What is your opinion?
Crimson revelation
"Dec 2/2023 - A tale of man vs. beast done with colorful use wording/phrasing. Some area like the beginning would be better with more description, told a party is setting out only you read on find out a few of those in this party. With an edit or two this would be a story worthy of publication/production Keep fightin' the good fight "
Absolutely perfect
"Incredible story with a GOT Northern Lands feel. Unequaled imagery writing. Outstanding twists. Excited to see where this goes. Highly recommend!"
The Crimson Revelation
"I LOVE the author's writing style. His scene descriptions are amazing and so well-detailed that I had no problems seeing the visions he was portraying. I love the story too, it was different but I do like it. "
Genius
"The author almost dances with his words during scene development. Everything flows at such a smooth pace it’s as if you’re watching, not reading. I also love how unique the plot is thus far, yet it’s not being rushed. You have a firm grasp of the MC within the first chapter and from there the development builds at an even pace. And, ultimately, it’s wildly creative. This is a book for those looking for a fantasy genre packed full of action and adventure. "
Beautiful
"I love this it's beautiful writing"
The crimson revelation
"I've read two chapters so far of this book it's excellent and I will be reading more. Job well done by the author. "
An amazing storyteller
"The author paints very vivid pictures with his words in a way that draws you in. The first chapter gave just the right amount of information to peak one's interest by painting an intriguing worldview. Can't wait to read more! "
Amazing
"Truly amazing. You’re writing is so beautiful and detailed and the story is engaging. You use your words carefully and it shows. You’re writing style feels as though I’m reading a poem. You’re doing great. Keep writing :)"
Like a Storm pulling ke in
"The beginning is great it's well written and very exciting to read. I like how you portrait the characters and introduce them. There are some minor things I noticed by the grammar. But it didn't bother me while I read. All in all I would like to see more."
