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Against Her Will

Such a busy, busy mystery. So many people affected. Though I didn't always agree with Donna I found her quite relatable. From what happened to Donna, it sounds like her attacker wanted her punished for her beauty. This explains Donna balking at her parents best intentions.

This is special as it's not the typical cloak and dagger mystery, but keeps you riveted right to the very last word. 🌹

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The Entanglement

Poor Rowan, while she did make a mistake, her family was wrong to abandon her. They may not have thrown her out, but emotional abandonment is just as painful. Walker is the only saving grace.

I loved the way Parker took up for Rowan over the motel room. They're horrible people.

Parker and Rowan were made for each other. Even Grandma is a healing balm to Rowan's heart.

Though it's sad that Rowan lost her baby, it could also be a blessing in disguise. I can't wait to read more of this story. I hope you update often. Best of luck to you🌹

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Inmate #1374 Joyce

I like your concept. This could really work into a fascinating book.
Although it's an interesting short story, there seems to be a lot of things glossed over or left out.

Joyce is very clearly mentally ill. We need more exploration of that. If Joyce didn't like the way Lacie treated Marilyn why did she not say something? Was something holding her back? If she said something, how did thst conversation go? Maybe if we were taken through some of Joyce's experiences, she might become more relatable. Maybe delve more into what Joyce felt, stages she went through after the shot. Were her parents there to say goodbye? Best of luck to you🌹

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The Witches of Woodlington

Such a horrible ordeal for Jessie and Alex. It's great that they had each other to help them through. Gypsy is a hero too. I had all but decided Whiskey was to blame when the truth finally came out. I imagine you are already published, you don't write like a novice. I look forward to reading more of your work🌹

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The Art And The CraftEe

Welcome to the vibrant, lively world of Joe Winstanton. He's the first wizard in six thousand years. He starts out with a cast of friends.. and enemies. Now the search is on for the third tower of magic. Unfortunately Mr Cranky awoke from his nap long enough to put poor Joe in the hospital. At this point the story takes off with a surprise plot twist...

Now I wonder what Tan will do? What the prisoners will do. Has he been picked up on the mana radar? Is help on the way? Keep reading for answers to these, and other questions🌹

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Answering Natures Call

This story picks up where the Last Magus leaves off. In this portion we meet a whole new cast of well defined characters. On his way to the first tower Joe meets Mike. Mike has the right background and is quickly hired by Joe as his body guard. When they finally reach the tower they are both met by Archie, a friendly greeter for the school. Most of the characters are very honest and helpful. Natalie meets some new people as well 2 of them become friends, but one must meet his doom read on to find out who's who in this fascinating tale of good vs. evil🌹

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Don't Try Any Of This

Highly engaging story, I could easily picture everything you wrote. I find myself upset with all the adults in this child's life. Everyone seems to have an agenda where Rosie is concerned. Because she is under age she has little choice but to put up with it. I hope you upload any future sequel to inkitt.

If you haven't entered this in the inkitt contest you should. This is as fine as anything I've found there.

I especially appreciated the way you handled sex in this story. You knew what was happening but, no graphic nitty gritty descriptions. For that reason I would feel comfortable sharing this with my friends or family. I certainly hope to read more from this marvelous,articulate word crafter❤🌹

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Solomon

You can't help but root for Artemis and Sol to end up together. Both of them are stronger than they give themselves credit.

Alpha Eaton is bad news I was glad to see him go. It had to be Artemis or Sol that killed him. It was only fitting.

I was delighted at the end when they finally got together. They both deserve a lot of love.

You're a talented story weaver and I look forward to more of your work.🌹

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The Grey Girl, The Van Tassel Murders

This story has a wonderful way of pointing out, that things are often not what they first appear to be.

Chloe, her three men, and a whole host of characters, conspire together to put evil in its place.

One can only hope for yet another sequel and wonder what they'll encounter next.

Will Aaron get together with Liza? Or will he find a ghost of his own?

If Alex and Chloe marry, is pregnancy even a possibility?

Whatever the story this cast will long live on in my memories🌹

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The One That Came Back

What a humdinger of a story. I felt like I was flying by the seat of my pants the whole time. There was only one thing missing that would have made this five stars. What ever really happened to Johnny? The dead child that was supposed to be him, turned out to be a girl. We never find out and that's what is wrong. IMHO I think it could be written into the final conversation in the cemetery. Also we never find out the connection to the pictures found inside of the cigarette box. It doesn't take much to figure out what happened to fake Johnny though. Jack killed him. Everything else makes it a blockbuster. I will definitely want to check out your other stories.🌹

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Stars Over Pagosa

Very wonderful ending to a breath taking story. Just when you think it's over there is a new plot twist. I was so disappointed when I thought Audra died. Seemed like an awful ending. Instead it was a wonderful surprise ending. I'm sure you can look forward to this one being published as well.🌹

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A Plea For Help

You've done a wonderful job of teaching and important bit of wisdom by wrapping it up in a mystery and making it entertaining as well.

Of course the wisdom is in accepting yourself and enjoying whatever gifts are yours. If you can do those things everything else will fall into place. It will be as genuine as you are.

I can't wait to read more from this artist, to see what new pictures will be painted with words, and what new wisdom will be taught.🌹

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Genisis

This story exposes some of the raw emotions involved with depression. If you wanted to add anything, you might discuss the physical pain that goes with depression.

Emily is a strong young woman because inspite of experiencing a crisis herself she still manages to help Lily and put her needs first. She must have the capacity to be a warm loving person.

The ending is uncertain yet offers hope as Emily finally realizes she can regain control of her own life. She realizes she doesn't want to die, she just needs to feel like she has control over what happens, and can add meaning to whatever she does.

You are a gifted author and I hope you continue to write🌹

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Don't Cross The X

This is an incredible story. I had to keep turning the page to see what happened next. It is a sad story but it does have a happy ending. She finally was reunited with her loved ones. I wonder if it really is true like it says in the beginning? You wrote this well enough to actually make someone wonder and think about it. You definitely deserve publishing🌹

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To Protect and Serve

Definitely publishable material. This story is suitable for the young at heart, and anyone who believes in the sweetness of romance 💖💖💖💖🌹

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Guardian Reapers

This is a wonderful tale full of magic and imagination. I hope you continue to write, This was such a page turner, I finished in just a few hours. I'd be interested to see if you write anything else. ❤🌹

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The Boarding School

You've created a very marketable book. Character development is great. Summer and Harry were made for each other. Your story just needs a good proof reading and it's ready to go. Other than that, you shouldn't do any other editing.

But I does seem natural that there would be some talk of marriage

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Gripping Entertainment! Unusual

Unusual subject matter and gripping right to the end. 🌹

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The Imagical House

I've often heard that short stories are harder to write. Most come of with abrupt endings that leave out the story.

You seem to have struck s good balance. The ending is not abrupt at all. Instead, I feel inspired by imagining what I would do in their situation.

I hope to read more from you❤🌹

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Eclipse

The ending seems too abrupt. Good story otherwise. Very entertaining🌹

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My Luna Mate

Lyra and Alexander are my favorite characters. They share a love I'm sure will last through the ages.

