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Against Her Will

Such a busy, busy mystery. So many people affected. Though I didn't always agree with Donna I found her quite relatable. From what happened to Donna, it sounds like her attacker wanted her punished for her beauty. This explains Donna balking at her parents best intentions.

This is special as it's not the typical cloak and dagger mystery, but keeps you riveted right to the very last word. 🌹

Calliope's Wolf

You came up with some very interesting gifts. It was sad she couldn't use them when looking through his eyes. Great story. I can't wait for more. 5 Star book.🌹

Lycans Impostor Luna

With more twists and turns than you could expect, this gripping tale keeps you reading and fully engaged.

If you aren't already published, you certainly should be. I can't wait for your sequel🌹

Heed My Warning And Survive

This story is a roller coaster of emotions. Many twists and turns.
Definitely worth reading🌹

Apostasy

This story is both enraging and heartwarming. It shares the unbelievable strength of a mother's love.

I prefer the second ending because I believe we could all do with a bit of hope🌹

Down Into The Depths

Fantastic fantasy that you can't put down🌹

Alpha Micah Black Werewolf Detective

Not your typical werewolf fare, but this keeps you on the edge of your seat. Great plot, great suspense🌹

Cocaine Hearts

I think you've done a good job of making your point. The only mistake I noticed was when she followed Brandon to the hospital. You wrote them going to the woods in his car, then had her follow the ambulance in hers. Good read anyway🌹

Alpha Blood and Forbidden Love

Sweet story of romance that just happens to include violent death. Those who receive it deserve it. I will check some of your other works🌹

Saving Grace

Saving Grace was the best decision Joe ever made. Sweet tale of romance❤🌹

Wolf Pack

Interesting story but, it needs a little work. The beginning needs to be smoothed out. You do have alot of editing ahead. I'm not sure what you meant when referencing werewolves with feathers. Some words were not English. Perhaps you could get some help with that in editing. Overall it's a good effort🌹

An Offer She Can't Refuse

Such an unusual tale. I would read more from this author🌹

In The Shadows

I read your description of MixMatch and, the first thing I thought was wow. That critter isn't finding a date any time soon!
I was on the edge of my seat but, the ending is very sad. Looking for more🌹

Redeeming The Devil Earl

You have a lot of editing ahead but your story is worth the extra work. I must see what else you have🌹

Out Of The Mist

Great job! I enjoyed your story, especially the ending, when everything seems resolved. I can't wait to read your sequel🌹

The Mourn Trail

Great tale. Liked it🌹

The Entanglement

Poor Rowan, while she did make a mistake, her family was wrong to abandon her. They may not have thrown her out, but emotional abandonment is just as painful. Walker is the only saving grace.

I loved the way Parker took up for Rowan over the motel room. They're horrible people.

Parker and Rowan were made for each other. Even Grandma is a healing balm to Rowan's heart.

Though it's sad that Rowan lost her baby, it could also be a blessing in disguise. I can't wait to read more of this story. I hope you update often. Best of luck to you🌹

Inmate #1374 Joyce

I like your concept. This could really work into a fascinating book.
Although it's an interesting short story, there seems to be a lot of things glossed over or left out.

Joyce is very clearly mentally ill. We need more exploration of that. If Joyce didn't like the way Lacie treated Marilyn why did she not say something? Was something holding her back? If she said something, how did thst conversation go? Maybe if we were taken through some of Joyce's experiences, she might become more relatable. Maybe delve more into what Joyce felt, stages she went through after the shot. Were her parents there to say goodbye? Best of luck to you🌹

The Witches of Woodlington

Such a horrible ordeal for Jessie and Alex. It's great that they had each other to help them through. Gypsy is a hero too. I had all but decided Whiskey was to blame when the truth finally came out. I imagine you are already published, you don't write like a novice. I look forward to reading more of your work🌹

The Art And The CraftEe

Welcome to the vibrant, lively world of Joe Winstanton. He's the first wizard in six thousand years. He starts out with a cast of friends.. and enemies. Now the search is on for the third tower of magic. Unfortunately Mr Cranky awoke from his nap long enough to put poor Joe in the hospital. At this point the story takes off with a surprise plot twist...

