What is your opinion?
Appreciation and Commission Request
"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "
Amazing
"So far the chapters and the setting are really cool ! I really love the characters and the names given to each of them and to their tribes ! I thought it was really cool. Love the main character's sister, she does seem very manipulative and narcissistic. Love it !"
Astounding work!
"This is actually a plot and story type that Ive come across. Actually in the beginning ai didn't expect it to be great at all, but after two chapters it became really addictive and intriguing. I enjoyed reading this one. "
Great Stars
"Author Luca H.L. Has created a unique new mythology, at least it’s new to me. While only to chapter 4 so far, it’s impossible to tell yet how deeply and far this mythology extends. Are these characters named for stars or are these characters actually celestial objects? Hopefully the story will continue and we’ll get to find out more. The suspense in palpable and keeps the reader scrolling & turning the pages. It will be so interesting to see where things go from here. I have a feeling that the protagonist will come into her own when she dazzles as her next incarnation of a celestial being. I also hope that her half-sister may eventually realize the error of her selfish ways!"
Moon
"I have enjoyed this book from the get go and I'm hooked. It's very well written and descriptive. I can't wait for more chapters. An amazing book so far for sure. 🥰 When will you be adding more chapters so I can make sure to come over and read them? I'm excited to see what happens next! 🥰"
Xll Moons
"I really liked the world building, moving through the geographical areas was a treat. I also appreciate the pacing of your storytelling. Is this a more romance based fantasy plot? I really do hope it's balanced with an exploration of the evil half sister's perspective, and hope to experience even more of the 12 tribes/cities/moons described. Keep it coming though!"