I'm a bit confused about Jaxon and Evan. As difficult as it seems for werewolves to conceive and make it through the pregnancy, it's hard to believe that the Moon Goddess would plan two men or two women as mates.

I could understand if they were human. Humans get to pick their own mates. Seems kind of inconvenient for wolves.

I'm definitely looking forward to your next book.❤🌹

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My Orphan Mate

I like your characters. Lyra is sweet and very relatable. You threw in some pretty good plot twists.
This could be a great novel for women over 18🌹

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The Alphas Mate

Your story takes one on a rollercoaster of emotions. I was so happy for Liza when she met Asher. It looked like she would finally feel cherished and protected...but that was just the beginning of the drama that surrounds Liza's life...❤🌹

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The Mourn Trail

Great tale. Liked it🌹

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When Love Comes Around

I want more! This is great. We need another book where they go through their pregnancies. They all share the same doctor. It could be such fun.

Megan is so cute. She and Trevor were destined to be together. I wanna go to Ginas' wedding. For that matter, I'd love to go to Mehans' wedding.

But you see, that's how cute you wrote your stories.

Don't ever stop writing, you have a special gift. May you use it wisely❤🌹

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A Perfectly Imperfect Love

Taken in context your story rates a 5. You might want to market these as a set. One thing you have to say about Braydon. Being a fireman is a very HOT job. In more ways than one.Lol

I look forward to the last of your trilogy. So I'm off to read more❤🌹

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I'll Run To You

That was such a sweet story of love and romance. Hunter magically said all the right things. Evie really wanted to give him a chance. McKinley really needs a daddy and what better daddy than her own.

I love Evie's friends. They are very special people to be able to move intuitively. Especially Granny Mable I think it was.

I can't wait for you to write more. I was all set to go to a wedding!😂 you did say something about a second book. I'd love to read it when you do.❤🌹

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Wild At Heart

I've enjoyed the second book in your trilogy. The twins seem exotic and proud until you get to know them. After that they are still exotic.

I was sorry Stefan got away. He enjoys hurting others too much. As it is, I have a feeling he and Natalie will be working together again soon.

Holly was an interesting addition. I can't help but wonder what she will do in your last book.

Derek needs to stay dead and whatever Holly conjured stopped. It was one thing to talk to him in the afterlife but that's one meeting Emma should miss.

I have to go start on your last book
Little Wolf🌹

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Beauty In The Beast

I definitely enjoyed your story. You bring your characters to life and the reader feels like they are beside them the whole time. Emma is my favorite even though she makes mistakes in who she can trust. It's a good thing she can fight like she does.

Jackson and Derick are both clearly insane. Derick just hides it better. Speaking of dead wolf walking, I hope that this time Jackson stays dead. This time he doesn't have Derick to save him. Besides how many times can a man/wolf get blown up?

I hope Emma grows to trust Nick. He seems to be the one made just for her.

I can't wait to read your sequel. You have a new fan🌹

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Beautiful Mistake

This is a great story for young adults. I love that they ended up married and in love. Tessa dying was definitely a plot twist. Certainly a story worth reading.🌹

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The Thief's Trials

This is certainly a wild tale. The only thing left out was the final disposition of Prince Tahir. What happened to him after he was lead away by the guards?

What ever became of the brazen bull? One can only hope that such a device would be melted down and made into something else.
Just about anything else. Cooking pots come to mind unless the metal is considered tainted due to its history.

I'm looking forward to other stories written by this artist and author🌹

Whatever happened to Yima? Was a home found for her as well? Will she and King Ira fall in love?

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Rejected Alpha

This story grabs you in the first chapter and refuses to let go. I can't wait to find out who Emily's father really is. What was her mother? Was she fully human?

I hope the twins are ok. I hope in the end that Emily and Brion find their happily ever after. That might depend on who her father really is.

You have a lot of editing ahead of you. Most of it is fine tuning the language. You need to know the difference between past and passed or the difference between then and than. I'm impressed with the job you've done with a second language. I'll be eagerly looking forward to your updates🌹

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Life After You

When I saw the title, I thought it probably was a story of broken love. I didn't expect death. The way it came felt wrong. He was up and fine. That shouldn't have been the end of Landon. After that everything she did was just settling.

I'm not sure that realizing not every story has a happy ending, is a good reason to confront your readers with that fact.

It probably didn't help that my dog is dying. Readers come to find escape from hardships.🌹

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Me and My Shadow

Michael was an interesting character. I would have liked to hear more about him. Who were the thugs that never wanted to see him again? What were they into?

Renée inspired respect

I enjoyed reading this story because of the strong bonds the characters formed with each other.

I was really happy that Cecilia finally forgave Eric. He did make a mistake but, it was made out of love. They belong together.

You're a gifted writer, I look forward to reading more of your work🌹

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Four In One

This is a very interesting mystery. By the end it looks like half the town is guilty, yet unaware. I suspected Eric at the start, but then was convinced I was wrong. It almost got away from him when Farlan had him at gunpoint.

Gripping until the very end. I hope to see more of your work🌹

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Delicate Hearts

I don't think this story is over yet. We need to see a wedding and children. Plus as often is the case, people who show up expecting more money because they've been paid off before. All of your characters were well defined and loveable.

Lucas did a wonderful job of fooling everyone except Jasmine. I wonder if Jasmine would choose Lucy as her first child's godmother. I'm sure she'd be a bridesmaid.

I'm an avid reader and none of the published novels I've read were any better.I'm definitely interested in reading more from you.
Best Wishes🌹

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In Full Color

If I wasn't already a fan, I would certainly be one now for sure. I was so happy to see Axel finally find relief.

I know war is hell but I was sorry to lose Molly and Beast. I found your description of the memorial particularly interesting. I'm talking about when their spirits leave their bodies. I wonder what you've experienced in the past.

It was with great relief that I found everyone else survived....well. except for John. His was the only death I cheered. He had to die either in battle or according to werewolf law. What an awful traitor.

I can't wait to read your sequel. Happy writing my friend🌹

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Daughters of The King

Gripping story. Olya, Zelle, and Gunnar ended up to be the real victims. Everyone else's agenda had more to do with power than anything.

Although I enjoyed the story, I was disappointed when Olya felt the need to shoot Gunnar. Like many of your readers I had held out hope until the very end...🌹

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Broken Bonds

I enjoyed your story very much. If you were to change anything, perhaps a chapter or two from Rae's parents point of view. I understand what they did but not why they did it. Lae needs an opportunity to be something besides a total hothead.
You never told us what S. stood for. What's his story. It was kinda glossed over. Perhaps more about Rae and Talon getting together at the end.

Maybe you could write a sequel where Brynn finds her mate.
I was sorry when Elaine died but it made a plot twist that explained most of what was going on. Your plot kept me rivited.I look forward to reading more of your work🌹

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The Love Of The Forgotten

It was a good thing Thad finally made it back to the Palace. You certainly know how to build suspense. I'm still waiting for Mae and the new King to get married.

