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Isabella receives a very evil letter…

"A girl named Isabella receives a letter, and the person who wrote the letter is claiming to be a murderer who the news has reported that law enforcement is trying to bring to justice. Is this letter actually written by the killer, and is there some way to figure out who this person is and get the person arrested? How will Isabella’s life change because of receiving the letter, and what will she do? I am 3 chapters into this book so far, and am really enjoying it. It’s very well written and has a very intriguing plot and interesting characters. I highly recommend this book, and I look forward to reading more of it!"

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The Masked Man

"Oh my goodness. I love how mysterious this is. I can't wait for the next chapters. I'm even scared for the character. How she could remain so calm when someone is threatening her is a mystery to me."

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What an astounding story!

"Your book is tremendous. Love the plot of the story and it's great for mystery lovers. The characters are also well composed. I love how Isabella is like her characteristics. She is brave and brawny. I too hope we will get along with each other. It is a delightful story. Keep it up!👍"

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A Promising Start

"I had the chance to chat a little with the author before reading this story. It's impressive and inspiring to go over such a young author's work. So far, the plot is intriguing. The characters are lightly introduced, and you get a feel for their appearances and attributes. I would love to see some scenes more detailed and fluffed so I can really feel like I'm trapped in the pages. I think the biggest thing to work on would be the grammar/punctuation, which at this point, isn't a big deal because even after reading over my "finished" work 50 times, I still find errors. I'm curious to see where the story goes. I'm not a professional writer, but I think the best advice I can give is to read, read, and read some more. It's the best way to learn the styles of writing you like and helps you develop your own style. Keep it up! "

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