tyleroakleyfan

fairmont

i love to read and write. favoriate author Edgar Allen Poe

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great

I love this story im having so much fun reading it. are harry and draco going to be together? they make a cute couple anyway it was cool how you made tom die in way that involved no magic that was great. merlin bows low to harry the only person I know of he bows to is king aurthur is he going to be in this too? I love this story very much good job <3

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very good

i enjoyed this story very much. I love the fact the snape and draco are harrys friends its awesome and how it should be. you executed this story very well,. thank you for this story and I look forward to reading the rest of the series.

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i need more

NOOOOO! PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE STILL WORKING ON THIS. THIS IS AWESOME I LOVE IT AND I WANT TO READ MORE PLEASE FINISH SOON. YOU ARE DOING A GREAT JOB THE BOND BETWEEN ARUTHER AND MERLIN YOU CAPTURED PERFECTLY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK CANT WAIT FOR MORE. :)

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Great

I love this story. I was a little shocked that he messed up and allowed Remus to find out, but im sure you have a reason for it. I saw that you try to update every week. what days do you update so i can keep track. i love this story and im dying to know how it ends. Let me know keep up the awesome writing.

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Nice

i really like this story, but please tell me that this is not the end of it. I really want to read more and i want to find out how Draco reacts to being Harry's brother. You are doing a good job keep up the good work. i love it..

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Thank you

I love Sherlock Holmes it was one of my favorite stories growing up and still to this day. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I did, this selection was one of my favorites. good job you did well Watson my friend very well indeed :)

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awesome

pleasssseeeeee tell me this is not the end that you are still writing? i love this and its amazing i wanna keep reading please let me know if you post another chapter. i want to read it. thank you and great job

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awww

the end of this made me cry.its so not fair Arabella and harry have been through so much and i know shes hurting but harry can help. Are they going to get back together or are you going to put harry with Ginny after all please don't?. i liked Arabellas dark side it shows everyone has one and Bellatrix deserves it. good job can't wait for the sixth book please let me know when you finish it.

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Awesome

i love this areabella and Harry are going to be awesome are you working on the rest of the series? you are doing great. this is my favorite fandom I have ever read. I saw it only goes up to five though are you doing the rest to let me know I'm dying to read them. :)

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Cool

I enjoyed this very much is there a third part? I loved the first as well its nice to see people come together for love. it does not matter what type of love that is. I thank you for this story for I am gay and this gives me hope that one day no one with care who I spend my life with. thank you again

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Perfect

this was the perfect ending I loved it. thank you so much I enjoy the relationship that Draco and harry have and their children. im glad Vernon learned his lesson. and Dudley as a wizard did not see that coming but it gives him a way to be closer to harry. very good job with this. if you could check out the story I wrote night underground and tell me what you think I would be grateful. keep up the good work I look forward to reading more.

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awesome

thank you for writing this story I loved it. it was great I enjoyed every minute of it I couldn't stop reading you did a fantastic job. Thanks for killing ron he was starting to piss me off. he was being a dick. I love that you made it a gay love story its about time someone did. love it great job.

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Great

the story was great a lot of action and suspense. just four kids got in over their heads and paid the price. After reading this I will never spend a night underground. who knows what's under there. the writer did a great job while reading I pictured myself running right along with the characters. overall great story.

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