It's a pity Highest One got away but I don't think it should do him much good. Now that the people are turning on the temples I feel optimistic. Looking forward to reading more🌹

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The Curse of The Blessed

I enjoyed your story. No question Lady Henrietta got what she deserved. I confess I had to read one passage more than once, to be sure I read it correctly. You were describing a kiss and wrote, "As his lips went down her throat" perhaps you worded it slightly different but that was as close as I remember. I thought, was that a kiss or a plunger attack?

I always enjoy your stories and I look forward to reading many more🌹

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Gar Beyond The Quiet

I suppose I should mention that I listened to harp music from an anointed harpist.
Undoubtedly that set my mood.❤

Though this is fantasy, still, I believe you got some things right. Man truly does have an Insatiable need for love. Many don't seem to understand that though. So they spend their lives trying to satisfy their thirst in all the wrong ways.

I was surprised and delighted when Catriona and Nicholas got together. Micah was an interesting addition. I found myself able to relate to her childish innocence. She offers her heart of gold without reserve. Love in it's purist form.

I would love to read more of your work. Best wishes to you..🌹

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Remember This

Remember This is the title. You couldn't have picked a better one. I will remember this for a very long time. You see, my uncle jumped to his death off just such a bridge. I could have handled his depression, just not what led up to it.

Dr Alan is the doctor every mental health patient needs and both families are made up of people Molly dearly loves. In the end, love is the only reason Molly lives, but Charley's love is what saves her life.

I really love a good mystery but you really kept me guessing. In most mysteries there is a culprit. I never expected a pair of culprits.

You made me feel like I was there, and Molly was my friend. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work as soon as possible🌹

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Thorn (Werewolf)

You have broken all the usual rules of werewolves and created your own. It's quite refreshing.
Lyle was a vile creature. I was happy to see his end. I also enjoyed watching as Devon grew up and discovered who she was. Thorn is my hero.

No doubt I'll enjoy reading whatever you post on inkitt🌹

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Warriors Mates

Overall I think you did a good job. Despite editing issues, the pages flew by for me.
I see no reason not to do a sequel on Vincent Stanford. Please include more fun for your characters this time.

I look forward to reading more🌹

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My New Neighbor

Too much info unnaturally comes up. Let the info unfold naturally and it can work.🌹

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Frozen Secrets

I was so disappointed after reading the first part of your trilogy. You might as well add these pages onto your first book.

This segment offers promise when Frostbite comes to the rescue of an innocent young girl. Unfortunately it's short lived as this was obviously rushed.

Hopefully your other stories will be better.🌹

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Secret Powers

Great fantasy for teens or young adults. Very entertaining coming of age story.
I look forward to seeing where this goes.🌹

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The Boss

What a sweet story. Maybe sometimes someone can be hurt so badly that they have to learn to love all over again.

The weddings were wonderful. I believe you tied up all the loose ends nicely. You are quite gifted and I look forward to reading more of your works.🌹

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Dangerous Love

You've done a wonderful job. As I read the comments, I realized I wasn't the only one who loved it.

I love your character development. I really don't like Daniel. I've seen people like him. He leaves a string of victims in his wake. Kate is beyond words. If she's been reincarnated, she was probably a lizard in her past life.Lol She's the kind that never has friends...just competition. If she got with Daniel, they would form the kind of couple you only expect to see at Halloween.

I can't wait till the marriages begin. I must go find your sequel. Siena must get straightened out with Alec. I think she's in for a shock if she comes to understand everything. Maybe they'll have a double ceremony.

Best wishes

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Their Bonds of Love

When I think about your writing, I need to consider the power in your words.
For example, can you bring someone to the edge of their seat? I would have to give that a huge YES.
You manage to have every man say exactly what every woman wants to hear her man say to her. Most of the women accept it on cue. The women and their gowns are so beautiful, everyone wants to be them.
I love how Eleri extended mercy on Lady Riona. 10 years of being a decent person isn't a bad idea. Smart to check up on her.
I wish you could consider adding an epilogue. Something that shows the family of a little prince and princess. They could be practicing their magic. Still too young to shift.
If you write more stories around these characters, I'll be right there Lol😂
Actually I hope to be lucky enough to get to read whatever you choose to write
You write about the kind of people you would want for friends. Best Wishes for you and yours🌹

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Their Bonds Of Duty

It's an interesting story but their magic seems very weak. Their wards seem useless.

I loved it when Eleri and Conri finally got together. It's amazing how love is destroyed by hate.

I look forward to reading your next novel in the series🌹

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Their Bonds Of Fate

Another great story! I can't wait to read the rest. I'm definitely a fan of Eleri and I think in the end she'll see Conri as her mate.

The Havens seem to be great people. It's a shame the other young lady, Aioli? (I probably misspelled that) It's a shame she has such loose lips. I don't think she meant any harm. She's just easily taken in.
Bren is a problem. He will need to be confounded at the very least.

Bren and the rest of Lord Fellen's cast of characters will need to be overcome for this to work.

I'm a binge reader so, I'm gonna head back over and, see what I can find🌹

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Facing Him Again

You have a very cute story. Unfortunately, you also have some heavy editing ahead. Because of some of the mistakes you made, I suspect English isn't your first language. You may want to use a professional editing service.

Your story would be good for teen/young adult readers. It's hard to find something safe for young readers. I find your story refreshing. Best of luck to you🌹

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The Queens Command

I love the way you ended your delightful series. Anwen, Maddoc and their families are wonderful characters. I have heard rumors of a rewrite where Killian and Mathias get together. I hope you don't do that. Instead let them meet women special enough to change their minds. Since the man Killian was attached to is happily married to a woman, it wouldn't be so hard to do.

You are truly a gifted writer and I hope you are published soon. I can find no fault with your series. You have the ability with your writing, to shape culture. Best wishes to you in whatever you do.🌹

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The Kings Promise

I'm so glad they will finally be married. Once they are married no more phoney people trying to force love where it doesn't belong.

Wonderful story! I'm not sure if you have anymore but I will have to check.🌹

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The Princess's Obligation

Wonderful tale with good moral lessons.
I find that I can't wait to see how they manage it all between two kingdoms but I believe they will. I'm rooting for young love.🌹

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Tales of Regventus Book 6 Aurumist

You have created s great series. I was happy when they won. I missed Anzel but I'm glad he wasn't stuck where she had been. Philo had to die. There would have been no justice otherwise. Once edited you should have a winner🌹

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Tales of Regventus Book4 The Ring

Golnar and Philo need to die and take Till with them. I can't believe Issa died. No wonder Max and Griffa were so upset. I kept hoping for some very special magic to save the day...

I can't wait to read book 5. Best wishes to you🌹

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Tales of Regventus Book 3 Raya

Each part of your series is better than the one before. The first true turning point was when Kedan decided he didn't want the crown.

Golnar and Till need to be punished.
Their capture of Max and the queen will demand vengeance.

