What is your opinion?
The Great Gatsby meets Dynasty
"Whew!! Lots to unpack where this book is concerned... Guilty pleasure for sure. Is it the most perfect piece of literature? No, but what story is? We all have our different tastes and Love Is My Dying Wish definitely fits the bill. The plot was great and characters had varying personalities that you'll get lost in. Now, as for the writing, it sort of jumped all over the place. Got confused as to what was going on and though sentence structure made reading harder once I really read it over, things made sense. Not a terrible thing. Can always edit and get better over time. With that being said; these people really are a piece of work. Get that fucked up circumstances have happened but really. This really shows that you can't trust friends or family and everyone is looking to step on others to get high on the totem pole. Great job author!! 10/10 recommend. "
Love is my dying wish
"Love so far can’t wait for more "
Love is my Dying Wish
"The plot is really interesting and I'm curious to see what happens next. I really like how the characters are being established. I would definitely recommend the book to quite a few people I know who are interested in books like this one. However, the book can get a little confusing and at some parts it was hard to follow, sometimes the script doesn't flow like it should. I've also noticed at some parts it changes from the characters POV to the author's POV of scenes at random times; and then flipping back to the characters POV, and you kind of have to change how your thinking for it to make sense. I know that this is just the beginning stage of writing and it's not bad, it is really good, just remember to reread the chapters over to make sure everything flows and the transitions from character POV to author's POV flows and changes gradually. I 10/10 100% will recommend this book and I can't wait to see what happens next."
Cragie
"Cannot get my head around this story because of bad grammar and disjointed paragraphs. "
