What is your opinion?
Spell-Binding!
"I was immediately hooked on this one! It pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading. It started off with apathy and anger, but the end sort of just pulls everything together and gives the reader a sense of hope, however small. Maybe that's just the amount the main character needed to keep going? I don't know. But what I DO know is that is an amazing piece of work!"
Really Nice!
"Really nice! Very nice writing. One thing I'd recommend in the latter half of the chapter (maybe the latter two thirds) is a little more inner monologue (thoughts of main character) but that's just my style. Beautifully written and similar in style to my one-chapter work (about the size of yours) Ode To Trump https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/163056 please check it out and review :) thanks :) Good luck and finish this! It stands on its own as a remarkable piece! The flow is perfect."
The Solution
"This was a really short story, that a lot of people should take the time to read. As you get to know the two characters, what brought them there, it's a very compelling story. Very powerful. I didn't notice any grammar or punctuation mistakes, and since it was a short story, the plot was easy to follow. Best of luck with your future works! Can't wait to read them!"