Now I wonder what Tan will do? What the prisoners will do. Has he been picked up on the mana radar? Is help on the way? Keep reading for answers to these, and other questions🌹

Answering Natures Call

This story picks up where the Last Magus leaves off. In this portion we meet a whole new cast of well defined characters. On his way to the first tower Joe meets Mike. Mike has the right background and is quickly hired by Joe as his body guard. When they finally reach the tower they are both met by Archie, a friendly greeter for the school. Most of the characters are very honest and helpful. Natalie meets some new people as well 2 of them become friends, but one must meet his doom read on to find out who's who in this fascinating tale of good vs. evil🌹

Don't Try Any Of This

Highly engaging story, I could easily picture everything you wrote. I find myself upset with all the adults in this child's life. Everyone seems to have an agenda where Rosie is concerned. Because she is under age she has little choice but to put up with it. I hope you upload any future sequel to inkitt.

If you haven't entered this in the inkitt contest you should. This is as fine as anything I've found there.

I especially appreciated the way you handled sex in this story. You knew what was happening but, no graphic nitty gritty descriptions. For that reason I would feel comfortable sharing this with my friends or family. I certainly hope to read more from this marvelous,articulate word crafter❤🌹

Solomon

You can't help but root for Artemis and Sol to end up together. Both of them are stronger than they give themselves credit.

Alpha Eaton is bad news I was glad to see him go. It had to be Artemis or Sol that killed him. It was only fitting.

I was delighted at the end when they finally got together. They both deserve a lot of love.

You're a talented story weaver and I look forward to more of your work.🌹

The Grey Girl, The Van Tassel Murders

This story has a wonderful way of pointing out, that things are often not what they first appear to be.

Chloe, her three men, and a whole host of characters, conspire together to put evil in its place.

One can only hope for yet another sequel and wonder what they'll encounter next.

Will Aaron get together with Liza? Or will he find a ghost of his own?

If Alex and Chloe marry, is pregnancy even a possibility?

Whatever the story this cast will long live on in my memories🌹

The One That Came Back

What a humdinger of a story. I felt like I was flying by the seat of my pants the whole time. There was only one thing missing that would have made this five stars. What ever really happened to Johnny? The dead child that was supposed to be him, turned out to be a girl. We never find out and that's what is wrong. IMHO I think it could be written into the final conversation in the cemetery. Also we never find out the connection to the pictures found inside of the cigarette box. It doesn't take much to figure out what happened to fake Johnny though. Jack killed him. Everything else makes it a blockbuster. I will definitely want to check out your other stories.🌹

Stars Over Pagosa

Very wonderful ending to a breath taking story. Just when you think it's over there is a new plot twist. I was so disappointed when I thought Audra died. Seemed like an awful ending. Instead it was a wonderful surprise ending. I'm sure you can look forward to this one being published as well.🌹

A Plea For Help

You've done a wonderful job of teaching and important bit of wisdom by wrapping it up in a mystery and making it entertaining as well.

Of course the wisdom is in accepting yourself and enjoying whatever gifts are yours. If you can do those things everything else will fall into place. It will be as genuine as you are.

I can't wait to read more from this artist, to see what new pictures will be painted with words, and what new wisdom will be taught.🌹

Genisis

This story exposes some of the raw emotions involved with depression. If you wanted to add anything, you might discuss the physical pain that goes with depression.

Emily is a strong young woman because inspite of experiencing a crisis herself she still manages to help Lily and put her needs first. She must have the capacity to be a warm loving person.

The ending is uncertain yet offers hope as Emily finally realizes she can regain control of her own life. She realizes she doesn't want to die, she just needs to feel like she has control over what happens, and can add meaning to whatever she does.

