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writing skills

"This chapter was so well written the emotions felt authentic and the characters were full of life"

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wonderfull explanation

"Hey Dear! The tension between Charlene and Roy, especially when he discovers he’s been kept from his daughter for eleven years, feels incredibly raw and emotional. Have you ever considered publishing this story as an eBook so more readers could experience that intensity?"

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Friday night lights

"What a great story,! I loved every minute of it ❤️ Thank you so much 😊"

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Another great story!

"This is th he second story I’ve read by this author. It’s a good story and again I a appreciate reading about charters their 40’s as opposed to high school stories. It’s a great read"

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Very good 👍

"This is a great book. I hope it is a second book 📖. "

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Book

"Good book xx"

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Loved

"This had a great plot and the reader gets to know the characters like you live in the same town. "

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Grabdmother

"Ŕealistic story Would pass it on to family members "

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Beautiful

"Hi Savannah, This novel is just amazing. The plot of the story was nice but a bit predictable but the beautiful end compensated with it. Looking forward for more from you. Love, Miss."

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Great story

"A few spelling errors. Good story line "

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Love it so mature and lovely

"It’s so mature and nice I love love it ❤️❤️❤️"

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Another Home Run!

"This is the second book i read by the author, and i loved it. I need to read more!"

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I really enjoyed it

"loved it!!!"

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I’m Hooked

"The plot is keeping me very entertained and excited to see where the next chapters take the characters "

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Friday night lights

"I loved the book.great creativity ."

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Good

"Good so far. Wish I could get to the end to review it tho"

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Short but touching story

"There’s something about the simplicity of this story that moves me - emotional wise. I could feel their loneliness, the longing, the hurt ... and it only took a few chapter. "

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TeamRoy

"Love it just needed a bit of work. I love Roy! He is my fave. "

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Interesting and well written

"I liked how the characters were flawed and had development. Really well written"

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