I can't wait to read book 4🌹

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Tales of Regventus

Book 2 delivers the same quality as the first. Through battles and hugs they make it through. I never did trust Marcus or his dad. I thought they came with their own agenda. I'm glad Griffa took her place on the ring of 9. Whatever will happen next?

I'm gonna go read book 3 and find out🌹

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Tales of Regventus Adalwen

Your series is off to a great start. Your characters are well defined and very engaging. Griffa is a favorite. I'm glad she could see the good in Max. I think it would be great if she and Ansel got together.

So sorry to lose Danin. He was a noble and kind man.
I can't wait to read your sequel🌹

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Golden Wolf

She had never met a stronger werewolf. He has never met a sweeter human, considering he wasn't a fan of humans...Eudora never dreamed she'd soon be a Luna. This is a highly engaging tale of werewolves, goddesses and demi gods that leaves you anxious for the sequel.

Best wishes to you🌹

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The Guardian: A Journey Begins

I love your story. I'm sorry that you ended the story in the middle. Your descriptions are great too. I was truly looking forward to Max going forward. Unfortunately, it looks like that won't be happening. I understand that part 2 will only be sold through Amazon and we won't be doing business with them. If it does become available someplace else, please let us know🌹

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Nox Inferno

Twyla is more interesting than even she knows. She is the lost royalty. I can't wait to read your sequel. I hope she gets to see Kai again. This story leaves me wanting more🌹

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The Queen In Shadows

I honestly couldn't put it down. I read all night and into the next day. I felt like I was with them experiencing the battle for freedom. The plot was unusual and interesting. I felt sorry for the King as he turned himself into a victim and a puppet. I love how you bring justice to those who deserve it. I felt like I was in the tunnels with them. I loved your characters but my favorite characters were Phoenix and Noelle. I also especially enjoyed Alex and Sloane. I really hated losing Celine. You're really quite talented. As an author you are a force to reckon with🌹

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Fix You

This is a very entertaining story. Your characters are well defined. I look forward to reading your other books🌹

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The Shapeshifter Stone

Wonderful fantasy/mystery that would be enjoyed by animal lovers of all ages. I would think older teens and young adults would enjoy reading this miraculous love story. The beautiful swans were my favorite. They overcame so much to be together. Noah was very brave to do what he did. He could have died in that enclosure. I guess that's what love does. It makes you risk everything.
I'll be hoping for more from this talented author🌹

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May Angels Fly With You

The worst thing about this story is, that you can't put it down. I'm a mother of five and I almost lost my breath when Beth disappeared.

You have a great down to earth approach that makes your characters relatable.
Grady and Mace are the kind of guys that I would be proud to call friends. I can just imagine sitting outside watching an autumn bonfire. I guess what I enjoyed most was the pleasure they found in nonmaterial things, like a beautiful sunset, or a happy dog.

Even Christmas didn't seem all that materialistic. Instead of worrying about the gifts they'd receive, they were concerned for our fighting men...

You're a very entertaining author and I definitely want to read more. I know whatever happens I'm going to have a wonderful time🌹

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Whiskey Money

You've done a wonderful amount of work to put this story together. All of your characters are relatable. The story moves along fine. Definitely good for history buffs🌹

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My God Is My Author

This seems like a discussion in philosophy. The attempt seems cumbersome. You don't really get to know the characters. It makes it harder to identify with any of them. On the plus side you have a wonderful imaginative plot.🌹

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Between the Raindrops

What all of your characters have in common is that all of their lives are in crisis. Adelaide doesn't like herself but isn't sure how to fix it. Poor Angi and her dad. The guys are in crisis because that's how it is when you see someone you love hurt. Even Jared for all his money and power seems to fall into neglect from parents who don't realize there is no substitute for themselves.

Your story also explores what it's like to be sexually assaulted and have to get through the pain of a trial and watch your tormentor walk free. How do you move forward in your life without being consumed with fear? Adelaide is stronger than she thinks as she not only moves forward, but also improves her life along the way.
These are the kind of friends you dream of finding in highschool. This would most likely attract an audience of older teens and young adults. Older people may also enjoy your books as they remember their own days in school. As soon as I finish I'm going in search of your sequel. I didn't find this story until you completed it. Perhaps the sequel is done as well🌹

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Troubled Sincerity

You've done a great job of creating a group of friends. I think the magic is how each person has their own special personality. I was very impressed with Naveah. When she donated part of her liver for Marks' mother, i knew they had to be married. I suppose the most surprising was Riley and Marissa. I would never have seen that coming. As love stories go, this one will not be easily forgotten🌹

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Immaculate Deceivers

This is certainly a good coming-of-age story. This would be great for teens and young adults. You've done a great job of bringing everything together, while teaching good morals.🌹

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Remembering Annie

This is a great story for adults only. A fairy and a werewolf are mated. I can't help but wonder about their baby. Will it be a boy or a girl? Will it be a wolf with wings? A werewolf with fairy power would be different.

Isaac and Annie share a love people search their whole lives for. With Isaac's ability to shift and Annie's power over blood they're bound to beat any foe that comes their way.🌹

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The Silent Witness

Your story is fine. Had I realized that this was part of a saga, I probably wouldn't have read it. Everything seems very drawn out, though reading is enjoyable. Still there is a lsrge investment of time eith no end in sight.Good luck in your future endeavors.🌹

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Wolf Bond

You've done an amazing job for a 16 year old. You should be very proud of yourself.

You did a great job building your characters into relatable beings you would love to know in real life. If you decide to write a sequel I would love to read it.

You might need an editor to help you go through the book. You might want to consider doing this before you submit your story to a publisher. I understand there are several companies that offer book editing if you don't want to tackle the whole job on your own.🌹

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Department of Corrections Book 1

I couldn't help but root for Malyj through the entire book. Your distopian story is errie due to our current politics at this time. (Things like a certain professor who insisted we can only survive by eating each other.)
His escape delighted me. I was disappointed when the surface didn't provide the fought for relief.
I had trouble with my phone and jumped through hoops to finish the story after chapter 20. I had to finish the story because I wanted to escape with him.
During editing you might remove some of the adjectives that seem repetitive and exchange them for other ways of saying the same thing. Looking forward to book 2🌹

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Taming The Zookeeper

This was very entertaining to read. Your characters are well defined and their strong friendship makes you smile.😍

I was concerned when Maxwell marked Melene. That could have ended very badly. Yet you danced them around every obstacle a gracefulness that only a werewolf can pull off.

I loved Connor and Feral, you paired them up with the best of mates in Melene and Mocha. I'm going to go look for a sequel🌹

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Rise of the Queen

I enjoyed reading your wonderful fantasy. At first I thought Alexa would have powers of a werewolf too, but she really didn't miss them, because of all the wonderful powers you gave her.

I always believed Reagan would come through and he didn't disappoint me.

The only thing that seemed a little strange was the way your chapters wrapped in several places. The last couple of paragraphs at the end of the chapter,started off the following chapter. Did you mean to do that or did the app just render it that way?

