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One night stand

" Iove the story it can catch of someone I highly recommend this story "

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One night only

"I really enjoyed this book. Gramatical error and my only complain. Love the story and the alternative ending more than the first ending. Good job. I will not read the new book unity complete because I do t have patience. Can't with for it to be completed so I can read it. "

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One Night Only

"The storyline is very good lots of real-life plots If more men were as elated as Dalton to be dads this world would be a better place. "

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One Night Only

"Overall great story with a lot of ups and downs. Never wanted to put it down. Excellent writing style as well. "

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Loved it

"Beautiful story. "

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On me Night Only

"I loved the plot. It was intriguing, a little mystery, a lot of romance and family issues. The king and queen where horrible and vindictive indiviuaps. There are people out in the world like this but I thank God for his love. Do really have to use so many cuss words to get your point over?"

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On me Night Only

"I loved the plot. It was intriguing, a little mystery, a lot of romance and family issues. The king and queen where horrible and vindictive indiviuaps. There are people out in the world like this but I thank God for his love. Do really have to use so many cuss words to get your point over?"

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Book

"Great book, interested too see where the story leads too"

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One night

"Very interesting novel. "

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Great writing 👍🏼

"I loved the whole story and the way Dalton's character matured gradually!! Plus I liked the alternative ending more♥️"

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Really Good

"The overall outtake of the story was very well thought of, it all came together really well and it worked beautifully. Your description of how the characters felt really got my attention and I couldn't put the book down once I started. I was gripped, it almost got to a point that I thought they would live happily ever after, but something always got in the way and that's what made it much more interesting. The only thing that I have to say is that the POV points could be a bit more clearer, maybe it would of been better if the POV was each chapter? Ok, it may have made your chapters shorter, but I don't think it'll be a problem. I've seen from other reviews/comments that the child acted a bit more older than the age she was stated and I agree with that. I don't think it would of mattered if they met again 4 or 5 years later after she was born, it wouldn't change the story too much. A couple of grammar mistakes but easy to understand what you were implying. Thank you for creating this and wish you all the best."

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Cliché love story

"Good love story and i liked it. I will definitely refer to my friends to read this story "

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One night only

"One word only Woooooowww"

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One night

"It's a captivating story with a wonderful love story. I love Dalton because he's such a gentleman whose love is genuine. I would recommend it to anyone. It's a great read. "

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I love it

"I really love the story .. the just turned three year old is more like a five year old but appart from that I really love it"

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One night only

"I loved this story i loved the plote and just everything about it. I could not stop binge reading it."

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2 thumbs up

"Love the story"

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One Night Only

"Would’ve given over all novel a 5 but just too many grammatical mistakes, just needed an editor. If u r a young writer u have a great future ahead of u!"

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One night only

"Nothing not to like but there were a lot of spelling mistakes though. "

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Okay

"Good story but grammatical errors and spelling is poor. Needs rereading and proofing but has potential"

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