Noon - Book 1 of "The Dark Deception"
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Noon - Book 1 of "The Dark Deception"

This story contains themes of: depression, extreme violence gore, eating disorders, drug use overdose

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Asta is a girl who has little memory of her past. She loves playing erotic games and dreams of sexual activities. Will Asta be able to hide her secret from her mysterious partner? Or will she get killed an in agonizing death?

Genre
Mystery,Scifi
Author
Jean
Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chpt.1 "A new interest"

Asta is a girl who has erotic dreams. She dreams of doing it with a boyfriend she doesn't have. She loves games and is popular in a band. She is also mysterious... Suspiciously mysterious...

Asta:

My life is nothing special at one glance. But it's so much more than one look. At one moment, I'm selling expensive cars I could never dream to buy, and the next, I'm the lead guitarist in a popular band. I make enough money as is, it supports me and my dog, but nobody says dreams aren't possible, right? One day at work while I was day-dreaming having a boyfriend, a hot looking guy shows up at the store wanting to buy a car. "Hello, sir. What is in your best interest today?" I say. I look up at him and he just stares at me. Now I'm no narcissist but I am pretty cute and beautiful. But there was no way he was looking at me for my looks, right? "I love how you look, butterfly." ECK, he called me BUTTERFLY, how gross! "What do you need" I say. "Stop with the attitude, girl. I know what you are" he says as he slams the desk. This guy gave me chills already, but now I'm freaking out! "w-what am I" I say, wanting to know if he knows the truth. "A cute, car dealer and guitarist" he says firmly, like he achieved something. "Get out." I say, as the manager walks in. "Is this guy bothering you?" He says, stern and fierce. Nobody knows his name so we all call him Manager. "Y-yes manger" I say, meekly. "Get out of our prestigious store if you're going to harass our staff" he said, mean and fiercely. "I-uh just wanted a... car?" The man stumbled over his words, obviously scared like a pussy. "Get. Out." Manager says. "Uh, my uh car is uh acting up, uh gotta run!" The man hurriedly says as he runs away. "Thank you manager, thank you"

Let Jean know what you thought about this chapter!

Jean
Jean

How did you guys like it

4 years
1
Jean
Jean

Chapter 2 is in the works!

4 years

Further Recommendations

Learning to Love

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
One Way To Live Is To Make A Zombie Fall For You

Emily012: Fiona’s fear and resilience shine brilliantly.

Read Now
In the grip of the Alien

iswariya: Plot and writing style are good but at some places we cant avoid feeling like the story is dragging. It would.be good if more spicy things are added in plot to keep the readers captured.

Read Now
The First She (Ezron #1) - 2026 Rewrite

CINNAZEN: I loved this book. I’m starting on book two and I’m confused because they talk about her being pregnant in the third chapter after they set off on their way to the new location BUT in this book she’s bleeding and not sure if she’s even pregnant? So that’s one of the things that’s confusing. It doesn...

Read Now
Vespera Rising

Elisa_sims: Hey! Sorry if I'm bothering you by reaching out here.I'm Elisa Sims, a fellow reader. I came across your story and wanted to ask if you'd ever be interested in custom artwork, concept art or illustrations for it. I love helping authors bring their worlds to life and visuals can be a great way to att...

Read Now
Taste of Passion

ohoney2004: I enjoyed this novel. I liked the different characters and the story line was interesting as well.

Read Now
The Mafia Don’s Alien Princess

Ninjawitch17: As USUAL ..I am your number one fan...Read every page in one sitting...and DISAPPOINTED it ends..i am committed to every single one of your stories and love every one...The ones that are finished...i have finished...the others..i wait ✋️ 😀 Thank you..

Read Now
THE YIELD

datenshi: I honestly had the best time reading this book. The characters won me over almost instantly with their instant chemistry and banter, which were easily some of my favourite elements. I found myself laughing out loud more times than I can count, all while getting more and more invested in their story ...

Read Now