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Become Hooked Contest 2023

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Summary

Welcome to the third edition of the Become Hooked Contest. Focusing on a story's first chapter, the contest will take a hybrid form this year, including editing and judging. In the first round, the entry chapters will receive a full developmental edit for the participant to consider and implement in a new draft. The new, edited version will then be judged by Will Nuessle. There will be 15 entry-slots available! Call for Entries starts June 1st, 2023 at 9 p.m. CET (3 p.m. EST)

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Welcome

Welcome to the third edition of the Become Hooked Contest. Focusing on a story’s first chapter, the contest will take a hybrid form this year, including editing and judging.

In the first round, the entry chapters will receive a full developmental edit from Vanessa M.D. for the participant to consider and implement in a new draft.

The new, edited version will then be judged by Will Nuessle.

As a result, the participant has the opportunity to gain experience by working with their texts seen through the lens of an editor. The suggestions should provide solutions by identifying big-picture storytelling issues regarding plot, story, characterization, structure, tension, theme, genre, and narrative style, and consequently help the writer craft hooking first lines and pages.

Slots available: 15. There will be a waiting list.

Call for Entries starts June 1st, 2023, 9 p.m. CEST (3 p.m. EST)

Let Vanessa_MD know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

8

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

1

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

*Me, sitting in front of the computer with my finger hovering over "Enter" at exactly 8:59pm CEST, June 1st, 2023*

3 years
2

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