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Good story!

"I like this story - well written, good characters "

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Like

"I am seriously enjoying this book very well.Written good plot good strong characters"

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Bear & Birdie

"Awesome read"

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Bear

"This book is enjoyable "

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Bear

"This was a great read. The plot was well written and the characters were so interesting and charismatic."

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Niiiive

"This was good but Yyyyy the cliffhanger 😭😭💕💕🥺🥺"

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Bear

"Anyone familiar with bikers and their dedication to their clubs and brothers can easily identify with this story. It's a well-written story of developing love between two complete opposites filled with action that draws you in from the very beginning, making it hard to put it down. I found this story so realistic, and the characters well thought out. I enjoyed everything about this book and hated to see it end - ever so sweetly. In my opinion, this book is a MUST-READ! ⚘️"

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Bear 🩺🤎💙

"Surprisingly interesting, different from majority MC writings (style? method? something enjoyably different), but definitely enjoyed 🙂 🖤Looking forward to more for this MC🖤 "

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NannaC

"All I got to say is ROAR!!!!!"

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Keep up the story

"Enjoying your work."

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Bear

"Throughly enjoyed this story. Is the end or will there be more to come? I certainly hope there is more"

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Bear

"Love the story hope you are okay and finish the book. But I’ll be here when y come back "

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Bear

"Love this book and don't leave me to long.very interesting book "

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Good so far

"My niece would like it and I like that it keeps moving along "

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Bear

"The story so far has been interesting..Hope that it gets more into how the two are in their personal lifes."

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Bear

"I hope the story get soon more chapters😊 I love how the story is!"

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Biker

"The characters have a nice chemistry not over the top "

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Bear

"Like reading this story so far. I can see that this story going more what happening in thier town with drugs. I can wait to see what happen to Roben and Bear. Will they stay together or it destroy their relationship. "

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Definite confusion, but interesting

"It's hard to know where this book is supposed to take place. It has a mix of American and British dialects. For example, within two-three chapters, the author used A&E, ER, and oddly a mix of both, being E&R to describe the emergency room arca hospital. The author forgets character details. A few times they mention Bear having blond hair and being a Viking in his features, then later on he has dark hair. Same with eyes. They're "oceanic" then they're dark, then back to blue. This happens with Birdie as well. She goes from brown, to dark hazel, then back to brown. Most egregiously with her though, is that her profession continually changes from doctor to nurse. Sometimes within just a couple paragraphs. There's a huge difference between the two. They're not interchangeable. There are also some grammar and punctuation issues. Words are missing or changed from what they should be. Sometimes punctuation is missing all together. I think this book has the potential to be good, but these details need to be addressed."

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