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"Wow. All I can say is wow, I can’t wait to see how this ends"

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My new absolute favorite book

""Hayes" has officially taken the top spot on my bookshelf. From the very first chapter, the plot had me completely hooked. The story is so full of unexpected twists and turns that I honestly couldn't put it down. Without giving too much away: I am so happy with how things turned out! He was my favorite for her from the very beginning."

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Wow

"I have and lived and breathed this book for the past few days that it has taken me to read. The story has consumed me in every way. Moria is a beautiful character, every character is amazing, your writing is wonderful and the epilogue made my day. Thank you for such a beautiful book and such beautifully honest and real love stories amongst all the fiction."

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Hayes

"I lived this story. I firmly believe that age doesn't matter as much as the maturity level of a person. You don't get to choose who you fall in love with, it just happens and YES, you CAN be in love with more than one person at a time. I didn't quite understand the ending of that, though. Did she die and see Erik in her afterlife or did Erik not get executed? Why wasn't Ty with her if she didn't die? Great book, but I'm a little confused. "

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Hayes

"Where to begin! This book had me hooked! Was an absolute amazing read! The ending had me balling ! But author i need to know is there a book to come of Moira and Erik’s new life because that would be very interesting ! But want to thank you for this story was such an amazing read 💕🫶 dont stop the good stories coming! I highly recommend this read!"

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Just beautiful

"The author has done it again! What a beautifully written story that is just so real. I was invested from the start, Moira is such an intriguing character you can't help but love her. The last few chapters were painful to read but I'm so glad she gets to live her life with the person who was truly right for her. Absolutely genius writing, this story will definitely be one that stays with me. I hope the author has more stories to come, the talent is simply amazing 💓"

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Hayes

"I'm currently reading chapter 8 but the fact that I don't wanna stop reading is proof that this book is 🔥. You're truly talented.❤️"

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Hayes

"The book is very interesting, I love how there are so many twist n turns between each character interacting with Moria "

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Hayes

"Great story. Covered loneliness, racism, abuse, rape, mental illness and infidelity and infinite love"

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HAYES

"It sucks they don't show pictures on the app. I saw the author was worried about the length on one of her wall posts and I love it. She puts out a lot of chapters when she publishes and the book is interesting because you see so many different perspectives but they all work together. She doesn't do too much or too little m2ition knows how to threat that needle and the age gap is big but somehow it works. It'd turn me off in any other book but shes so good at making you understand each character that you don't want to quit reading. "

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Spicy

"Back when "Hayes" was posted on Wattpad, I was one of its readers, and WP seemed to not fully appreciate the amount of work M2ition has put into this. Great plot, raunchy, and overall amazing writing. I was never a big fan of erotica, but M2ition's use of perfect grammar and an easily followable story makes "Hayes" a good read. "

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Wow - Just wow!

"I did not expect a thing that has happened in this book. It has such a crazy amount of hooks that made me binge the entire book in 1 day. The writer does this thing where she narrates adults and teens which makes the book deep. Initially I wasn't so sure about that age gap but you have to keep reading - after awhile it didn't bother me at all. I'm 100% invested in this book, it's genuinely the best I've ever read and genius writing. At chapter 32 I'm rooting for the age-gap to work out! I thought the sex scenes were perfectly written. They don't read as straight smut. Each has a reason they're not just thrown in there but they're also very detailed. Somehow that works. This is a book for someone who likes the idea of taboos but be prepared to get hit with some amazing hooks that give a hard reality check. "

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Good work

"I've read some of your works on wattpad so when I saw this I knew I had to give it a shot. Another amazing story, the age gap bothered me a little but you worked well with the chosen storyline. "

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HAYES

"This book is good. Really really good. The author wasn't kidding about switching things randomly. I've never read anything like this. Can't wait for more!"

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Hayes

"This is my new favorite book! I did not expect any of the twists at all! "

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Hayes

"I'm glad Moira got Nick atlast. They're so cute together. I have a question. How do you add pics between each chapters. I don't know how. "

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this!!

"I was sooooo excited to see m2ition continue to write this book! I love everything she writes! This is such a good twist on a teenager "figuring out her shit" - that's on her wattpad prologue before she took it down. It's cliche like some say but someone else said she put them in on purpose and that hit the nail on the head. You don't know what she's going to throw at you. It was hard to pick my favorite character. "

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HAYES

"This story is getting better and better. The age gap isn't weird. It's a big one but it's working, I'm loving Moira and Ty! That first chapter is crazy and then it started to read cliche but then the author threw in a hook I didn't expect. It's like they're putting in cliches on purpose, not purposely making a cliche story. I don't know how to explain it, the book is just really different. This author rocks when they post. It's several chapters at once that tie up a scene but then does something you don't expect again. I get tired of waiting for single chapter updates on books. I know when this one updates I'm going to get something interesting. "

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Hayes

"The author announced they were taking this book down from Wattpad to bring it here. I'm so glad I followed! Her other book isn't on here but if you guys like high school dramas she's not the one for you. What I like the most is she adds in adults and when she says taboo she really means it. Moira is about to get it on with that teacher 🤣 So far there's really good smut. And if this book is anything like her other it's going to get way dirtier. I can't wait! I do highly recommend m2ition and any of her books. The way she writes sucks you in. More chapters please!! 🙌"

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Love It

"I'm re-writing my review. Full disclosure I'm a big fan of m2ition on Wattpad so when she said she was moving her book here, I came to read it. She had 5 chapters posted there and that hooked me. There's another book she's written that she took down to my disappointment because she questioned her style. But what makes her unique is she doesn't stay in one genre. Right now, from what I can tell, this book is reading as a high school love novel yet she had a note on it on Wattpad that it isn't. She's going to bring in racial profiling, racism and police brutality. The age gap is really large. But this author pushes boundaries in subjects no one else does. Keep it up m2ition. HAYES is more than I expected and is as amazing as your other book. I can't wait for the next posts! "

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