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HEA was great

"I love your story. Only thing I would change is give an indication of how much time passed at the beginning of the last chapter. Great Happily Ever After for a wonderful story. I love how you have the characters communicate and support each other. I love how you make seeking outside help such as counseling just a normal every day thing. I hope that many read your book and come to understand seeking help when needed is a sign of strength of character. Thank you for sharing."

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Following a warm trail

"Loved,loved, loved it!"

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Love it

"I like that you writing about healthy relationships and realistic intimacy thank you because it is not common to find something like that. It usually either toxic and erotic more like your are reading porn instead of watching it. Please keep writing more stories like this the world need people like (I sound very dramatic 😅)"

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Following a warm trail

"Great short story! Loved the authors writing style and the added steamy bits. Classy like the characters. "

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Following a warm trail

"Great story ❤️ No drama... love it ❤️"

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An awesome romance story

"I read this story before and after the addition that you did! It is definitely improve it although the previous one was still a good one nonetheless!! Please write more stories!!"

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Romance novel

"Great story !! Awesome characters and the story line is great. 😁"

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Following a Warm Trail

"Fast paced, great short story"

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A short, steamy read 🌶️

"What I like about this story is that it's about two strong, independent people who feel an intense pull towards each other and act on it--no games and no beating around the bush. They know what they want and they go after it. Both characters have their own distinctive personalities and things that they're passionate about, which I found very enjoyable. If I had to make one suggestion it would only be to make the story longer just to get to know the characters more, but that's a personal preference and the current length does enough to showcase each character's traits. Overall a very well-written story!"

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