My thoughts

"This is an interesting story at best, but what really stops from being an amazing story is the writing. Now while it is readable it would have been much better to make it smoother. For instance, there was a lot of simple sentences in your writing that made it feel robotic in a way. So instead of saying,”Kat walk into her new school. She changed her name to Audrie to Kat. She hoped no one will notice.” The sentences are readable and makes sense, but it sounds choppy or cut unevenly. I would recommend stringy Steve sentences together or to add more details between them. But all in all a good story."