You are a gifted author and I hope you continue to write🌹

Don't Cross The X

This is an incredible story. I had to keep turning the page to see what happened next. It is a sad story but it does have a happy ending. She finally was reunited with her loved ones. I wonder if it really is true like it says in the beginning? You wrote this well enough to actually make someone wonder and think about it. You definitely deserve publishing🌹

The Angel's Christmas

I chose this rating because I find it on par with fiction already published.

This is a great story for teens, young adults or anyone who enjoys a good mystery combined with fantasy. 🌹

The Angel Rallies Round

I would love to have your characters as friends. I love how they are kind and loving even though they carry great strength.

Katrina was a great name for the wanna be murderess. I was happy to see Robin and his friends survive that particular hurricane. The whole story was great. Perfect for teens and young adults 🌹

The Angel Of San Diego

You have a very well written story. I see action adventure, comedy, drama and romance blended perfectly. I found the entire story to be a page turner. Robin and Malissa make a perfect couple. Amanda Potts is as cute as can be. The cops reactions to Robin is fun.

You had people laughing and crying in the same chapter. That's much more than just a well written story, it's a gift. I wish you the best of luck and I look forward to reading your other works. 🌹

To Protect and Serve

Definitely publishable material. This story is suitable for the young at heart, and anyone who believes in the sweetness of romance 💖💖💖💖🌹

Guardian Reapers

This is a wonderful tale full of magic and imagination. I hope you continue to write, This was such a page turner, I finished in just a few hours. I'd be interested to see if you write anything else. ❤🌹

The Boarding School

You've created a very marketable book. Character development is great. Summer and Harry were made for each other. Your story just needs a good proof reading and it's ready to go. Other than that, you shouldn't do any other editing.

But I does seem natural that there would be some talk of marriage

Gripping Entertainment! Unusual

Unusual subject matter and gripping right to the end. 🌹

Wilson

I enjoyed your story. You could make it better by mentioning the date.It would give your readers a better idea as to when this happens🌹

Unexpected Turns:A Teen Pregnancy Story

Very heart felt story of a love that survives both good and bad. You did a great job🌹

Otherside

Awesome and amazing story. I can't wait to read more of your work🌹

Lost In Vegas

This deserves to be published. I hope you continue to write🌹

Her Ultima Wolf

Although this needs editing, this makes you a tough act to follow. Definitely a fun read🌹

Spellbound Mate

This is the funniest story I've read in ages. After editing you really should submit this for publication. Best of luck to you🌹

His Hybrid Pixie

I love all of the characters in this story. Rafe and Ariadne make a wonderful couple. Definitely an awesome read🌹

Sweet Vengeance

Although this works as a stand alone, I recommend reading Wolf Affliction first. It adds an additional layer of understanding. Either way this is packed full of all sorts of action and keeps you flying by the seat of your pants🌹

The Wolf Affliction

Such a wonderful fantasy. Juno is the kind of person you would want for a friend. I loved the characters you created. I'm looking forward to more🌹

The Uninvited Guest

I was drawn in and involved until the very last page🌹

The Fairy's Folly

Very entertaining story. Loved the fantasy🌹

Windswept Stars #4

Gripping tale of action/adventure, drama and romance. Definitely 5 stars🌹

Endangered Species

This is a relatable tale in a world gone mad. It keeps your eyes glued to the pages right to the end.🌹

Ugly Shoes

Warm hearted and engaging. Great for all ages🌹

Harvest Flower

Wonderful historical novel. I feel honored to have read it🌹

The Alphas Mutt

Wonderful fantasy, this goes down as one of the best🌹

Emerald Weaver

A wonderful finish for our fighting friends🌹

Lost & Found

Great plot with more surprises on the way🌹

Love Triangle

This keeps you on the edge of your seat🌹

The Sapphire Dreamer

This just keeps getting more interesting. I can't wait for the next book🌹

Baby of Mine

Very cute story with a wonderful ending. Perfect for those over 18 whose time for reading is short🌹

Making of a Dark Gamma Book 1

Intense story that keeps the reader tied to the characters.🌹

Alone

This story keeps the reader involved, right up to the end🌹

Alpha Joshua

Very enjoyable story. It was interesting to see how you handled each protagonist as they came up. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.🌹

