Gwen

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Interesting concept!

This story deals with some very mature themes so it's not for the faint of heart, haha. Overall I found the concept of this detective story/thriller fascinating. It depicts realistic adult relationships and the unhappiness that can come from them alongside the mystery that's still unfolding.

The only note that I'd give is that it just needs to be read through again for grammar mistakes.

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Overall Rating
Plot
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Review of first few chapters

So far I've only read the first five chapters of this work, but so far I love the meet-cute, the budding relationship, and the caring nature of the protagonist. Given the first line I'm curious to see how the story progresses to get there...

I did notice some grammar/punctuation errors, but nothing that wouldn't be expected of an initial draft. Overall I'd say this author has real skill and once the story is finished and polished, I don't doubt it'll be a hit!

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