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Alpha

"Wonderful novel"

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The Wolf with the Golden eyes

"Short, good story and good writing. Exactly what I love. Great job Author!!! Keep it up🏆♥️✨️"

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The wolf with golden eyes

"The best short story I have ever read, I loved this book it was great reed. Well done to the author. "

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Wolf with golden eyes

"It is a good book only like once or twice was their a grammar issue "

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Golden eyes

"Nice quick sort story, gets everything done and covered in six chapters while also being a nice story line and characters "

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The wolf with golden eyes

"Very cute short story."

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White wolf reigns

"This story is sweet with thriller moments. Strong characters. This mini novel can be expanded into a longer book with more adventures. Great read for 16 yo as there is no erotica, gore, other triggers. "

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Good read

"Like the twist of a second dimensions "

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Splelndid

"Storyline is good, would have liked to have deeper explanations. More in depth character development would have given 5 stars. Expanding the book a few more chapters this way would give stronger ties to hang on to. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep writing you have good ideas."

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The wolf wii golden eyes

"Interesting short story. Could be better with more detail given. I feel you are going to be a great author. Keep writing."

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White wolf so powerful

"This story was very well written and fun to read. Need a bit more details in describing the gates and in describing the people and their surroundings This helps people to not only see but feel what is happening around them. Show how she was an orphan raised by a family that turns against her. Show what kind of character she is. Prove that she is a beautiful person inside and out. "

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Good plot

"The plot is different. A good different. And not everyone needs to write books with 50 plus chapters. But! The story is all over the place. It feels extremely rushed and countless times people, locations and situations are running down without any word of explanation to them. I get the author prefers short stories. But this has potential for so much more that is a shame the hacked up writing ruined it. I really wish the author would reconsider and sit down and give this story a work over, and elongate it to a point where one doesn't feel like thrown of a cliff."

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The wolf with the golden eyes

"Nice story, good flow. I like the changing point of views. I am a bit bothered by the punctuation being off. I am a non native English reader and I find it makes things that much harder to understand for me. Otherwise well done."

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Ok story

"Okay story, needs improvement "

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