Pathways

Intertaining short story. You must read it all the way. The ending is a big surprise🌹

Trapped Book 3

This is a great ending to an entertaining trilogy. Your plot twists are imaginative and surprising. With the right publisher I'm sure you'll do well.🌹

Uniquely Maid

Unique story and plot twists. Characters are not of the typical. Recommend for the young at heart🌹

Royal Meets Rough

This is publishable! You have definitely grown as a writer.
I will remember Athena and Ares🌹

Girls Rule

Great story, I hope there's a sequel🌹

Saving Allison

Wonderful story, it's entertaining and I love how it ends.🌹

Into The Wilderness

The unusual plot and plot twists make this an enjoyable read. I see you already have the first chapter of your sequel, Braving The Wilderness up. I hope you update often, I'm looking forward to it. ❤🌹

Love Me Mrs Alpha

Amazing story, full of suspense and plot twists🌹

The Alphas Fallen Angel

Romance and fantasy combined with plenty of action adventure for a great read.

You seem to have left room for a sequel. If you write it, I will read it🌹

Feather

Political thriller meets hot romance. Overall this makes for a compelling read🌹

What if He Didn't Die

Emotionally riveting. The reader is forever searching for the incomprehensible truth to what really happened🌹

Curse Me

Compelling story with interesting plot twists. Entertainment that draws you in. Wish their had been a more satisfying conclusion🌹

Alpha's Unwilling Mate

This was exciting and suspenseful.🌹

The Fake Wife

I love the plot. I can't wait to see where you take it.🌹

The Duke and The Rose

Exciting and passionate. I certainly enjoyed it. If you do decide to add anything,maybe adding the punishment for Dr Jeckel and mother-in-law. It's a good thing Nora wasn't pregnant.🌹

Lady Parker

A rollercoaster of emotions that grips to the last line.🌹

Little Rosie: The Beginning

Unfortunately if you're a child and an adult agrees to help you, they want something back. Sad that everyone else declines to get involved. I blame her parents❤🌹

Scarlett of Crescent Moon

Interesting mix of the supernatural. Unusual but fun.🌹

The Beta's Daughter

The best part about this story is the awesome plot twists🌹

Killer Dreams

This could easily become a best seller.🌹

Under Their Moon

OMG Excellent writing. I'm torn between the two. I can't wait to read your sequel!🌹

Slave to Sapphire

Dramatic tale masterfully written🌹

His Perfect Doll

Cute but intense. Nice Story. We need more from this talented author🌹

Becoming the Other Wife

That was intense! I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it.
After some editing I believe you have a winner🌹

The Rainy Season

Very cute story. I definitely enjoyed it🌹

Finding My Way to You

Two brothers in competition, plus one lovely young lady and the sparks will fly. Great Read!🌹

Finding Love in Tall Grass

Enjoyable novelette. Did they really have a picnic sitting in the snow? You might want to change the setting.🌹

Unexpected Love

Wonderful short story. Love the surprises.❤🌹

Death and the A.DA.

A most unusual story of romance. I had difficulty putting it down even when my eyes get tired.🌹

The God of War

Julie and Max were certainly made for each other. Still, it's a very unique tale that brings them there🌹

The Lucky Winner

What a wild story. Yet there are no winners in this tale of woe. So intrigued it's hard to put down🌹

Broken Vows

Very engaging story. I find it dramatically hopeful.🌹

Broken Souls (1)

This book draws you in and allows you to feel surrounded by the characters. By the last page you feel connected.🌹

The Chronicles of Moon

I was engaged from the first page to the last. ❤🌹

Trapped in 1895

Great story. The imagery was quite vivid. I'm looking forward to more.🌹

UTrapped

A masterfully written novelette🌹

My Cruel Blind Alpha

Sometimes love hurts. In this story it hurts all the time. I kept looking for something that could fix it but, nothing had the desired effect. Alec is a selfish male who got much luckier than he deserved.

