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Mindless....Great story!

"I completely agree with the first review. The pace is perfect and really keeps the story careening toward it's excellent ending. The somewhat unusual writing style briefly lost me a few times, but it was worth it!"

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Mindless - one hell of a ride

"What I like the most about this story is it's fast pace, it hooks you right from the start. It kept me guessing until the end, it also gave me some ideas about future stories I'd like to write. Good job, keep on writing!"

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