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Hidden in Plain Sight (Working title)

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Summary

(NEED HELP WITH A BETTER TITLE!) Audrie tries to live the normal life of a human. One problem: She's not a human. She's a "creature" as the humans call her. Personally, she doesn't think it's fair. A normal human during the day she's constantly hunted at night. Her wings and sharp claws make her an abomination. That and the fact that her kind was known to attack people. So, technically the humans had some right to hunt them down. But still... Join Audrie on her adventure through her life. With ups and downs and contant danger around every corner Audrie finds out who she can trust... And who she can't. And Avery, who knows Audrie's secret but how does she know she can trust her?

Status
Complete
Chapters
15
Rating
3.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Info

Creatures:

Humans: (everyone reading probably knows what a human is - Keety)

Creatures: humans with jet-black wings and two-three-inch claws. They can sheathe and unsheathe their claws like a cat

Angels: humans with pure white wings

Characters:

Audrie: a sarcastic girl who's confident but doesn't trust easily, Kat's creature form

Wears: usually skirts or jeans and long-sleeved shirts

Kat: a sarcastic girl who doesn't trust anyone around her and usually keeps to herself, Audrie's human form

Wears: Same as Audrie

Amanda: A confident girl who is often rude and protective, human

Wears: jeans and plain tee-shirts, usually wears the same bracelet and headband every day.

Avery: a shy girl who stands by one rule: trust no one, if she is all shy and innocent she won't seem worth it, Avery's human and angel form

Wears: baggy pants and sweaters or sweatshirts with hoods

Riley: A bubbly love creature who is kind and happy, Riley's creature form, doesn't remember being in human form... Ever...

Wears: pink dress and red shoes

Willow: an angel who is kind and happy, Ashley's creature form

Wears: jeans and sweaters

Ashley: same as Willow, Willow's human form

Wears: same as Willow

Midnight: a shy night creature with a forgotten human form

Wears: hoodies and jeans

Matt: a creature that likes to joke around, Avery doesn't like him, Kay's creature form

Wears: long-sleeved shirts and jeans

Kay: Same as Matt, Matt's human form

Wears: same as Matt

Daisy: A kind human who runs the sanctuary

Mike: A kind and confident human who runs the sanctuary

Places:

Avery's Weeping Willow: a huge weeping willow tree with hanging branches that hide her root home from the world. Has huge roots with a hole in the earth beneath them. Avery uses this hole to sleep and a hole she dug in the side of it to store food

The school: a four-level building with a bunch of classrooms. Has a big outside area for students to go to during lunch.

Audrie's home: a fallen redwood. The inside is mostly gone and the only way in is a hole where between the roots of it that's concealed by roots, bushes, and vines. Has a small hole that leads into a hollow in another tree where Audrie stores all her things.

The sanctuary: a safe place for angels and creatures. Run by humans. The main section is a huge room made to feel like the outside world. It has grass and a redwood trunk slightly smaller than Audrie's. It has a river with a huge rock sticking out of it and willows lining both sides. Lights hang from the ceiling. It also has a big courtyard surrounded by black bars on all sides and a ceiling of the same bars. It is outside. Then the sanctuary has a cafeteria that isn't big. It has five tables including one in the corner where the angels and creatures eat.

NOTE: This chapter updates as the story goes.

WARNING: Swearing and half-swearing

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what's a human?

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