Anyway it's clear that you worked very hard on this. The quality is certainly there🌹

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The Magi

Well is it a great story for teens? Great metaphorical commentary, or possibly, carefully disguised political statement? I guess it really doesn't matter. There's something for everyone, wrapped up in a highly entertaining fantasy adventure. Elijah is a wonderful character for your lead. Becca and Samuel were both surprising characters in how they worked out. Most of the characters are very engaging and only the villains are stinkers. But aren't all villains stinkers?🌹

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Cursed Blood

Congratulations on a terrific finish. I plan to read your other books soon. I was relieved when she escaped Azreil by using her dagger. I love how you brought him back at the end.

Amari and Max have many years ahead. Who knows maybe Amari can get his powers back...we can always dream. After all everything worked out for Lilith.🌹

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Bearer Of The Curse

So, there is more to Amari than meets the eye. She has powers too. I'm glad because that means she might not be a victim anymore.

So sorry to lose Lorcan. He seems more sympathetic to Amari.

This book is as good as the last one.🌹

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Cross To Bear

From the very beginning you can't help but love Amari. Her father deserves to be smacked hard.

Your plot fascinates me. I found myself quite drawn in. Your work is as good as anything I've read that's published.

Most authors upload their work unedited. That kinda makes the rating for grammar and punctuation useless, Don't you agree? So if that's the only problem with a story, I refuse to count off for that. It's redundant because authors already know they need to edit.

I'm definitely reading your sequels. I have to know what happens to Amari🌹

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All I Wish For Christmas

You've done an amazing job of taking me back to a time when Christmas was truly magical. I will want to read this again every Christmas season. Though I'm really just a big kid, I would love to share this story with children who are just starting to find themselves.

There is a special mystique to falling in love. Combined with the special secrets of Christmas, it is just perfect for making this story memorable. A warm fire, hot chocolate, and some Christmas cookies creates the perfect atmosphere to enjoy your inspiring tale.

Though I know this is early, or possibly late, I want to wish you a Merry Christmas, happy new year, and happy loving your whole life long🌹

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Words

This story lets you know that no matter how bad things are, they could always be worse. The happy ending was a nice touch.🌹

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Turning the Tables

Great story about karma. Just because you have it all today doesn't mean you'll have it tomorrow.

Perhaps we could all think about how we treat others.🌹

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More Than Just Illusion

Ah, I just love a great love story and this one, while not strictly a love story is still great! Natalie and Joe are wed at last, but not before Natalie finds out who she really is.

It's off to a honeymoon of traveling to the second tower. Though it's called the tower of illusion there are traps and tricks around every bend that are very real.

They all find what they're looking for, and in the most unexpected of places. When they leave who goes with them? Read on to answerthis and all of your questions🌹

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The Last Magus

This tale deserves to be published so thst more people can enjoy this rare talented story teller. It begins in the usual world and slides into a world of magic. In this story magic has a practical use. From starting a fire to warm by, to prevention of an armed bank robbery. Fortunately, just after Joe finds this odd talent he finds a new friend in a golden dragon named Draco. Draco helps Joe develop his new talent. Once you enter their world of magic you might never want to leave.🌹

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The Diamond

Wonderfully done and very enticing. Once again your many plot twists keeps the story from having even one dull moment.

I loved the many rescues. The hidden cabin in the woods seemed too much to hope for, yet there it is. Lorie is one tough gal to give birth the way she did. My heart was in my throat when she was in labor and had to escape. I was relieved when Jeff found her. I giggled when Emily was rescued, that was great.

The ending is good, the part where he chopped The paste diamond, then crushes it was a stroke of genius. Now I can't wait to read the last book. I'll happily read anything this talented word crafter and true artist writes.🌹

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Battle Of Wills

I really appreciate you sharing your work with us. It's difficult to write a review that actually does your book justice. I would share this with all my friends and family.

Just about anyone who loves to read for entertainment, would be intrigued. Major Preston is just one of the many heroes you meet along the way. I found your characters very relatable. I feel like I would have found friends there. Lorie is amazing throughout the entire story. When Carol jumped in front of the bullet to save Sue, I nearly fell out of my chair! (I was sitting on the edge of my seat. Lol)

I felt like cheering at the end. I'm going now to read the sequel as I want to read about fat little babies too! After reading this I'm sure I won't be disappointed🌹

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Secrets Of The Unconscious Mind

Whew! That was an emotional story. I've dealt with this enough that I knew what was coming... Your story is quite realistic.

No child should ever be tormented like that but sadly we are surrounded by these predators who each generally abuse more than one child. Sometimes the child is from lower financial needs so they do it. Sometimes the predator will use drugs on and, against the child. Sometimes fear is all it takes.

Reading about Robyn, I had to root for her to get her justice in the end. As soon as I found out about the nightmares, I waited for Robyn to become strong enough to remember her repressed memories.

The way the story ended was for the best. Some might feel that Martin got off too easy but, depression is anger turned inward. Finally he took that anger out on himself. So at least there's that.

At least Robyn got a fresh start. If you had added some of the conversation between Robyn and her parents after the truth came out, that would have been interesting.

Great story and I hope to read more of your work.🌹

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Dear Old Jack

Your plot twists keep the story interesting. I found it very hard to put down. Anyone reading this story will probably love this fresh take on an old crime.🌹

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Letters From My Father

Such a touching sweet story. It takes you through tears and sorrow, love and laughter. Sometimes all at once. I enjoyed your well defined characters who were very realistic in how they communicated with each other. Throughout the sorrow and tears is an undertone of love that never ends🌹

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Off Balance

Giving has its own rewards in this beautiful love story. Kept me guessing all the way through. I love the name Eros for the alpha male hunk that is Aldreds mate.
They were in love from the first.

Allie is the best choice to receive the healing spirit that floats among them. It helps bless her efforts and ability for others.

Definitely worth reading to find out how love blessed them all.🌹

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More Like Shattered

Great character development. Good plot, definitely worth reading. I can't wait to find out how the story ends.🌹

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The Red Dragon

You have wonderful descriptions and well developed characters. I was thrilled when those people were stopped. I have to admit, I'm a sucker for a happy ending🌹

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Beaten But NOT Defeated

This story draws you in. I read most of it in one sitting. Liz is sweet and has much to offer. Josh has nothing to offer but death.

I was so happy when Liz met Ann. She needed all the support she could get. I was honestly relieved when Caleb didn't die after all. I really think Liz could have a future with him.

Some people might read this story and think that Liz was weak or possibly stupid. I believe she must have been very strong to survive all that she did. When she snuck in to kill Josh, I was just hoping she never got caught.

Our author has done magnificent job and I can't wait to see what this word master will create next. 🌹

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Insomnia

I'm glad that if they had to die that Blaze and Ryder got to die in each others arms. I do wonder why Ryder's father didn't show up. He might have warned her about Bennett. It would be interesting to know where they end up. Regardless, you can't help but feel a sense of relief when they are finally released in their second death.

I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from this literary magician. She knows what she wants you to feel. Then she makes you feel it.🌹

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Schizophrenia

You are very talented to have written this so young. Strange as it may sound, I don't believe she was really sick.

