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Amazing dialogue

"Thank you for sharing your wonderful talented writing with us readers. Looking forward to reading more of your work."

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Checking you out

"Great story…enjoyable easy read"

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Short and sweet

"Enjoyed that the author uses simple language- sometimes one just wants to read something and not have to decipher figures of speech or use a dictionary- lol. The plot moves along at lightening speed, and while I personally prefer lengthier stories, if you’re looking for a short, lighthearted and easy read that has no dizzying twists and turns, ‘Checking You Out ‘ is that. P.S- Would have liked for Jake to have more of a back story. "

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Checking you out

"I rally liked this story! Your writing is good, but I would prefer things didn’t move along so fast!"

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Cute

"Really cute short story with some sexy time included "

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Checking You Out

"Well, that was just lovely from start to finish. Since finding Inkitt I am coming to really appreciate a well written short story. This one had everything that one could wish for and left me with a happy smile on my face. Kudos to the author and may you get inspration to write many more in the same vein. Oh, and I love the way you write sex, Panaflora. It's seriously erotic without being in any way crude or uncomfortable to read."

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💜💜

"The MCs are really cute. Such an adorable short story 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜"

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Another good one!

"I just can't have enough of this author's short stories. You can read them in one day and they leave you with a smile at the end. Definitely recommend her!"

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Checking you out

"Another pleasantly wrapped up story with a nice little bow! This authors stories flow nicely with just the right amount of everything. A lot of romance and happiness with a splash of drama and spice and everything nice!"

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Checking you out

"Another amazing story 💕 I love your writing ❤️"

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Checking you out

"A wonderful , lighthearted but interesting romance that is a very enjoyable read. "

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Checking you out - I'll take the red one

"The author created a good short story, with good characters. An enjoyable read."

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Checking you Out

"Great love story. It states how you can’t always judge other people from past experiences and have to go with the the gut"

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Cute, short read

"This was a cute, short read. The character development was very sweet and thoughtful. Highly recommend!"

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Checking You Out

"Ugh, as always your story is awesome as hell!! Never fail to bring me to good mood!! I usually only able to come across 2 out of 20 writers with similar style as yours!! Pls keep writing!!"

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Checking you out

"A delightful love story, with plenty of rich details of cooking, decorating, gardening, and of course, sex! Well written with excellent flow. "

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