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Nice Read

"So far, the story is a very interesting one. If you enjoy reading stories about magic and witches, you would definitely enjoy this. There are some scenes though, that are too fast paced. The characters are in one place and suddenly appear in another. It doesn't affect the story line, but it does confuse me a bit when I'm reading. Apart from that, it is totally okay. Well done!"

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