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Compelling plot

"Good book, sometimes she goes on a little too long on descriptions. But a good book. "

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Good story so far

"I am intrigued to the story and I thinks it’s a good read. Can’t wait to read more"

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Love it

"I absolutely love this book. Just when you think you know what's coming the plot changes. Keep up the great job"

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Great book but quiet the tease.

"This was an amazing book, the characters, plot, and writing was all amazing. None of the characters felt flat and the conflicts that arise are amazing! But it is such a tease, i expected at least one scene but I hear that the book is ongoing so I look forward to updates!"

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Sisters!

"While it's different from what I usually read it was a good different. It was a great start to a complicated story about sisters lol. Nothing incestuous happened yet, but since it will I won't be continuing however, this was a well-written book with an engaging plot and a spanking main character in Fiona lol. I'm glad to have read so far and do I sense some jealousy from Dania? Maybe a menage a trois is in the works lol?"

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Not My Usual Read

"But still very good. Not finished at the time of writing this, I'm left to wonder for now how the story will unfold. There is a clear understanding of action through your descriptions that make it a very compelling story. I know little of what each person looks like, but there are small details as the story goes that gives me more clues so I can easily imagine it."

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A Very Entertaining Story

"I don't know who I would recommend this book to other than my Twitter roleplay groups. I would have given it all fives but it didn't really have enough sex for me and I was a little disappointed when they didn't have sex. I did however enjoy the themes of corruption, ownership, and domination which really gave it a sense of realism. Well done, I really look forward to the sequel! "

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Good reading

"Some of the words are unknown to me since English is my second language. I feel sometimes the writer take to long to get to the point."

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Ok Story

"It's an ok story but seems to drag certain things out to long. The plot seems to take a second seat in some chapters."

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I own you now sis

"I'm not sure about this plot as of yet. It's a bit Unusual comma cruel and too long lingering."

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I own you now, sis

"This book was not what I expected. I did not expect there to be slaves etc "

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