I look forward to reading your sequel🌹

Collision

Wonderful piece of historical fiction. Vivid and lively🌹

Ugly Duckling

This romance turned into a mystery right before my eyes. I love the setting and the animals. Great ending too.🌹

Okemah

It is a grizzly story. It's always sad when people are cruel to each other. Though your story suggests that the antagonists are Christians, I maintain that they never understood the word. If they had understood, they could not do what they did.

Your story stops short. I read that you plan more. I will check your profile, I would love to read more.🌹

The Sentinel of Cassendar: Resquarian

This is publishable, though you may need to break them up into smaller books. Some publishers won't accept a book this large. Your characters are full and vibrant. I could recommend this to any woman young or old. I do love the ending, it makes everything your characters experienced worth it❤🌹

Bully

Your story is short but powerful.
Never take the people in your life for granted. You never know how long you have🌹

Finding Jane Doe

Riveting story. I found it hard to put it down for work🌹

What Happens in Vegas

There aren't too many rom coms in book form, (most are movies)but this is great.
Sweet ending too🌹

Breaking the Curse

That was full of action. I definitely enjoyed the story. I look forward to reading more of the series. I wonder if you've thought about offering the series as a gift set for the holidays?

Best Wishes🌹

Escaping the Curse

Very engaging story. I can't wait to read more.🌹

Protecting Olivia

You have some editing issues but that's about it. I'm not surprised that you are published. You do a wonderful job. I just miss the wedding. I would have loved that.

Best wishes to you🌹

The Gem of the Romano Dynasty

The only unanswered question is, what is the family business? I loved the story. Perhaps I should have concluded that they were mafia but there are many ways to gain wealth. Wealth breeds connections and connections breed whatever you want. You are a gifted writer. I look forward to your future work.🌹

Her Mythical Warriors Book 1

Wonderful story. I can't wait to read book 2🌹

The Elevator Incident

That was a wonderful story. I look forward to more🌹

Her Dangerous Neighbor

Great story! I can't wait to read more. I'm surprised that you aren't published yet. You write stories that will be long remembered🌹

Lo Something's Out There

That was a fascinating short story. It was gripping and kept me on the edge of my seat.🌹

Healing His Mate

This is just one installment of a brilliant series! Everything fits together perfectly.
You have a well thought out plot and everything interconnected. You created great characters. I can see people wanting to hang out with them.

I hope to see more of your work in the future🌹

Alpha Rejected

Great story! I was in all the way through.
The end, and the way they solve their final problem, seems very unique🌹

Alpha and Omega

That was a very enjoyable story. I especially like the way it ended🌹

Hotel Lamia

I'm not that big on the sex but, the story overall was terrific. I found your plot was unique. I look forward to reading more of your work.🌹

At The Stroke Of Midnight

This is my first changeling story. This carries a much darker atmosphere than what I'm used to.

Azalea gives herself much too hard of a time. Her new Alpha had done what he had to do. Either way she would have been an alpha's wife. (Luna?)

I was sad when she died. I was hoping she would get to see her parents again. I'm not sure her parents would have understood her position though.

I would like to read more of your work soon
Best Wishes🌹

The Drycleaner's Mess

Great story. If you chose to change anything you might include a reunion between mother and daughter.
Maybe Grandpa could come with her.

You have a wonderful imagination and I look forward to more of your work🌹

The Stand In

Great story, very hot! Very well written.🌹

Message From An Angel

The second ending is definitely the best. This was a great story. I look forward to more.❤🌹

In Deep Waters

It can be very difficult to write a good short story but, you have done a terrific job. I hope Lance and Sophie make it together.
I look forward to reading more of your work.🌹

Alpha Bond

Very interesting story. Your characters are great. I'm looking forward to reading more.🌹

To The Gates Of Reality

Great fantasy! I can't decide which is better. Joe and his magic or, the reactions of the heads of state to Joe and his magic.

