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Stormy
"Hi! So i read your story. i enjoyed it. you need to write another one a little longer. Also, you might want to check your spell check on your pc. I noticed that there were a lot of uncapitalized names and such. Overall, good job on it."
Great
"the story was great a lot of action and suspense. just four kids got in over their heads and paid the price. After reading this I will never spend a night underground. who knows what's under there. the writer did a great job while reading I pictured myself running right along with the characters. overall great story."
