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Balloon Man

"Very well written, the plot is something you don't ever want to think about happening. You would definitely want people like Alma's and Cye helping the police. "

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Good book

"Hard to read but a good book"

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Balloon Man

"Very disturbing and intriguing story here really loved the book "

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The Balloon Man

"Absolutely the best book I have ever red. I hated what they did to those children but I had to think to myself this is just a book. Very good and it's going to be hard to find another book that I liked as much as this one. Great job"

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Great work

"Great story!!!"

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Omg. Well done I lived this book. I could not put it down for even a second..

"A couple of spelling & grammar mistakes, but nothing that can't be fixed. I loved the book. The emotions of all the characters and the over all plot of the book was really well thought out, and resulted in a true page Turner. Well done."

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Balloon man

"Your story deserves a lot of audience; you can publish it on Novel Star Mobile App."

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Balloon 🎈 man

"Cross little orphan Annie with Stephen King type books and you get this delightful yet horrifying tale. Hard to read in some spots but worth it in the end. Bravo and look forward to your next effort"

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Awesome

"If it’s a movie, I’ll watch it hundred times. "

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Balloon man

"At first I didn't think I could read the story because of children being abused but the more I read the more I wanted to know if these evil people were going to get what was coming to them"

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So thrilling

"This book is both thrilling and full of horror too. I liked the fact that the author didn't make what was happening very obvious so that the reader would want to read on more. I highly recommend this book to readers who love mysterious and thriller books."

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Balloon Man

"Had me on the edge of my seat. Read it in two days, just couldn’t put it down. And the twists and turns....WOW!!!!!"

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The balloon man

"Story kept me interested. Writing style amazing... I could see the characters and the surroundings so clearly "

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Ballon man

"Really good reading , I very much enjoyed this!"

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Heart touching story

"This story is best "

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Balloon Man

"This is definitely the best horror story I've read"

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Goood boook

"Nice book good to read thank you ..I like scooter very much"

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The balloon man

"Would make a great movie excellent writing great suspense please write more "

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Balloon Man

"I really enjoyed your book. I actually laughed when Herme got caught with his own chain. Though this is the only story you have here, I don't believe you are a novice. Your work is so good. I love the way you bring everyone together. Best Wishes to you. I'd love to see more of your work. 🌹"

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Man oh man!

"I cannot stop reading! Have to find out if Alma figures out she found her granddaughter"

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