As always, I'm looking forward to more🌹

Aztec Treasure

Another action packed entertaining story. As usual, looking forward to more.🌹

The First Flame

Very exciting story. Ran and Eon are cute together. I'm sure there must be babies in their future.❤🌹

Undercover

I don't believe you've ever written anything that wasn't good. Your stories are always lively and interesting. Your stories are well thought out. I'm sure I'm just another one of your many fans❤🌹

Mu Eternal Mate

So many answers to our questions in this third part of the trilogy. Your ending is perfect.🌹

My Luna Mate

Lyra and Alexander are my favorite characters. They share a love I'm sure will last through the ages.

I'm a bit confused about Jaxon and Evan. As difficult as it seems for werewolves to conceive and make it through the pregnancy, it's hard to believe that the Moon Goddess would plan two men or two women as mates.

I could understand if they were human. Humans get to pick their own mates. Seems kind of inconvenient for wolves.

I'm definitely looking forward to your next book.❤🌹

My Orphan Mate

I like your characters. Lyra is sweet and very relatable. You threw in some pretty good plot twists.
This could be a great novel for women over 18🌹

The Alphas Mate

Your story takes one on a rollercoaster of emotions. I was so happy for Liza when she met Asher. It looked like she would finally feel cherished and protected...but that was just the beginning of the drama that surrounds Liza's life...❤🌹

When Love Comes Around

I want more! This is great. We need another book where they go through their pregnancies. They all share the same doctor. It could be such fun.

Megan is so cute. She and Trevor were destined to be together. I wanna go to Ginas' wedding. For that matter, I'd love to go to Mehans' wedding.

But you see, that's how cute you wrote your stories.

Don't ever stop writing, you have a special gift. May you use it wisely❤🌹

A Perfectly Imperfect Love

Taken in context your story rates a 5. You might want to market these as a set. One thing you have to say about Braydon. Being a fireman is a very HOT job. In more ways than one.Lol

I look forward to the last of your trilogy. So I'm off to read more❤🌹

I'll Run To You

That was such a sweet story of love and romance. Hunter magically said all the right things. Evie really wanted to give him a chance. McKinley really needs a daddy and what better daddy than her own.

I love Evie's friends. They are very special people to be able to move intuitively. Especially Granny Mable I think it was.

I can't wait for you to write more. I was all set to go to a wedding!😂 you did say something about a second book. I'd love to read it when you do.❤🌹

Wild At Heart

I've enjoyed the second book in your trilogy. The twins seem exotic and proud until you get to know them. After that they are still exotic.

I was sorry Stefan got away. He enjoys hurting others too much. As it is, I have a feeling he and Natalie will be working together again soon.

Holly was an interesting addition. I can't help but wonder what she will do in your last book.

Derek needs to stay dead and whatever Holly conjured stopped. It was one thing to talk to him in the afterlife but that's one meeting Emma should miss.

I have to go start on your last book
Little Wolf🌹

Beauty In The Beast

I definitely enjoyed your story. You bring your characters to life and the reader feels like they are beside them the whole time. Emma is my favorite even though she makes mistakes in who she can trust. It's a good thing she can fight like she does.

Jackson and Derick are both clearly insane. Derick just hides it better. Speaking of dead wolf walking, I hope that this time Jackson stays dead. This time he doesn't have Derick to save him. Besides how many times can a man/wolf get blown up?

I hope Emma grows to trust Nick. He seems to be the one made just for her.

I can't wait to read your sequel. You have a new fan🌹

Beautiful Mistake

This is a great story for young adults. I love that they ended up married and in love. Tessa dying was definitely a plot twist. Certainly a story worth reading.🌹

Life After You

When I saw the title, I thought it probably was a story of broken love. I didn't expect death. The way it came felt wrong. He was up and fine. That shouldn't have been the end of Landon. After that everything she did was just settling.

I'm not sure that realizing not every story has a happy ending, is a good reason to confront your readers with that fact.

It probably didn't help that my dog is dying. Readers come to find escape from hardships.🌹

Me and My Shadow

Michael was an interesting character. I would have liked to hear more about him. Who were the thugs that never wanted to see him again? What were they into?

