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"I really like the beginning of this story and the end of each chapter leaves you intrigued about the next, nice work."

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"Excluded introduces the group KAP. Right from the beginning, you can tell that they all have a close bond with one another. However, that soon starts to change as Julia comes into the picture. In Chapter 2, it is clear that Julia does not like Paisleigh. Though I have not read far into the story, I am excited to see where this story goes and how the KAP group will mend (or not?) their friendship with one another. Overall, good plot and cannot wait to read more!"

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