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The Magician by M.L. Smith

"I wish they would make just a complete novel Every character is unique and their stories are interesting. I would get lost in the world of kinky's Carnival and the different characters. "

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Gavin’s origin story

"I love it. A shy incubus omg "

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Tha magician

"Loved this. Please write more. Gavin is amazing. I can't wait for more about the carnival."

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Enjoy

"I really like the style of writing. It’s done well and is so much better than a lot of the others out there. I hope you keep writing this storyline! Maybe how each character came to be at Kinky’s?"

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Mysterious Erotic Entertaining

"A wickedly erotic and funny story with a surprising twist ❤️ "

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THE MAGICIAN

"This was a very hot and amazing book to read. Thank you for writing this book 💜 ❤️ "

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Wow

"Writing is amazing sexy story author knows how to add subtle things to her words that align with the series"

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Good

"Well written "

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🎩The Magician🪄

"😈 Fan-F*cking-Tastic 💋💋💋💋💋 📚Keep Them Cuming 🎪💙💋💙😈"

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Kinky to Perfection

"Another book from Kinky's and I have to say, I love it! Gavin was fantastically written, and I really enjoyed him as a character. I felt the story balanced out equal parts spice and fun. And I LOVE how it hints at magic just enough to make it tantalising before delving into the mayhem. ;) As always, M.L writes like a pro and I am blown away by her talent. She says she gets nervous writing! I have no idea why - she is so damn good. I can see the odd area in need of an edit (but that's an occupational hazard LOL). Otherwise, the flow and plot is fun, exciting and, as always, kinky. I can't wait to read the next installment!!"

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The Magician

"Ooohhhh I do like me a Demon 😈👹 As always exceptional writing and attention to detail, a deliciously warped imagination that delivers every time "

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The Magician

"This was an intriguing and unique read ever! I love the author's imagination. I'm really enjoying Kinky's Carnival and all the characters that "cum" with it. I'm wondering what that says about me 😬 🤣 I feel like I need more in this series!! "

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The Magician

"OMG you've done it again and I'm so beyond Ecstatic wanting more. The Circus "Kinky Carnival" Gavin and Rebekah (Hope I spelled it like you did in the story) are going to be a Welcomed addition. Gavin is Amazing 🤩🥰😘 Can't wait for more, you're an Awesome Writer 💕"

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Great work

"I think you know perfectly well why you are writing these series, and I'm thankful for that. Great work. Please, keep going."

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The Magician

"Love learning about the characters in the carnival. Looking forward to the next book in July and then revisiting the first book and seeing it all in a new light! "

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Interesting to say the least

"Good short read. What a cure"

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The Magician

"Welcome to the wonderful world of this authors vivid imagination! If you love erotic fantasy then this short story will definitely hit “ the spot” and, I will definitely be delving into the rest of this authors books and join the circus. "

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Loved it

"🥰🥰🥰😘❤️❤️ 😘😘😘"

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ML is always a must read!

"I loved the male POV! And loves the plot twist at the end - I didn’t expect such a short story to have one but leave it to this author to sneak one in anyway! The scenes were nice and spicy 🌶️ 💋 🔥 "

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The Magician

"Funny, Steamy and Smoking Fucking Hot. A short story that see's Gavin go from a virgin to a stud.. Short but good 🤣😂🤣♨️🚬🔥🫶👍🏻👏🏻💘🎣😍🇦🇺 "

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