Renée inspired respect

I enjoyed reading this story because of the strong bonds the characters formed with each other.

I was really happy that Cecilia finally forgave Eric. He did make a mistake but, it was made out of love. They belong together.

You're a gifted writer, I look forward to reading more of your work🌹

Delicate Hearts

I don't think this story is over yet. We need to see a wedding and children. Plus as often is the case, people who show up expecting more money because they've been paid off before. All of your characters were well defined and loveable.

Lucas did a wonderful job of fooling everyone except Jasmine. I wonder if Jasmine would choose Lucy as her first child's godmother. I'm sure she'd be a bridesmaid.

I'm an avid reader and none of the published novels I've read were any better.I'm definitely interested in reading more from you.
Best Wishes🌹

In Full Color

If I wasn't already a fan, I would certainly be one now for sure. I was so happy to see Axel finally find relief.

I know war is hell but I was sorry to lose Molly and Beast. I found your description of the memorial particularly interesting. I'm talking about when their spirits leave their bodies. I wonder what you've experienced in the past.

It was with great relief that I found everyone else survived....well. except for John. His was the only death I cheered. He had to die either in battle or according to werewolf law. What an awful traitor.

I can't wait to read your sequel. Happy writing my friend🌹

Silent Noise

I see no reason why this shouldn't be published. The best part is where the crawler gets trapped. The saddest is when Lily loses her sight. The only reason I didn't say Raidon is because he survived.

You offered us a roller coaster ride of emotions. Thank you for the ride. I look forward to reading your sequel🌹

Daughters of The King

Gripping story. Olya, Zelle, and Gunnar ended up to be the real victims. Everyone else's agenda had more to do with power than anything.

Although I enjoyed the story, I was disappointed when Olya felt the need to shoot Gunnar. Like many of your readers I had held out hope until the very end...🌹

Broken Bonds

I enjoyed your story very much. If you were to change anything, perhaps a chapter or two from Rae's parents point of view. I understand what they did but not why they did it. Lae needs an opportunity to be something besides a total hothead.
You never told us what S. stood for. What's his story. It was kinda glossed over. Perhaps more about Rae and Talon getting together at the end.

Maybe you could write a sequel where Brynn finds her mate.
I was sorry when Elaine died but it made a plot twist that explained most of what was going on. Your plot kept me rivited.I look forward to reading more of your work🌹

Gar Beyond The Quiet

I suppose I should mention that I listened to harp music from an anointed harpist.
Undoubtedly that set my mood.❤

Though this is fantasy, still, I believe you got some things right. Man truly does have an Insatiable need for love. Many don't seem to understand that though. So they spend their lives trying to satisfy their thirst in all the wrong ways.

I was surprised and delighted when Catriona and Nicholas got together. Micah was an interesting addition. I found myself able to relate to her childish innocence. She offers her heart of gold without reserve. Love in it's purist form.

I would love to read more of your work. Best wishes to you..🌹

Remember This

Remember This is the title. You couldn't have picked a better one. I will remember this for a very long time. You see, my uncle jumped to his death off just such a bridge. I could have handled his depression, just not what led up to it.

Dr Alan is the doctor every mental health patient needs and both families are made up of people Molly dearly loves. In the end, love is the only reason Molly lives, but Charley's love is what saves her life.

I really love a good mystery but you really kept me guessing. In most mysteries there is a culprit. I never expected a pair of culprits.

You made me feel like I was there, and Molly was my friend. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work as soon as possible🌹

Thorn (Werewolf)

You have broken all the usual rules of werewolves and created your own. It's quite refreshing.
Lyle was a vile creature. I was happy to see his end. I also enjoyed watching as Devon grew up and discovered who she was. Thorn is my hero.

No doubt I'll enjoy reading whatever you post on inkitt🌹

My New Neighbor

Too much info unnaturally comes up. Let the info unfold naturally and it can work.🌹

Frozen Secrets

I was so disappointed after reading the first part of your trilogy. You might as well add these pages onto your first book.

