author is definitely good at making an adventure last a few books. Each chapter kept the reader wanting to read what happened next.

Excellent Sequel

Quite a follow up to the first book. Proof that love can be twisted, complicated and full of unexpected turns.

Unnaturally Promising

Although it isn't finished, the author's story is quite captivating. The flow from scene to scene is smooth. Well written when it comes to magic and religion being mixed together.

Well Written

The poems were excellent. Thought of thoroughly and written quite nicely.

Quite the Poem

Well written. The dedication to the cat is clear and easy to follow.

Excellent Beginning

So far this story is good. Promising and interesting

Promising

Quite a gripping and exciting beginning. Hard to stop reading. Very promising.

Interesting yet promising

Very good beginning so far. Very clear about the interesting love story that is developing. Well written so far.

Promising Wolf Story

Already gripping and promising. Well written and already interesting.

Twisted Fairytale

Quite an excellent twist on Hansel and Gretel. The backstory and the idea of two hungry witches was quite interesting.

Quite gripping

This story is quite good. The drama of high schoolers as they reach that age. The complicated love triangle. Definitely promising.

Interesting Vampire Tale

So far this book is showing great potential to be a good vampire story.. Interesting name for the city and the drama the main character is facing so far is so emotional.

Excellent Dating Representation

So far this book is great. The drama, the heartbreak and the kindling of love that is clearly sparking between people. Great potential.

Good Beginning

The beginning so far of this is pretty good. Dives right in while giving the right amount of detail and being told at a good pace so far. Only thing I might recommend is go back and look at each time you say shift because it looks like the word shirt would work better there. Besides that, very good.

Quite excellent

The author does not disappoint. This book was really good and has great potential.

Erotic yet romantic

Well written with just the right amount of spiciness and romance blended together. Definitely keeps readers wanting to read more to see what all happens. Very detailed.

Interesting Twist

Quite a riveting twist on Harry Potter told from the point of view once again from someone besides Harry and his friends. Well written and gives new perspective on the wizarding world. Well done.

Dragons

Written quite well for a dragon story.

Howl!!!!!!

This is a promising story. Keep up the good work.

Windrose Wolves

Excellent werewolf story

Disney

Excellent mix of fan fiction and originality. Disney, here is a promising story!

Pharaoh

Very promising and adventurous.

Biblically Written

Such a refreshing twist on the Bible. It adds so much realness in just the beginning alone.

Disaster in a good way

The story gives such a great disaster. The ending, when it comes, will be just as perfect as the beginning.

Complicated Indeed

The complications are great. The flow of the story so far is great and interesting. The cliffhanger is very good and such a twist.

Cursed to be a great love story

The romance, the ups and downs and the idea of the story are all promising and so good.

Lycon

Interesting love story so far. Has potential for more.

Magical

Right from the beginning, the story enchants the readers. However, the chapters are long enough to maybe be two chapters, so maybe cut them into two chapters. Keep up the great work.

Supernaturally great

Very intriguing, twisted and promising. Great potential

Brave

Once again, another great story. Partially because it has a werewolf type of creature but mainly because of the flow and rhythm of the story. Promising.

Remarkable

Excellent beginning. Promising, intriguing and very interesting. Just missing the rest of the story. Please do continue the good work.

Real Friendship

This author does a great job of reminding people why friends are so important. Even without an ending, this story can teach so much. Keep up the good work.

Fairies

So far, so good. The idea and plotline is interesting. A little strange but once the story is completed, will make more sense. Keep up the good work.

Life Story

Great story idea. However, maybe add more dialogue into it. So far it sounds a bit more like a diary or journal entry covering several days. Besides that, very promising.

Diary Indeed

Each chapter is so interesting. Seeing life through the eyes of a witch. Well done

Great Werewolf

Another great werewolf story. Very interesting. Hopefully the ending is just as good as what is written so far.

Running, running, great work

The runaway wolf is excellent. The drama of a werewolf and the challenges are quite interesting.

Complicated Love Story.

Two love interests is a great way to make a romance story so intriguing. Well written and the family drama adds a great twist.