What is your opinion?
Stone Cold
"Wonderful!!!!!π€© Short but hot π₯ story. I love it π "
Good
"I have enjoyed reading it so far"
Stone Cold
"For a short story this is one of the best ones Iβve read !!! I really loved how Mac and Nathalie got together !! I really wish you would make a part two or something !"
Amazing
"Loved it! Can't wait to read more!"
H O T
"Amazing. Such an absolute pleasure to read. How could it be equally hilarious and sexy? Loved every word. "
Super
"YOU. ARE. THE. DEAD. Oh my God. I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Or in Newspeak "Double Plus Good." "
Longer version please!
"As always, you are doing it again! Short or long novel , you always nailed it. Can we add more drama to this one please!? Love their banter π"
Stone cold
"Aaah! I liked the characters. Giving in to their kinky desires. β€οΈπ§‘"
Quick fun read
"Fun entertaining read "
Stone Cold
"Great story ππ"
Stone Cold
"I really liked the story but it was too short. I liked the authorβs writing style and the characters. It was getting really interesting when bam It was the end. I hope there will be more chapters to see where their relationship might go. "
Excellent, dark, and arousing.
"The author projects great details in her writing. I'd recommend this book to others "
Stone cold
"This story is firecracker...loooooooved it sooooo much...can't wait for more of your stories....with these 2 you already got me addicted to your writing...ty Author ππππππππππππππππ"
Cute & fast
"Hot, short and cute. If you like Outdoor, public & erotic youβll like it! "
Stone Cold
"Wow! What a fabulous short story. Very well written and very hot! Not rushed just perfect "
Fast and great
"That was quick, compelling, hot, and to the point. Leaves me wanting more of their story but at the same time satisfied as it is. Good job. "
Nice short story
"I like the chemistry between the two main characters. The only complaint I have is that I wish I could read more of it and that it wasn't so short lol. "
Editing required
"After a good edit, it should be more coherent and take care of a lot of distracting phrases that take away from the story."
Yum
"Maxβs character really drew me into the story. Love the ending."
Good read
"It was a good read with decent dialogue and minimal spelling mistakes. I can not wait to get to the end"