Since she knew of real past patients, she's still relatively sane. There is still danger though. If antipsychotic medication is given to someone who isn't psychotic, it makes them psychotic. Nice side effect huh?

Anyway the story draws you in and I find it impossible to not want to rescue this poor lost girl. I can't wait to read the sequel!🌹

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The Death Diary

I was touched by this tale of grief and renewal. Jeri and Cash had affected Arthur in ways they knew nothing about.

Reading Arthur's journal helps Eve find the closure she's looking for. Eve doesn't share the entries that were written for her, as if they were too personal to share.

I believe one reason Arthur died was that he never stopped blaming himself for Olivia's death. Therefore he could never stop grieving. Let's hope Eve does better.🌹

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The Grey Girl

What a fascinating tale of deep betrayal. Chloe is a sweet spirit. Alex is an honorable young man. Together they begin the hunt for what will bring all of the dead peace.

This story is riveting and exciting to the very end.🌹

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Monster Hunter

You have done a beautiful job of setting out a case for both Michael and Angel. I don't understand how anyone could read to this point, and not feel compassion for them both.

Michael enjoying the killings IMHO has to do with the specific way he was broken. It also shows that although Michael is no longer trafficked, he continues to be a victim of his brokeness. Angel was also damaged, yet found a way to turn her own hurts into positive action.

Michael helped Angel hold onto whatever sanity she has left. Angel, by becoming his sister, has offered Michael the first love he's ever known. I don't believe they will ever be able to write each other off. The closeness will not easily die.

I find myself truly engaged in this story as I eagerly await the next update.🌹

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Billows 1: When Lambs Become Lions

This is not your typical romance at all. Many women are never able to escape their abuser. They seem to think they deserve to be hurt.

You cannot help but root for Aria as she suffers through this particular part of her life. I couldn't have kept the smile from my lips with a sledge hammer when Alex finally got his. That had to happen the way it did. You could feel Aria grow away from her fear, through the exchange.

Your ending is to be celebrated as Ty offers Aria true love and not just an opportunity to be used and hurt again.

Truly this author is a rare story telling talent🌹

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Armitage

I don't usually read vampire stories but, you have an interesting way of luring your readers in. By the time I had a sneakin suspicion vampires were involved I was all in. I had to find out if I was right and see where you were going to take me. The entire thing ended up being a heart stopping, gripping tale. I love the ending. Who would have expected to find romance in a vampire tale? Yet the ending is sweet and endearing. Very romantic...for a vampire!🌹

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Sharkbait Down Under

This is a wonderful tale of a cosmopolitan, sophisticated were wolf. Unbelievably, she's also a politician. I think Vicky is wonder wolf. Your story is full of plot twists and fast paced, keeping it highly entertaining.

As always, I'm looking forward to future works🌹

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The Midnight Hunters

Happily this tale ends with no one coming to physical harm. Well, except, maybe the monetary rape of the insurance company.

Gripping tale that keeps you on the edge of your seat. After reading this story I'll be sure to watch more closely, who is watching back🌹

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School For Apes

Some of the finest stories written include morals. This author has found an imaginative, creative and hilarious way to express the evils of being a bully. My youngest, who was once known to run the 'chocolate milk mafia', would have been perfect for this school!😄

This would make great required reading for middle school and up, and entertainment for everyone who loves a good giggle. You deserve rave reviews and a ton of likes. Although this story is listed as an adventure, it would be equally at home under humor🌹

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Tales From the Kingdom of Grim

While your stories are interesting, they all read like beginnings with abrupt endings.

I think it would be interesting if the three children in one chapter ended up saving the day when they confront the Ash Queen. Maybe the inventer could help by revealing weaknesses in his creations.

Best wishes in all of your writing endeavors🌹

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Seeing Ghosts

You have proposed interesting explanations for the spirit world and the mystery of what goes on there.
You pointed out that these things can run in families. Younger sister has abilities. I think a sequel that explores their mother would keep readers interested. Perhaps she sees an intity as well. Maggie leaves open inspiration and could easily work into a third story.

You have done a wonderful job of leaving your ending open to a sequel. I hope to read more from architect of fantasy🌹

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Psychic

Through this wonderfully spun fantasy, the authors point out the horror of terrorism. They do a great job of showing that terrorism isn't a racial issue but rather one of ideology.

At the end, love wins all. Alpha and Sunday discover they share the same parentage bringing a comfort they weren't used to enjoying.

The ending was excellent, allowing the authors to simply end it here, or to create a sequel.

Looking forward to more from these talented word crafters.🌹

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I Am Sarah

This was a wonderful follow up to I Am Erik. Sarah is warm, sweet and everything Erik could want. I was delighted about the baby. You ended at the reemergence of Erik's Mom. I can't wait to read your sequel!🌹

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I Am Erik

You've done a beautiful job of telling a very sad story. Poor Erik went through so much. It seemed like every time he found someone who cared, something always took them away.
When Erik needed a real friend, Sebastian came to the rescue. No one goes through what Erik did and not need friends with lots of patience. Sebastian filled the bill.

Sarah is lovely and fortunately, Erik can see she's a kindred spirit. They may someday become an item.
I love the tender compassionate way you dealt with very emotional material. Best wishes to you.🌹

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Jenny's Justice

It's not your typical romance. It's a combination of fantasy, mythology and love.
I was sad that you chose to kill off Jenny. She had so much more to offer.🌹

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The Voyage Of Mary Kate Donovan

This is a great story for anyone who loves a sweet romance. However, my favorite part is when all those children escape their captors. Good character development.
Looking forward to reading more. 🌹

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Redemption Wilderness

Good writing but you left some loose ends. What ever happened to Clay? What about Dirk, Max and Michael? Does Duncan ever show up with retribution on his mind?
Are you planning a sequel?🌹

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Stolen Boy

It was too short. No true character development. The good part was the little boy getting loose and rescuing his father.
Your story doesn't really explain why all Grayson women became so cold.🌹

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A Sense of Discovery

You are a gifted writer and I would enjoy any story you wrote. I actually felt claustrophobic when Garry and his family were locked in the basement. When Delia found out the truth I was shocked. Even more shocking was father and daughter despite all the years, still seemed to continue the same relationship. Lana was made sick by her father until she became a part of the sickness.

Best wishes and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. 🌹

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Clocks Without Hands

Great story for teens, young adults or anyone who loves a good mystery. It kept me up all night turning page after page. I found your characters relatable. They carried your story beautifully. The best part was when a victim was rescued. I don't want to say anymore and ruin it for your other readers.

I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Best wishes to you! 🌹

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The Angel's Christmas

I chose this rating because I find it on par with fiction already published.

This is a great story for teens, young adults or anyone who enjoys a good mystery combined with fantasy. 🌹

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The Angel Rallies Round

I would love to have your characters as friends. I love how they are kind and loving even though they carry great strength.

