What is your opinion?
Surviving hellhole
"I think it lame that I can't read the story entirely through when I want to set aside a story I will having to award you before closure seems like cheating fishing for ideas that's not cool the story is convincing and has my attention"
Compelling plot and dynamic relationship
"So far, interesting plot. Setting up the background and details to build up the character development and situations is a challenge indeed. Definitely worth the read. Hopefully updates are coming. "
Beautifully written
"This is a very good book. I hope you update this when you are able. ❤️"
Best book ever!
"Amazing book, the plot continues without gaps and repetitions! I will recommend it to my friends, perfect. author keep it up well done"
Raw Society
"A beautiful written story that makes me long for an update. The author has created great characters and an interesting and original plot line. Definitely worth a read."
The Raw Society
"I have known this writer for so long and each time she releases a book, it's always captivating and very well-written!"
Raw Society (Intrigued and can't wait for more)
"I had to rewrite my review and I'll most likely do it again as more chapters are added 😘 But I'm growing fonder and fonder of this book with each chapter. And it sucks because I can't give spoilers by talking about the characters. But... There is an element of surprises throughout. Oh my goodness! Please! I need more chapters! "
Visually Pleasing
"So far, my main take away from these chapters is the use of imagery. I can picture everything very clearly. As far as the plot goes, I definitely want to know how Ellen is going to react to her paired husband. Can't wait for more."
I love this book !
"Beautifully written and very compelling plot. I can’t wait to follow along Ellen and Ash’s journey. "
Raw Society
"Review of the first chapter: The descriptions were wonderful and painted vivid pictures in my mind. The premise is intriguing, and I felt the injustice of her fate. I found no mechanical errors, which hints towards the book’s high quality. However, the opening is not as strong as it could be. The paragraph that describes the dark elements of the town is much more compelling than the first paragraph, so you may want to open with that, then fill in the picturesque details later. In addition, we learn very little of the protagonist’s character in the first chapter, as she says and does almost nothing. A bit of conversation or actions with townspeople before her abduction would be very helpful in establishing her persona, and make readers care more about her. Self-description beyond her professional would also be welcome. Even better would be other people referring to her appearance in conversation. "
Beautiful work
"I am loving it so much "