This segment offers promise when Frostbite comes to the rescue of an innocent young girl. Unfortunately it's short lived as this was obviously rushed.

Hopefully your other stories will be better.🌹

Secret Powers

Great fantasy for teens or young adults. Very entertaining coming of age story.
I look forward to seeing where this goes.🌹

The Boss

What a sweet story. Maybe sometimes someone can be hurt so badly that they have to learn to love all over again.

The weddings were wonderful. I believe you tied up all the loose ends nicely. You are quite gifted and I look forward to reading more of your works.🌹

Dangerous Love

You've done a wonderful job. As I read the comments, I realized I wasn't the only one who loved it.

I love your character development. I really don't like Daniel. I've seen people like him. He leaves a string of victims in his wake. Kate is beyond words. If she's been reincarnated, she was probably a lizard in her past life.Lol She's the kind that never has friends...just competition. If she got with Daniel, they would form the kind of couple you only expect to see at Halloween.

I can't wait till the marriages begin. I must go find your sequel. Siena must get straightened out with Alec. I think she's in for a shock if she comes to understand everything. Maybe they'll have a double ceremony.

Best wishes

Their Bonds of Love

When I think about your writing, I need to consider the power in your words.
For example, can you bring someone to the edge of their seat? I would have to give that a huge YES.
You manage to have every man say exactly what every woman wants to hear her man say to her. Most of the women accept it on cue. The women and their gowns are so beautiful, everyone wants to be them.
I love how Eleri extended mercy on Lady Riona. 10 years of being a decent person isn't a bad idea. Smart to check up on her.
I wish you could consider adding an epilogue. Something that shows the family of a little prince and princess. They could be practicing their magic. Still too young to shift.
If you write more stories around these characters, I'll be right there Lol😂
Actually I hope to be lucky enough to get to read whatever you choose to write
You write about the kind of people you would want for friends. Best Wishes for you and yours🌹

Their Bonds Of Duty

It's an interesting story but their magic seems very weak. Their wards seem useless.

I loved it when Eleri and Conri finally got together. It's amazing how love is destroyed by hate.

I look forward to reading your next novel in the series🌹

Their Bonds Of Fate

Another great story! I can't wait to read the rest. I'm definitely a fan of Eleri and I think in the end she'll see Conri as her mate.

The Havens seem to be great people. It's a shame the other young lady, Aioli? (I probably misspelled that) It's a shame she has such loose lips. I don't think she meant any harm. She's just easily taken in.
Bren is a problem. He will need to be confounded at the very least.

Bren and the rest of Lord Fellen's cast of characters will need to be overcome for this to work.

I'm a binge reader so, I'm gonna head back over and, see what I can find🌹

Facing Him Again

You have a very cute story. Unfortunately, you also have some heavy editing ahead. Because of some of the mistakes you made, I suspect English isn't your first language. You may want to use a professional editing service.

Your story would be good for teen/young adult readers. It's hard to find something safe for young readers. I find your story refreshing. Best of luck to you🌹

The Queens Command

I love the way you ended your delightful series. Anwen, Maddoc and their families are wonderful characters. I have heard rumors of a rewrite where Killian and Mathias get together. I hope you don't do that. Instead let them meet women special enough to change their minds. Since the man Killian was attached to is happily married to a woman, it wouldn't be so hard to do.

You are truly a gifted writer and I hope you are published soon. I can find no fault with your series. You have the ability with your writing, to shape culture. Best wishes to you in whatever you do.🌹

The Kings Promise

I'm so glad they will finally be married. Once they are married no more phoney people trying to force love where it doesn't belong.

Wonderful story! I'm not sure if you have anymore but I will have to check.🌹

The Princess's Obligation

Wonderful tale with good moral lessons.
I find that I can't wait to see how they manage it all between two kingdoms but I believe they will. I'm rooting for young love.🌹

Tales of Regventus Book 6 Aurumist

You have created s great series. I was happy when they won. I missed Anzel but I'm glad he wasn't stuck where she had been. Philo had to die. There would have been no justice otherwise. Once edited you should have a winner🌹