Inkitt
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Happy not ecstatic

"I loved the plot and the overall storyline. There were just entirely too many grammatical errors. Some In places that caused the sentence or paragraph to not make any sense! I had to guess what was trying to be said. Good story otherwise. Just utilize Grammarly or spellcheck before publication. "

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Just too cute

"Such a cute story, not too predictable, and a great pace!"

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I LLLLLLLOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEE THIS

"Im in love with this book I literally cried when I got to the end of the book . And I need more books like this please make more "

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Good

"The book was extraordinary please write book 2 i think the story is incomplete "

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Good

"Good story "

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We find love

"Very good few printig errors love it"

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Great plot and writing

"Well written You used your own voice Plot and characters were believable You left a lot to imagination, which is what books are about 10 stars all round Love love this book!!! 🥰😘"

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Indecision

"Rae is a beam of sunshine in Orton's and Emry's life. She brought meaning into their lives while their clueless father couldn't get anything done. "

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We find love

"Loved the book but it's incomplete..... is there going to be a 2nd book? What did Matilda have to say?"

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It was good

"I enjoyed it although it was a short story and came to an end abruptly...i would have loved to know more about the children how they feel and how are they keeping up, misha progress in being a better father. but all in all its was great story. "

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We Find Love

"Not 100% sure how I feel about this book. Loved the relationship the nanny and the children had. But the relationship the father of the kids and the nanny were trying to have. I don’t know it just wasn’t flowing right. To many things going on. Not enough fight for the nanny from the father. Once their relationship was finally starting the book was ending. "

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