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Hogwart's Reunion

"Quite the short story. Has potential for more. The idea that something as normal as a school reunion not being normal is refreshing."

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It's gonna be more?

"Great I just hope it is gonna be more cuz I really like your writing style. "

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Wow indeed

"I never thought Draco would be the husband nice story indeed short but very much entertaining wish for more chapter thou"

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Sweet

"Wow! So I'm new to Inkitt, and this Is the first story I've read on here. I got invited by someone on Fanfiction's website, so here I am! I just love Dramione, so I'm glad I read it. I almost didn't though, because there was no description. You should definitely add one. Anyways, I'm adding this to my alerts! Adios!"

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Nicely Done

"This story has a lot of potential. I'm so excited to see where it goes! Other than a few grammatical errors (verb tense shifted a couple times) this is the perfect start to what I imagine will be an amazing read. GOOD JOB:)"

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Critique

"First, I want to say well done. The plot was great and your style is easy to follow. However, you had some misspelled words in here and there were some grammatical issues in some sentences. You were missing some commas after prepositional phrases, McGonagall was spelled wrong a couple times, and some capitalization errors as well. Other than that, well done. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. The only advice I have is to get someone to read your material first before submitting; therefore, it will be more polished and less grammatically incorrect. :) Again, well done and keep up the good work."

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