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"Good writing, enjoyed reading "

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An enjoyable read.

"A fun book with interesting characters. I like the craziness of some characters that keep you interested in the plot. I’m intrigued to see how I’ll feel about the MC Javier as the story continues. A great book for Romcom readers."

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I’m loving it!!

"The story is well paced and has a dynamic set of characters. Nothing better than finding something that has a great storyline and is well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and can’t wait for this to be completed so I can give an overall review. P.S. Dear author please don’t take too long. "

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A great read!

"From the beginning, the story has been intriguing. The plot is also interesting and it leaves you wanting more of what's to come. And I believe Javier will be in for a real character development with the way things are going for him. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update."

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A Target's Love

"A Target's Love is an intriguing story of a forbidden love between an assassin and his target. I love the strong-willed characters and seeing their dynamics with those around them. The author gives great detail revealing character thoughts and motivation. So far the interaction between the assassin and his target has been comedic and satisfying, since the assassin didn't expect her to put up a fight. I love how she challenged his cocky character with such a cool composure. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!!"

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Engaging read

"So far an engaging read. The characters are lively and three dimensional the story telling is solid and the writing skill is without fault. I am looking forward to reviewing more when its finished llol. The goals and motivations are spot on and the settings were lovely. It has heart and all around a very good presentation. Thank you for letting me read such a nice story!"

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Wonderful!

"I think this story is engaging, well written, and he’s mesmerizing characters that keep you wanting to know more about them, and their livelihood. I was extremely impressed by the storytelling, and i’m super excited to read more and review again after the story is completed. "

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