Katrina was a great name for the wanna be murderess. I was happy to see Robin and his friends survive that particular hurricane. The whole story was great. Perfect for teens and young adults 🌹

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The Angel Of San Diego

You have a very well written story. I see action adventure, comedy, drama and romance blended perfectly. I found the entire story to be a page turner. Robin and Malissa make a perfect couple. Amanda Potts is as cute as can be. The cops reactions to Robin is fun.

You had people laughing and crying in the same chapter. That's much more than just a well written story, it's a gift. I wish you the best of luck and I look forward to reading your other works. 🌹

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Formulators

This is the most uplifting story I've read in years. I truly enjoyed this tale of pure hearts and wonderful intentions.

I look forward to reading the rest of your books.
Best wishes to you 🌹

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Buddy Hemp

Great coming of age story. However this story goes beyond that. As you follow the characters you get to watch as they grow into better people. Buddy Hemp ends in the happiest, best, possible way, but I won't give that away... 🌹

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Man From Rutabaga Creek

This is the only western I've found on Inkitt. I love the plot twist that incorporates science fiction. One can't help but turn the page to read what happens next...

I look forward to reading more of your works and send my best wishes for your future success 🌹

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The Unexpected Princess

While your story is very entertaining, I must confess, I don't care much for cliff hangers. Your story seems to end in the middle. Perhaps I would be correct in guessing that you plan a sequel.

As I read your story, I wondered if you planned a sequel what you might call it. Since you titled this one The Unexpected Princess, maybe the next one would be The Barefoot Queen. I'm sure whatever title you use, it will be great.

I look forward to reading your next book and, I send my best wishes in your quest for more. 🌹

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The Ghost of Helena

Your story offers an interesting perspective on death. I love your plot twist. One wonders if everything Haille experianced after her death was just a replay of memories. Best of luck🌹

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Sharkbait

Fun story to read that's wildly entertaining. Sharkbait has more nerve than any other werewolf in her time. I can't wait to move over to Sharkbait Down Under, to read what happens next. 🌹

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The Godless

This one is a page turner. Your story is told with such feeling. Your story of Kenda and her friends touched me. It echoes the idea that we really do reap what we soe. 🌹

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The Whalebone Sisters

Though it still needs editing, I believe you have a winner here. Rose is so brave to survive such a day & age. Fear is a terrible weapon. I was sad when Mike died, but justice was delivered when Billy and his cousin died. I was disappointed when Rose didn't turn the book over to the FBI.
Best wishes to you🌹

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Alpha King's Daughter

This is a wonderful story of Romance, drama, and mystery. You have a wonderful imagination.

I would love to see Gianna try to take Liv into death. You have a lot of great material to work from. You might be inspired by the twins. You could also write about the kids.

You are a talented writer and I look forward to reading whatever you choose to write about. 💖🌹

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Her Valor Guardian

You have done an impressive job considering English is not your first language. I've read all 5 books in the series. Therefore I was disappointed to find book 5 end at what would seem to be the middle.

Whatever happens with King Drake and the doors? The giant and the wolf seem to have gotten thru the doors. More to come? Whatever happened to them?

I hope you have someone fluent in English to help with editing. If so, perhaps you might offer your work to several American publishers. Best of luck. Please let me know if I can be of help. 🌹

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Her Midnight Miracle

One of the closest families you'll ever read of.
Many 'real families' don't exhibit this much caring. A truly feel good story that starts with 8 adorable orphans and one big heart. Then the hearts begin to pile up.

This is a great story for those who believe in love and innocence.

There are some passages that require heavy editing. Grammatical errors exist through out the entire work. The story is definitely worth the extra work to correct the errors. 🌹

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The Music We Make

Great romantic mystery. I would recommend this for young adults and any mystery lover who is young at heart 🌹

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Witch Country

Entertaining story. I loved Langford House.
Your ending is very abrupt. I hope you plan a sequel. I would love to see Elizabeth sail to Virginia, where she would finally meet her man! 🌹

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Tale as old as time

Great story. If you use the first ending, it can't be the end. Good fae play a role. Realizing the power love holds, good fae seek to transform, rather than harm. This time when they kiss, he is transferred the power of good fae for dark.

Dark power dies and doesn't go to the evil witch. Because Belle still needs protection, she also receives good fae power.

Or you could go with your alternate ending.
Best wishes to you. 🌹

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In The Victims Shadow

Your novel places the reader at the center of the activity. Your characters are well defined. Katherine has a heart of gold. John is her knight in shining armor. Spencer is just pathetic and Chad is the only true villain. Though the story ends with Katherine passing out, you included a great epilogue tying up loose ends.👍

Everything was realistic except the passage where she visits the ladies room without her purse. Women never do that and we always visit the ladies room in groups! 😉🌹

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Just Breathe

Right from the beginning I like Bailey. I'm not into piercings but Gavin sounds interesting too. As little Logan tries to measure up as man of the house, I can't help holding my breath page after page.

Part of it is waiting for the magic of love to kiss both Gavin and Bailey. Part of it is fearfully waiting for her abuser to appear, but no response his is a very hard story to put down.

If I was going to change anything, I would have had Hunter and Ash married. They could have arranged a surprise double wedding or perhaps in your epilogue.

Regardless, you've written a wonderful ending. The kind that leaves women sighing with happiness while thinking, and they lived happily ever after! ❤🌹

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Awakening

While the story is compelling, it stops just short of a satisfactory ending. Rescuing Lilli from the demons would easily solve this problem.
If you write a sequel, please have Sophie develope greater control over the pulsating light. Also greater control of the demons would be helpful. Maybe the demons could destroy Akeldama. Maybe the light.
Definitely an author worth watching 🌹

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The End Of The Cursed

This story is just loaded with surprises. Unfortunately Lord Phillip had to join the list of deceased. He, like the witch hunters, wouldn't have it any other way.

The real fun begins in this sequel, as they play their part to save their kingdom and themselves. I can find no negative in this story. All my favorite characters survive.

The ultimate s is an enjoyable pleasant read and well worth the time looking for the golden gems along the way. 🌹

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The Best Kings Wife

You have a very engaging fantasy. Gilda is such a sweet giving soul.
Even the cursed would make great friends. I look forward to reading the rest of your series 🌹

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Mad Dogs And Englishmen

Your plot is s very interesting and your characters are quite engaging. The only issue is editing. Some are clearly typos but you also have missing words. I'd love to see this published. Would make a great movie too! 🌹

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The Words In Red

Interesting fantasy, nothing is quite what you expect. It is grabbing on to the next hint, or fact to let you know who exactly Teacher is.

I wonder why you chose to end your story where you did. I love your epilogue! You end your epilogue on a sweet and loving note. Overall I believe most readers will come away feeling good. 🌹

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World's Apart

I've never read a story like this before. I must admit the originality captivates me. From your ending, I suspect you plan a sequel. I sure hope so. I can't wait to read more of the adventures of Zoe and Lucy.

At first you wonder, is this real or, are we just experiencing her psychosis. Dr Montgomery got what he deserved. I can't imagine a more hopeless situation to be in. Kudos to you. I can't wait to read more! 🌹

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Bad Boy vs Bad Girl

What a sweet coming of age, story. I love the way you present different characters POV.

