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Intriguing story

"The beginning of this itself was a good way to get readers sucked in and wondering about not only the Imara family, but who would have such a grudge against them and why. Each family member has their own distinct personality which comes out more and more in each chapter. Overall, spelling and grammar were rather good. The way some of the sentences were written seemed a little odd to me, like starting them out with something similar to "So then she did this." It almost felt like a role play where each little act was spelled out instead of allowing us to fill in the small gaps on our own with common sense. By the last chapters written though, there's more than enough conflict and suspense to wonder what's going on and who is behind these attacks. "

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It was a great read, can't wait to read the rest of it

"Loved everything about it"

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