Though the story is fiction, it is rooted enough in reality to read like true events.

I truly enjoyed your epilogue. Your ending was very natural. Not so abrupt as some I have read.

I look forward to reading more from this Author. 🌹

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The Hidden Truth Book 1

Alice and Shayne belong together. The last thing they need is a pesky prophecy coming between them... separating them forever!

Well, the hidden truth is still hidden! Gosh, when will Book 2 be out. Your plot is quite original and tends to be a page turner.
I'm looking forward to your sequel 🌹

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Escape

Sad sad story with 2 important points.
1. Children were never intended to endure such horror!
2. Sooner or later the human heart will go to any length to avoid tyranny, in all of its ugly forms
Great job! I would love to see more. 🌹

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The Birds

Pretty poem about the beauty around us 🌹

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Swim

Great poem about overcoming your fears. Sometimes you just have to jump right in🌹

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Rose

I loved the entire series but, Rose was epic. I loved the addition of POTUS and Fox news was a great choice. I love the strong women but I also love that the men are strong too. Clearly it takes a strong man to please a strong woman. Time and again twists and turns kept me engaged in the story line. Lots of fun to read and I look forward to reading your next work. ❤🤗🌹

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The Lost Heirs

Your story is very interesting so far, can't wait for more🌹

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Bondage

Ami and Jack are delightful characters
Lars is a beast without restraint. Robert was a surprise. Good thing he popped up.

What of Portia who tried to poison Ami? Fidget Lars survive or did he sink to a watery grave?

You do have some editing but, who doesn't? With some smoothing of passages and correcting typos would make this a total 5

Best wishes to you, I hope to see your work in book stores soon! 💖🌹

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Escape From The Witch Hunters

Very cute and entertaining story. You cannot help but root for Ryia and Gillian.
Ryia needs to discover that her mother is in Carenthia as well. Though I don't know if you plan a sequel.
Your story does need editing for missing words and smoothing out.
Best Wishes 🌹

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Paranormal Agency

You definitely drew me in and held my attention through both books. The only thing I didn't like is, I wanted Emily to escape her cage. I hope you write another sequel. Alison and Greg are great characters to root for. I would love it if somehow Greg and Emily could meet and possibly become friends.
You are a gifted writer
But Wishes. 🌹

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Treacherous Secrets

Great page Turner. Sucks you in from the beginning, and holds you until the very end. Not much to edit, just a couple of typos. Best of luck to you. 🌹

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Balloon Man

I really enjoyed your book. I actually laughed when Herme got caught with his own chain.

Though this is the only story you have here, I don't believe you are a novice. Your work is so good. I love the way you bring everyone together. Best Wishes to you. I'd love to see more of your work. 🌹

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The Secret of the Seven Princesses

Such a cute story. I found myself rooting for the girls, but never more than when they handled the contestants. Ty was certainly the only one worthy of the crown. Though each Princess is destined for true love, still I don't see them drifting away from each other. With that in mind, I hope you can keep them all together in your sequals. I can't wait to read more and I wish you the best of success. 🌹

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The Legend of Wrath

Great story that gives a picture of romance from a male point of view. I think this is the first I've read about a werewolf and lycan pairing. One question though, when Soldiers became mortal, did that equate to forgiveness? Best wishes to you and a very merry Christmas! 🎁🎅🎄⛄💖🌹

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Wolf

The story is good but, you need it to be heavily edited. I thought rescuing her sister was a nice touch. It would have been nice to know more about Luna. Like what she wants to study. Bolts POV after he met Luna would have been interesting, along with her POV. With a little brushing up and I believe you'll have a winner! 😉😎❤🌹

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Luna Angel

Great story, I just wish they had kept their powers. ❤🌹

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Rachel

The story was great, the plot was good. What happened? Why such a ending? Anyone would expect you were planning a sequel but, with your first review being 3 years old... I'm not holding on to much hope. The ending was unsatisfying. It feels like you left off in the middle of your story. I hope you decide to fix it. 😢🌹

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Grandpa's Harmonica

Young people who have enjoyed books like Black Beauty or Tom Sawyer would love this story. Great character development. I felt like I got to meet each one and become friends. I could actually see the sparkling in the walls of the snow cave and the burning candle.
The only thing that seemed odd was the way you suddenly switched Sams pronouns. I would wait and do that from the point Jaime finds out. Great story, I hope you get published. You're very talented and you deserve it ❤🌹

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Six

Great but unique plot! Though I'm nolonger a young adult, your story is riviting. I definitely like how you handle the aspect of romance without anything vulgar. What a cliff hanger of an ending! I was thrilled to move on to book 2. You've done a great job of character development. They feel like friends and I loved sharing in their fast pace and excitement! 👀🌹

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The Kings Slave

This is a wonderful tale of lust and love! An additional spark is added through the use of magic. Very inspiring as you watch love overcome all. ❤🌹

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Heart Of Stone Book 3 Souls Entwine

No doubt about it. Though this story is a 10 the rating only goes to 5. 😊
Stone and Aubrey capture your heart as you follow them through all the twists and turns they endure to be together. Will they prevail? Only future updates can reveal their final secrets. 🌹

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Fragile Promises

You can't help but root for Jenny and Kieran as a couple. Jenny constantly surprises herself with her strenth as she grows and heals with Kieran's lovherself she over estimates and nearly gets herself killed Kieran is able to save her.
Wonderful ending but also leaves unanswered questions for a possible sequel such as, what happened to the stepfather. No mention about Mitchell being missed by his friends and family. ❤🌹

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Runes Saga

You have many words in incorrect forms. The story is fast paced and has you rooting for Gage and his loyal friends. Very enjoyable story. I'm planning on reading the sequel 👀🌹

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Captured By The King

I found your original plot captivating. Although you have a small number of typos, the story makes it impossible to find 🔍 hem overly distracting. If you decide to write a sequel, perhaps Hildreds other friend could be a lady in waiting. ❤🌹

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Order Of Protection

Mature Readers Only
Great storyline. Becomes even more interesting with the Priest/Witch. This story makes you feel that if you ever met werewolves, they would probably be your best friends All it needs is s editing for typos. 😊🌹

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Treasure

Fantastic story. Lots of plot twists make this an edge of your seat page turner. I like the way the werewolves and bikers meld together. Professional work from a wonderful writer. I look forward to more from this author. ❤👀🌹

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Slowly Drowning

Your story leaves out a lot. Seems you move from event to event without explanation. It seems disjointed. The ending seems abrupt. 🌹

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The King's Assassin

This is a wonderful tale of magic and strength. These are woven together with thoughts and lessons on love, loyalty and friendship.
I certainly look forward to your sequel and hope you are busy on it now.
Best wishes to you
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Butterfly Enigma ll

I'm so sorry you lost your motivation. You are quite gifted.
The teaser chapters at the end, don't seem to serve any real purpose. Many of your readers and fans were left confused and lost as to where your story is going. Perhaps if you gave them a friendly word...

Once you've finished everything you should have no trouble finding a legitimate publisher. 👀❤🌹

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